Raman - Page 34

Originally posted by: -K.13-

The teacher was nicer - but it essentially was along the lines of you write well when it comes to analytic pieces & I can tell you are strong in the style of scientific writing, but you need to stretch a little more with your writing and thoughts for creative pieces or some feedback like that 🤣

Originally posted by: Jinan_R

Hey I thought ur gonna help me pester Prabh.

But u started planning to pester me?😲

Stop thinking about that and help me pester Prabh for now.😈

Prabh's already working hard to get the SS I love so much updated so today I will go easy on her and encourage you 😈 😆

Originally posted by: -K.13-

Prabh's already working hard to get the SS I love so much updated so today I will go easy on her and encourage you 😈 😆

I want Jinan or Krishy, or both to write a story! Pretty pleeasse! 😳

Here's a bit of my unedited PutWi and PJ2 writing -

A G2P1001 recently delivered a healthy baby boy at 39 weeks, 4 days. He weighed 8 pounds and was 20 inches in length. The father of the child, Raman, was so giddy upon baby boy Bhalla's arrival that after gaining consciousness from passing out during placental delivery, he distributed sweets to the entire hospital and made a huge donation to the hospital in honor of his wife Dr. Ishita Bhalla. Mom and baby did well after delivery and were discharged day 2 post-partum to their excited family!

Upon arrival at home, the matriachs of the Bhalla and Iyer homes did a pooja of Ishita & Baby Boy Bhalla. All the family took turns holding the baby but Raman was hoovering around making sure everyone sanitized their hands prior to holding the baby. Ishita smiled happily seeing her husband run amuck at home. Finally Raman saw Ishita looked tired & ordered her and Baby Boy Bhalla to be sent to their rooms while the rest of the family planned the baby's naming ceremony.

Upon entry to their room, Ishita was surprised when she saw Raman had decorated everything with balloons & toys. They laid the baby in the crib, and Raman blind folded his wife.

Ishita started to ask him what he was up to, and he said chup. He lead her to the bathroom where there were candles lit everywhere, bouquets of flowers dispersed, and a giant, welcoming bubble bath with the aroma of lavender...

--

My teacher would be so proud of how far I've come 🤣

Originally posted by: -K.13-

Here's a bit of my unedited PutWi and PJ2 writing -

A G2P1001 recently delivered a healthy baby boy at 39 weeks, 4 days. He weighed 8 pounds and was 20 inches in length. The father of the child, Raman, was so giddy upon baby boy Bhalla's arrival that after gaining consciousness from passing out during placental delivery, he distributed sweets to the entire hospital and made a huge donation to the hospital in honor of his wife Dr. Ishita Bhalla. Mom and baby did well after delivery and were discharged day 2 post-partum to their excited family!

Upon arrival at home, the matriachs of the Bhalla and Iyer homes did a pooja of Ishita & Baby Boy Bhalla. All the family took turns holding the baby but Raman was hoovering around making sure everyone sanitized their hands prior to holding the baby. Ishita smiled happily seeing her husband run amuck at home. Finally Raman saw Ishita looked tired & ordered her and Baby Boy Bhalla to be sent to their rooms while the rest of the family planned the baby's naming ceremony.

Upon entry to their room, Ishita was surprised when she saw Raman had decorated everything with balloons & toys. They laid the baby in the crib, and Raman blind folded his wife.

Ishita started to ask him what he was up to, and he said chup. He lead her to the bathroom where there were candles lit everywhere, bouquets of flowers dispersed, and a giant, welcoming bubble bath with the aroma of lavender...

--

My teacher would be so proud of how far I've come 🤣

Originally posted by: -K.13-

Here's a bit of my unedited PutWi and PJ2 writing -

A G2P1001 recently delivered a healthy baby boy at 39 weeks, 4 days. He weighed 8 pounds and was 20 inches in length. The father of the child, Raman, was so giddy upon baby boy Bhalla's arrival that after gaining consciousness from passing out during placental delivery, he distributed sweets to the entire hospital and made a huge donation to the hospital in honor of his wife Dr. Ishita Bhalla. Mom and baby did well after delivery and were discharged day 2 post-partum to their excited family!

Upon arrival at home, the matriachs of the Bhalla and Iyer homes did a pooja of Ishita & Baby Boy Bhalla. All the family took turns holding the baby but Raman was hoovering around making sure everyone sanitized their hands prior to holding the baby. Ishita smiled happily seeing her husband run amuck at home. Finally Raman saw Ishita looked tired & ordered her and Baby Boy Bhalla to be sent to their rooms while the rest of the family planned the baby's naming ceremony.

Upon entry to their room, Ishita was surprised when she saw Raman had decorated everything with balloons & toys. They laid the baby in the crib, and Raman blind folded his wife.

Ishita started to ask him what he was up to, and he said chup. He lead her to the bathroom where there were candles lit everywhere, bouquets of flowers dispersed, and a giant, welcoming bubble bath with the aroma of lavender...

--

My teacher would be so proud of how far I've come 🤣

Originally posted by: Prabh.

You did this on purpose, didn't you?😆But this is my fault, I asked a doc to write on a baby's arrival, bad idea!😆But I love the ending Krishy, especially the bold bit!😳You can write, I know you can, that last bit gave it away!😳

Hehe see I'm a dry writer but I'm also a fast learner 😉

Originally posted by: -K.13-

Hehe see I'm a dry writer but I'm also a fast learner 😉

Originally posted by: Jinan_R

First of all, u write really well👏

But so many medical terms🤣

Any ways I loved the last part.😳

Bad timing to stop writing. I want the full update now.😃

Do you want the scientific talk of what Ishita wanted to happen but Raman wouldn't allow bc doctor's orders postpartum = no full blown sexy time for a few weeks? 🤣