IshRa OS: Good night, or Good Bye? (June 30) (Updated) - Page 4

Originally posted by: gargpoo

Its superb..
He kissed her bt she ws numb ...
Then golden memory pics..nostalgia..
Now she initiated the incomplete kiss...
Loved it..
Keep writing nidoo

Originally posted by: -Anku-

Nids ☺️☺️☺️☺️ THAT WAS ...I am speechless.

I'm glad you are ☺️ ☺️

I say this for all of your One shots and I am not buttering or flattering you. But indeed, with every next story you surpass the earlier one. This indeed is one of your best...for many reasons. One because of how again you've added something new, something creative again by incorporating pictures and old memories by not just mentioning but them going through them and remembering and reminiscing them so vividly. It made me so emotional and happy all at the same time...as were they. Even though you didn't describe their emotions at every memory.. one could almost visualize how they must be at that moment. Smiling at the beauty of their past and pained at the state of their present...

I'm glad again that it helped visualize the story more clearly 😳 Because KP-DT's faces at each and every scene are as important as the words that depict them, and by looking at the pictures, we can instantly connect as to how would they react to the written situation 😳

The kisses, the passion the physical closeness was weaved in so perfectly. It wasn't one bit unnatural or lusty. The kiss was something so natural, a moment they would share voluntarily when they had been together 7 years ago...This moment would have been a fleeting one among many such others. But here it was something that bring in a deluge of emotions to face. They would be drawn in because of each others touch and closeness, reminding them of the relation they share and that they are so perfect together that they can't let go. They weren't sorry or embarrassed, they were scared. Scared to form that involvement and attachment that would be hard to get over had they to part again. I love how Ishita wasn't embarassed but scared. Raman wasn't sorry but was only intrigued or nervous that Ishita had forgotten his tough... had turned cold to it...

@red - Nailed it there! 👏

And the final moment, when they just let go...leave aside the barriers or hesitance stopping them and let the love they have for each other overpower. How beautiful it was that the memories they ran from, finally bought them close...

In my mind, it was like it was just meant to happen 😳

A very very apt title. One doesn't know if its the good bye kiss of good night because their future is so uncertain. But as we know and they do too...there is no Ishita without Raman and vice versa...

True ❤️

P.S - I don't say this just because you are such a close friend. But I say it because its true. You're the best 😳 You bring out IshRa the way no one does

Originally posted by: Zoyamalik2005

This was amazing. Amazing.

I wish I could tell you more but I'm away in ishra land.😳

So it's your own fault😆

Originally posted by: swatica

Totally speechless...

cant say anythng..

JUST NYC..👏

Originally posted by: -K.13-

As always...lovely story, Nids! You capture IshRa in such a way I don't think even the CVs can!

Love your recent inspiration or re-directing that lead to these OSes!

Originally posted by: Albeli26

the only word I had, amazing!!!!!!
I wonder how I didn't came across with your writings but I must say u are fabulous. the way you captured them in these two parts is beautiful and as well as heart touching too
their moments was the best thing to read
hope to read more from you
thanks for PM 😊

Originally posted by: lerinim

There is something something special in your stories nidoo..I don't know how to express. But yes something is there...I'm not buttering you.but struggling hard to say what exactly I felt just after finished reading your 3 os in a go..

Do write more and more..I'm addicted to them

Thank you..

Love from Sri Lanka

Originally posted by: Mdwst

Wonderful
Left us cliffhanging

Originally posted by: Divek-ishra

Both part r lovely..

Loved it

Originally posted by: traveller_girl

This was Amazing

Loveddd it

Tooo good