IshRa OS: Good night, or Good Bye? (June 30) (Updated)

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Nidoo

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Posted: 9 years ago

An OS a day keeps the sanity away 😆 😆

I seem to have perfected this motto in my life these days 🤪 It's no surprise that I wrote once again. Will they stop the lollipops please?

Anyways coming to this one shot, it is inspired from the aftermath of Raman - Romi's fight, when Ishita is taking care of Raman. I got pretty excited when I saw the segments a couple days ago, but the scene in the episode was too cold. So here's my take on it.

I also seem to be writing more and more each time 😆 Surpassing yesterday's OS, now this one's the longest I have ever written 😳

Also it has come out in a way even I never expected. Getting touted as One of my personal favorites so far ❤️

Dialogues are in hindi because for this story, I needed the impact of the language IshRa communicate on the screen. English translations already marked.

This shot also has a few images that play a pivotal role. So would request you to let the page load completely before you begin to read. Now do not get into technicalities and asked who would have clicked these photographs 😆 😆

3100+ words. Not proofread.

Scroll below for the shot.

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Apparently it became too big for it's shoes 😆 Split it into two posts now and updated both of them below.

Or you could just click here:

Part 1

Part 2

Edited by -Nidoo- - 9 years ago

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Aani

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Posted: 9 years ago

Haila

First of all sorry Nids I didnt know you would need another post for your OS and I barged in and reserved this spot in my enthusiasm and excitement ☺️

Next the Haila because you managed to complete a hattrick in this god awful track😆😆

Really this track is so mindnumbing I am at a loss for words

Coming to your OS though this was simply beautiful - loved the way the kiss shocked Ishita and then Raman having the moment of introspection where he realises that he's not guilty of kissing her nor does he have any remorse for his act the only thing gnawing at him are the questions he has - if Ishita found the kiss offensive and does he, his touch no longer mean anything to her, stir any emotions in her heart.

The conversation they have sharing those memories of their moments and finally the crescendo of their feelings overpowering their rationality and every other thought enough to make them break their self imposed barriers and admit as well act on that mutual love and attraction that exists between them but then reality not having completely forgotten raising the question of whether the kiss was the last they would ever share or just last one for a while

This was wonderful Nids

Edited by QueSeraSera - 9 years ago

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Maya

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Posted: 9 years ago

Waiting for the os Nids.

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-Anku-

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Posted: 9 years ago

Nids ☺️☺️☺️☺️ THAT WAS ...I am speechless.

I say this for all of your One shots and I am not buttering or flattering you. But indeed, with every next story you surpass the earlier one. This indeed is one of your best...for many reasons. One because of how again you've added something new, something creative again by incorporating pictures and old memories by not just mentioning but them going through them and remembering and reminiscing them so vividly. It made me so emotional and happy all at the same time...as were they. Even though you didn't describe their emotions at every memory.. one could almost visualize how they must be at that moment. Smiling at the beauty of their past and pained at the state of their present...

The kisses, the passion the physical closeness was weaved in so perfectly. It wasn't one bit unnatural or lusty. The kiss was something so natural, a moment they would share voluntarily when they had been together 7 years ago...This moment would have been a fleeting one among many such others. But here it was something that bring in a deluge of emotions to face. They would be drawn in because of each others touch and closeness, reminding them of the relation they share and that they are so perfect together that they can't let go. They weren't sorry or embarrassed, they were scared. Scared to form that involvement and attachment that would be hard to get over had they to part again. I love how Ishita wasn't embarassed but scared. Raman wasn't sorry but was only intrigued or nervous that Ishita had forgotten his tough... had turned cold to it...

And the final moment, when they just let go...leave aside the barriers or hesitance stopping them and let the love they have for each other overpower. How beautiful it was that the memories they ran from, finally bought them close...

A very very apt title. One doesn't know if its the good bye kiss of good night because their future is so uncertain. But as we know and they do too...there is no Ishita without Raman and vice versa...

P.S - I don't say this just because you are such a close friend. But I say it because its true. You're the best 😳 You bring out IshRa the way no one does

Edited by -Anku- - 9 years ago

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yashasvi barfa

@.Yashu

Voyager

Posted: 9 years ago

Read both parts awsome the kiss was the best part

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Rashmika

@RashmikaMG

Voyager

Posted: 9 years ago

Absolutely brilliant OS dr.
It remineded me our old YHM which once we loved so much.
I LOVED LOVED and LOVED this story.
Superb.

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gargpoo

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Posted: 9 years ago

Its superb..
He kissed her bt she ws numb ...
Then golden memory pics..nostalgia..
Now she initiated the incomplete kiss...
Loved it..
Keep writing nidoo