IshRa OS: Finishing it together (June 29) - Page 2

This is awesome. ...sirf hamare liye...

WOW...Awesome👏👏

Thanks Nidoo for granting our wishes and giving us such a awesome update. Actually I don't mind if you write 100000 words in a row as long as it gives us some escape from the real yhm.this piece is all about ishra and I enjoyed every bit of it 😊 .
They talked their hearts out like two mature individuals, reasoned with every inhabitants,hesitations and at the end ,gave them another chance.
And of course those Quotes are brilliant. 👏

It was amazing. I wish we can see these kind of conversations

Lovely!
One more?? Great to see the whole fam back again and especially how pihu reacts

Omg!!! You r such a tremendous writer nidoo... take my bow..the flow of the story is amazing..wow.

Loved it.. It was beautiful .. Apt quotes

When i read your previous one-shot, I secretly hoped that you will continue it and OMG, my wish just got fulfilled.First, let me thank you for this. It was a sheer pleasure reading this. It gives me hope that IshRa will be together no matter what the circumstances are. Loved how Raman aplogized for his words and finally took a stand for himself, for them. Also, the fact that they united first for themselves rather than for anyone else.

Originally posted by: -Anku-

OMG ☺️☺️☺️☺️☺️☺️☺️

For the last freaking few minutes I've been waiting for you to post this and kept thinking of the many ways this could turn if you chose a sad end 😆 See I can't help form this opinion ...you've made your own reputation and you claim and agree as well 😆

Your mind jumped to both Mani and Shaggy, I know 😆 😆

BUT COMING DOWN TO EARTH after being in IshRa land for a while, let me just finally comment 😳 HOW WONDERFUL was this. Not just because it ended so perfectly with them coming together and it being a happy end. But also because it took a route that didn't seem unbelievable.

I'm glad you think so 😊

Yes, they have a million issues which are unsorted and that would crop in between them even if they were to start living together for the rest of their life...But as you very well pointed out, nothing would be bigger than the magnitude of love they have for each other. That love surpasses everything there is between them.

My most favorite part about this story was that you addressed that they've always had a relation for someone else and then broken apart because of others too. But they have fallen in love and that love should have its own entity...irrespective of everything else.

Isn't that true? They keep coming together and going apart for other people, all the time. What about THEM as a unit? CVs will never give us THEM

The dialogue between them was amazing. Her refusing to get back together was understandable and then so was Raman's way of getting her to agree. He was apologetic, and admitted to his own mistakes when surprisingly she pointed out how his words had hurt her. They both spoke the darkest of their faults and times without any hesitance knowing well that only the other would understand it. I can't get over their conversation...which went from hopeful, to reality, and then to a resolution they finally took.

Although on the show such a conclusion might be far etched, it didn't seem unnatural to happen here. It seemed like something the characters we understand would do.

The kiss, the teasing, the to and fro of their witty liners 😳 So IshRa

You are such an amazing writer...The words and expressions you choose amaze me. AND I AM SURPRISED YOU MANAGED A HAPPY END 😆

Yeah, I'm surprised too 🤣

Originally posted by: traveller_girl

Wow...now this is awesome

Too good

Loved it

Each part...so nicely written

It is all about them and loved his tone