Ts tumko bhool na pyenge Updated teaser on page 5

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Hi friends this the first story i am going to write with my lots of hard work and befor writing the prologue i want to thank raksha dii who decided the title and rida dii who gave me the idea for story thank you so much both of youlove u both...
Ok this story is about when Adi started hating shagun and said ishita his ishimaa in yhm shagun turn positive but in my story she is still negative ans will try to get her family back

Prologue

Ishita: raman aj mujhe shopping pe jana hai miku or vandu aka ke sath ap aj jaldi ghar ajana ruhi adi akeley hongey

Raman: Acha shopping chalo kuch acha le ana you know naa what i mean to say any sexy dress

Ishita: raman kuch tu sharm kero waise wahan me apna kuch nahi leney ja rahi woh tu vandu aka or mihika ne kaha tu ja rahi hun un ke sath u know sistersss wants to be alone

Raman: acha baba tu kabhi koi cheez na lena theek hai mujhe office ke liye late horaha hai bye jaan love you so much

He kissed her forehead and leave for his office

Ishita: aj najaney mujhe kun janey ka dil nahi cha raha aisa lag raha hai ke kuch bura honey wala hai God pls sab theek kerna

This is it wait for the update and tell me how is the teaser should I continue or not leave ur comments and hit like botton



Part 1 : page 3


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Posted: 9 years ago
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Hi Nimoo
Congrats on your first story

Nice prologue

Please pm when you update
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Interesting... Update soon...
Congratulations on your first story...
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Congrats for ur first story..
waiting to read wat bura gonna happen wich ishita is feeling..
nyc start...
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Congrats nice prologue.. Continue soon
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Congrats for ur first story
Nice prologue
Update soon
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congrats for ur first story
nice prologue...
cont it...
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Congrats for the very first story.
Great start point
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Originally posted by: ishrasoul

Interesting... Update soon...

Congratulations on your first story...

Thank you so much rida diii this interesting prolouge is just because of you
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Originally posted by: swatica

Congrats for ur first story..

waiting to read wat bura gonna happen wich ishita is feeling..
nyc start...

Thanks swatica you will come to know what bura is going to happen

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