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Posted: 9 years ago

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Congrats for ur frst story...
Intresting prologue..

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Ishralove21

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Posted: 9 years ago

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Originally posted by: sweet.Aman
Congrats for ur frst story...
Intresting prologue..

Thank you so much

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Ishralove21

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Posted: 9 years ago

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[QUOTE=sririt]Congrats for the very first story.

Great start point

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Posted: 9 years ago

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Welcome to the writers world nimo

Congrats for ur very first story

Lovely prologue

Excited for the update

Update soon

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Ishralove21

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Posted: 9 years ago

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Originally posted by: cutieruhi
Welcome to the writers world nimo
Congrats for ur very first story
Lovely prologue
Excited for the update
Update soon

Thank you so much raksha diii

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Divanru

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Posted: 9 years ago

#17

Nice start nimo..

Sounds interesting .

Will ishita will meet some accident??

Cont asap

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Ishralove21

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Posted: 9 years ago

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Originally posted by: Divanru
Nice start nimo..
Sounds interesting .
Will ishita will meet some accident??
Cont asap

Thank you so much dear

Yow will come to know

Will cont it soon

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Ishralove21

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Posted: 9 years ago

#19

Hi every one i loved ur lovely responses thank you so much

Updating part 1 have a look

Part 1

Ishita was lost in her thoughts when her phone rang she picked it up and smiled it was none other than Raman

I:hello

R:hi jaan missing you so much

I:mein bhi apko buhat miss ker rahi hun raman najaney aj mujhe kuch aisa lag raha ke kuch bura honey wala hai ap please jaldi ajao

R: you know na jaan mein abhi nahi asakta meri meeting 5 min baad or feelings tu ati rehti hai you just ignore it ok mujhe bhi ati hai per kuch bura thori na hota hai

I: hmm you are right i love u raman

R:i love u tooo jaan acha baad mein bat kerenge i am going in meeting bye love u soo much

And they end the call

Ishita started getting ready when Mihika called her that they are leaving for mall she quickly picked her purse and went with them

Mall

M:ishu akka kuch tu lo ap kabse mein or vandu akka hi liye jarahe hain

V:han yar ishu koi sexy dress hi le le you know husband ko pataney ke liyeee

I:kuch bhi akka aisa kuch nahi hai or mera wala tu pata pataya hai

M:ohooo kya bat hai akka chalo apni night hi bananey ke liye lelo

I: hits Mihika slightly on her shoulder and says: Mihika chup kar warna pitayi kerun gi

They all were done with shopping and came out of the mall when ishita saw a small kitten in between the road and a speedy truck was coming she saved the kitten and came infront of the truck...

She flied in the air and hit the ground she was all filled with blood Mihika and vandu ran to her

M:akka ankhen kholo akka meri taraf dekho

V:ishu jawab do humein anybody call the ambulance

After 10 mins ambulance came and ishita was taken in it

M:doctor meri akka ko bachalein

D:this is really critical humein inka operation kerna perega

Ishita was taken in to operation threater

Mihika called Ramn and vandu called all the family members

Raman picked mihika's call

M:jijuu akka...ka...acc..accident hogaya hai unhe operation ke liye leke gaye hain

The smile on Raman face eventually fainted after listening mihika

R:kahan ho tum log batao kesi hai meri ishita he cried

M:jiju hum city hospitam mein hain ap jaldi ajao

Raman went ran out of his office and started his car he was crying tears were not stopping from his eyes while driving he went into flashback and drived rashly to hospital

This is it i

I want ur responses how was it

Hit like botton

Now lets see what is in the future

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Sk-Sharmin

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Posted: 9 years ago

#20

ohh...
saddy saddy update...
she ran to save kitten bt got hit by the d truck..
poor she..
she was feeling ryt..
smthing was going to happen bad..
nd dat hppnd..

poor RKB..
update next soon..
will b waiting

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