IF I WERE TO WRITE A STORY ON YHM TRACK

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Posted: 9 years ago
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Hi people! My name is Mary 😊

I just wanted to ask that I have a story idea in my mind but I'm unsure anyone would be interested to read!

So here goes my story idea ...

Raman is devastated post the news of Ishita's suicide. He distances himself from his family and his children because he believes himself to be a loser as both his girls left him due to his own blunders. He drowns in guilt but continues to be father to Adi and Rashi (I've changed the name from Pihu cos personally it's not one I like...)

As Adi grows the matures to understand his dad & be an emotional anchor

Tell me if you like it & also let me know if there's any scene you wanna read that you felt CVs could have had

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Posted: 9 years ago
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Go ahead..
it seems promising..
wud love to read ur angle..
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Posted: 9 years ago
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Originally posted by: swatica

continue soon mary...



Hi Swati! I actually wanted you to comment. The problem is I've written a few stories before but no one reads them. Perhaps, I don't have engaging prologues'... Though I've always been praised by my tutors for my flair in writing. I wonder what happens on the forum
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Posted: 9 years ago
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Originally posted by: -Awara-



Hi Swati! I actually wanted you to comment. The problem is I've written a few stories before but no one reads them. Perhaps, I don't have engaging prologues'... Though I've always been praised by my tutors for my flair in writing. I wonder what happens on the forum



oh im overwhelmed..😛
U post ur stories.. it vl b read..
though i dnt knw d reason y foru dosnt read..
bt ds tym go ahead.. may u vl get more readers ds tym..

I wud like to knw wat made u say dat u wanted me to comment...😊
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Posted: 9 years ago
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This is looking promising
go ahead
wopuld love to read

P.S am Zoha
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Posted: 9 years ago
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Interesting dr..
Once u update plz pm me...
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Posted: 9 years ago
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For some reason in your story Raman sounds more like Anurag Basu from KZK... I have mixed feelings about it.
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Posted: 9 years ago
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Go ahead dear:))
Story seems intresting:))
I'll definetly read this
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Posted: 9 years ago
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Originally posted by: TheM5393

For some reason in your story Raman sounds more like Anurag Basu from KZK... I have mixed feelings about it.



i'm sorry who's he? 😳
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Posted: 9 years ago
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Originally posted by: -Awara-



i'm sorry who's he? 😳


It is a good thing you don't know him... please continue your story 😆

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