IshRa TS: Yesterday (June 16 - Updated all parts) - Page 5

Originally posted by: ruhi_ishra

I m speechless
The first part .. It made me so happy..
Such a cute part
And with its end ...
Second part.. His dream broke.. So was mine
I was numb for few minutes while reading second part
I had tears ..7 yrs of their life ... Without each other
One single night changed their life...foreever
exellent work
To be honest.. As a ishra fan .. I liked part 1 more
For me ended there
but as a reader part 2 was beautifully written
Their pain.. Well described
Thanks for pm

Originally posted by: nahtani88

Fantastic

Thanks For The PM

Originally posted by: Tuc_Mob

Really nice writing!!

i wish writers of YMH read this and get inspiration !!!

Thanks for PM

May b im the last one to commennt... Im really sry...
I hav missed this pm..
Awesome...
I was really thinking raman's dream as true but to see its just a dream...
U hav nicely narated it..
Awesome dr...
Sorry for late comment..

Originally posted by: Divek-ishra

Both part r just awesome..

Loved it very much

Originally posted by: misavelon789

Wow nidoo this was amazing.specially the first part. My Neelu...,Madrassan level 1,level 2 that was hilarious. 😆 first part is full of perfect family moments without any interruption.love the way how anniversary got started and end with some bedroom secrets 😉 .
Second part was very emotional and Raman 's confession is very touchy. 😭 😭

Originally posted by: kaa1202

Beautiful Nidoo..

U got something to go wonder with ur words...

I dunno what's that..

First one was the beautiful dream which he wish to see forever..

Second one was the harsh reality...

They r broken yet together sirf Ruhi ke liye...

Irony is still they love each other..

It was yet another beautiful piece from you...😊

Originally posted by: Zoyamalik2005

Res

you're going to get me emotional when i read this, aren't you?

Firstly Nidoo, sorry I'm responding so late. Ramadan effect😆

its like you hit me in the gut this time, when you hit Raman's character in the gut as he woke up from his dream. This yet again was heartbreaking.

You encapsulated their family moments so beautifully. It's like you know these characters in and out. I saw the scenes play out in front of my eyes when I read this. It's just beautifully written and all the more heartbreaking for the way it ended.

Originally posted by: fSharm

May b im the last one to commennt... Im really sry...
I hav missed this pm..
Awesome...
I was really thinking raman's dream as true but to see its just a dream...
U hav nicely narated it..
Awesome dr...
Sorry for late comment..

Awesome."The first day of Ruhi ke liye, and they were already breaking apart. They belonged together, mind, body and soul, and they didn't. They felt each other, and they didn't. They were together in this moment, and they weren't. They were closer, and they were far apart. They had a life, and they didn't." beautiful n so perfect lines.