IshRa TS: Yesterday (June 16 - Updated all parts) - Page 2

First i saw olv n neend gayab then found this so couldnt sleep without reading... 😳
First part...its like dream comes true...such a happy life...10 th anniversary..their love nok jhok his teasing their kids everything ws there...wish it ws not dream bt reality...
Second part...
Emotional...it ws so hard for him to wake up from this dream..everything is a mess..lots of ques n ans r pending...resolve is breaking...she heard him..they r closer yet so far
Jst loved it...all lines r superb ..specially the last lines
Nidoo..u r such an awsm writer...u can make us feel the scenes..keep writing .

Super story nidoo .
Loved it
P.s u know my nickname is also nidoo :)

Originally posted by: Zoyamalik2005

i shall read it after iftari clean up😆

I'm excited...to get emotional. I'm weird😆

and yes, its totally your speciality.

Both the shots are awesome
Thanks for pm 😛

wow d dream raman saw i hope it will turn real one day that was so cute madrasan level2 the nxt prt awww it was emotional loved it

Painfully brilliant👏..can you do one more part plzz😆..I understand the reason you ended it where you did..but then call it greed..I want to see both wanting the same version of tomorrow..but not voicing it😉

Beautiful story

Wonderful Nidoo. Awesomely written.

I m speechless
The first part .. It made me so happy..
Such a cute part
And with its end ...
Second part.. His dream broke.. So was mine
I was numb for few minutes while reading second part
I had tears ..7 yrs of their life ... Without each other
One single night changed their life...foreever
exellent work
To be honest.. As a ishra fan .. I liked part 1 more
For me ended there
but as a reader part 2 was beautifully written
Their pain.. Well described
Thanks for pm

Really nice writing!!