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Posted: 8 years ago

#531

A beautifully written story, loved it 👏

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Posted: 8 years ago

#532

Originally posted by: Jinan.
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Appa's words were sensible. He knows how to make his daughter realize her mistakes. His words were putting her in dilemma. And then his idea to make her realize how Raman was feeling was superb.👏 And she saw Raman instead of Subbu as she closed her eyes. The one whom she wanted to hate made her feel so hurt when he said that he was happy without her and he wanted her to die. The same words that she had used for him.

In the flashback Raman was such a cutie.😳 He had burned his hand while making food for her. Awww. and then she was caring for him. She was so angry in the hospital after regaining her memory. That was quite obvious.

Thank God it was her nightmare. But atleast it made realize that what she was doing was so wrong. She was hurting him by her deeds so much. The way she panicked for Raman. She wanted to go to him as soon as possible.

Continue soon.😃

Thank you so much Jinan! Glad you liked the update especially how Appa tried to make her realize that maybe Raman's feelings were true and how she imagined Raman instead of Subbu! Happy you also liked how much his words meant to her and the flashback scenes where he was trying to take care of her as well as how she panicked for him in the flashback and present! Thank you so much for liking and commenting!

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Posted: 8 years ago

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Originally posted by: manishwari2014
Thank God, Raman dying was a nightmare. As usual fabulous update Prabh. You have brought out Ishita's emotions so beautifully.Thanks for the pm.

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Originally posted by: apoo91
Thank god it was a nightmare..
Appa is awesome.. He guided ishita so well..
Can't wait for them to be back in Delhi..
Continue real soon

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Posted: 8 years ago

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Originally posted by: sririt
Nightmare was too dangerous
The flashback moments were nice.
So Ishu got her memory 6 months back.
Ishu decided to see Raman now.

Nice update

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Originally posted by: Cookieg
You rock.. awesome update
👏 👏 👏
Appa is star..making her realise
Can't wait for Ishu to get back to Raman
Please update soon

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Posted: 8 years ago

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Originally posted by: cutekhusboo
Awesome update

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Originally posted by: DEEPIKAA0123
amezng and very emotional wish and hope what ishu saw in her dream is only a dream not a reality hope raman is fine.. And now aftr her seeing this horrible dream she finally realize what actually she feels for him was a love or a hate. Continue.

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Posted: 8 years ago

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Originally posted by: mamtasingla
fantastic update prabh
ishita realise that she did a great mistake
now she wants to check on raman😊
update soon
thnkx 4 pm

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Originally posted by: DiVan_
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Posted: 8 years ago

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Originally posted by: gargpoo
This is superb!!
U jst scared me to death ..thank god that ws a nightmare..
She realized wat she doing is not right..
Yup he ws wrong bt he has gotten punishment n still getting...life is not a tit for tat ..her father ws bang on..
FB ws beautiful bt she got to know evrrything n their world crashed
She wants to go back bcs he needs them she thinks bt she too needs him
How is my puttar?? His head ws hurt na??
Waiting for next

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Originally posted by: gunita_ishra
Nice update...!!!

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Originally posted by: sireesha76
Awesome update

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Originally posted by: aru_27
very nice update
emotional and sad

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Posted: 8 years ago

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Originally posted by: Mahi114
Uff
Raman ko kuch nh hoa
Yr dara dara k maar diya
Finally ishita ko b hosh aya
Or appa u r great
Just loved it
Again an intense
Emotional
Gloomy
Update,,,,,
U r amazing

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Originally posted by: yashivid
Thank u prabh ...it was a dream. I was so tensed that only that thing came into my mind first when I started to comment so couldn't help expressing my relief over that scary situation being a dream.
Update was beautiful emotional n very well written. So she went to her native place. She is running away to find peace but strangely she is not able to.

Appas part was beautiful. He is playing the perfect figure of guidance for ishu now. He was right that if Raman had to use her he would have not waited for a year. I hope ishu realises that he is not a bad person. He did a mistake unintentionally n he is paying for it every second.

Flashback back was also good. Finally got to know how she got back her memory.

Now she has decided to go back k to him although not for herself at least that's what she thinks. Hope she realises her live for him n forgives him. It's high time yar I wanna see them happy. Appa has deliberately stayed back I guess.

Update soon prabh.

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Posted: 8 years ago

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Originally posted by: maya.leish
I don't have any word to describe how I feel after reading Prabh...speechless...you ended the update at the peak..i am very excited for the next more than as usual... I have one request that please don't make to break their hearts gain...let's make love conquer all; and make them surrender and immerse into the love ...LOVE is the greatest gift of almighty God.

I love the way her father make her realised; the way you convey the turmoil of emotions in her. Please make love to win. I would love to have one more twist when she reaches there like the realism of her nightmare to some extent...killing her by the fear of losing him...with each passing day making herself clearer and clearer that she can't live without him and unknowingly their souls have already immersed into one...love love love Yooouuu for this beautiful TS..THANK YOU very much...I am becoming a greedy person update by update...so come back soon with one more blast

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