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Posted: 9 years ago
#31
nice one gayu!
loved the concept!
ufff bold ishu is amazing
please continue this if possible though i know its just an OS
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Posted: 9 years ago
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Amazing shot...raman doesn't likes others proximity and feeling guilty about his brother's death though it was a accident...shagun insulted him that he is a gay and he kissed her in front of mass to prove that he is not and he regretted his first kiss which tasted like a chewing gum...btw what type of boy friend ashok is? His girl friend shagun is doing all shameless things in front of him, i think he is doing time pass with her... Raman has a first crush on ishita but he didnt opened up as she is his competitor in studies...ishu's introduction in long skirt n her fall on raman which made bruises on his stomach and param's one liner is hillarious... And at night she went to check him, the way she threatened him to open the door is ;-) and she drooled over him shamelessly which made him blush, she is soo bold...and finally raman opened up his guilt and confessed his love on her unintentionally by her act and though she too have a crush on him, she made a deal...and in d morning raman going to ishu's room n asking her preference for prickly or softer is ;-) poor mihika is confused about all dis...and ishra's encounter in bus is too sensuous...i'm glad that u r making this os into ts...thank u soo much and waiting 4 d next update...n thanx 4 pm...
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Posted: 9 years ago
#33
Too good 😳 😉
Thnx for pm
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Posted: 9 years ago
#34
that was sooo sweet 😛
very nice concept .
what about ur health ?
Are u fine now ?

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Posted: 9 years ago
#35
Awesome👏
Beautifully written dear
Thanks for the pm
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Posted: 9 years ago
#36
Superb os it was
raman guilty that he couldn't save his brother n so fears to hold someone
he opened up to ishita n she helped him overcome the same
hot ending
thnxx 4 pm
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Posted: 9 years ago
#37


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Posted: 9 years ago
#38
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🤣🤣...why do you do this my stomach hurts man🤣
These two wallah!!
So she's all up for next challenge, but Raman politely rather arrogantly declined her😆...but she got her way he did to her n ermmm...gutter😆...
Love in last seat🤣...phir he planned to avoid her...
But ended up getting more close...that tea thingy🤣
Lipstick is sticky really😲🤣...how can he say that...
Women n lipstick are forevertogether🤣...I hope she changes the flavour🤣...Gosh!! Something has gotten into me😆
She yet again comes with her ointment... And wants to help him out🤣...Raman ke toh hosh hi udd gaye😆
What's this chemistry,biology...why miss out on physics...you see physics is more interesting🤣...
Mihika n ishita🤣
Their bickering😆...I mean really man n a boy...bechara raman😆...uski izzat ki toh😆
I want to open up...be as bold n shameless as she is🤣
The last part☺️...he loves it when she behaves like a woman I mean shying n all
Continue soon...
Edited by -Nii- - 9 years ago
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Posted: 9 years ago
#39
Fantastic update
mihika wants to keep ishu away from raman
Edited by heemasomani - 9 years ago
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Posted: 9 years ago
#40
Oh my my wat an update Gaayu itz sooo hawwt
So ishita asking for d next deal and wen puttar is not intrested to make any she went to d back seat and told him they can make out there frst puttar didn't budge but atlast he went as he has no control over his feelings wen it comes to ishita so he went puttar toh chaalu nikla ha first he wasn't even intrested den wat he did was 😳
So puttar is trying to maintain a distance from ishita and is cursing her for wat she didt with him in d washroom and he didn't like her lipstick as itz sticky 🤣 but ishita saying dat lipstick shld be sticky
Mihika was hell shocked listening abt Ishra dating and she wants to keep him away from ishita because she thinks Raman isn't right but ishita has some other plans bechara puttar yaar tea Gir gayi vuske upar and ishita instead of helping him laughed at him but den again she went to his room to give ointment to him and yaar kitna boldly behave kar rahi thi puttar is so frightened and den she told dat she won't do dat and puttar has a face palm moment there
So puttar held her waist huh and she is blushing and he wants to see shy ishita wen she told she will become shy wen he holds her dat way he left her and ishita became angry and puttar didn't budge to manofy her but atlast he couldn't stop him from meeting her
Mihika yaar y is she even interfering between them?? But bechara puttar hahaha Mihika and ishita bhi na wat did ishita say proove to Mihika dat he is a man 🤣 omg Datz really hilarious puttar soch raha hoga meri mar kyun nahi Gaya iske pehle and den she went behind him to manofy him and started her seduction huh oh god kaise control karega puttar voh love seat toh gayi kaam se puttar ke haathon continue soon gaayu

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