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Posted: 9 years ago
#41

Originally posted by: shalz_123

Vee... u wrote...aaaw... ha ha group main nahi hu to batai bhi mat...

That was a lovely OS. plz tell me Shagun kya chila rahi thi end main...😆 m so curious to know...


Raman n Ishita...sigh... they better clear the mess before ruhi truth comes out...wish something lik this happns..

he signed ravaan kumar???🤣 i cant stop laughing...

thank darling... I love u too..


Toh come back quickly to the Group na !!!!

Just for you, Shagun ki viewpoint:

"Nahi, Raman cant do this to me. Mein ne apne saat saal barbaad kiya hai iss Eeeshita ki bachi ko sambhalne mein. My hair has gone grey because of these Bhalla's. How dare you Raman Bhalla. Nahiii"

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Posted: 9 years ago
#42

Originally posted by: -Gan-

Vee... I love you bas !

I hope the YHM Cvs steal this ...


I love that you dealt with every aspect of their relationship...their relationship as a couple ... Not as parents...

Thank you thank you for this. Dil se 🤗


Awww G I'm blushing. I saw your twitter promotion - I am honoured. 😳 😳

I wrote this in a rush since Aru was offering Gifs in return, and it is quite a hatchet job on their emotions - but I will write one in more detail later which is more of an emotional exploration - maybe the talk they have after they reach the apartment and are alone together.
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Posted: 9 years ago
#43

Originally posted by: momb24

Beautiful

started off all emotional and the ending made me laugh.
thank you for writing this, they reunited before knowing about ruhi😃
If only yhm cv's gave us something close to this, I'll be happy.


Thank you so much 😃
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Posted: 9 years ago
#44

Originally posted by: Veeann


Awww G I'm blushing. I saw your twitter promotion - I am honoured. 😳 😳

I wrote this in a rush since Aru was offering Gifs in return, and it is quite a hatchet job on their emotions - but I will write one in more detail later which is more of an emotional exploration - maybe the talk they have after they reach the apartment and are alone together.



@bold looking forward to it
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Posted: 9 years ago
#45
it was emotional throughout and then bam! ravan kumar rofl
brilliant last punch haha

ah i do miss your writing- though don't particularly watch yhm anymore - just visit the forum every once in a while
so glad i didn't miss this one :)
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Posted: 9 years ago
#46
Vee u r back.. even if it's because of blackmail..
God I missed ur writing..
Hahaha I loved the ending..
It was amazing... i loved the way u took the script to give it an amazing form..
An apt story
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Posted: 9 years ago
#47
Wow...brilliant
Loved it
Very nicely written and perfect emotions
The last part... too good
Epilogue maybe
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Posted: 9 years ago
#48
This was amazing
I had tears in my eyes by the end 😳
I want to know where they went from there
(Just being greedy 😆 )
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Posted: 9 years ago
#49

Originally posted by: yhmmylife

Loved it vee. Both POV and Ravan Kumar is not ready to leave his Jhansi ki rani .


Anj 🤗 Thank you yaara
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Posted: 9 years ago
#50

Originally posted by: mayasundar

Hi Vee,

Superb. I hope CV steal your script.

This was very refreshing instead of blaming one person it is was very balanced.

The part I liked the most was the dealt the issues as a couple and not as parents.

I really want to know what Shagun was screeching. Hope you give a epilogue about it.

Thanks for the friends who blackmailed you to write this it a wonderful piece😆


Thanks Maya. I love both and I think they are both to blame for where they are now. That's why I can't handle either one being bashed. And yes, I think they need to work on themselves as a couple before taking on the responsibilities as parents.

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