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Posted: 9 years ago
#31
Really a intruding prologue .
I think he ysd come for some donation stuffs ,or may be he likes her ,so has come in diguise to make her fall for him.
Cont.soon
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Posted: 9 years ago
#32
Nice start
She mu him as an applicant for a teaching position...lol
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Posted: 9 years ago
#33
interesting prologue Insha sis 😊
nice title...
waiting for d first part...
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Posted: 9 years ago
#34
A brilliant start - Ishita a teacher and Raman richest business man!!!
She misunderstands and hires him as a teacher and he accepts!!!
He came for something else but having seen her wants to spend more time with her !!!!!

Please continue this soon and thank you so much for the pm!!!!!!!!!
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Posted: 9 years ago
#35
extremely sorry for late reply dear

lovely prologue dear

superb

please continue soon dear

eagerly waiting to read further

don't forget to pm me dear
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Posted: 9 years ago
#36
Insha Ki bachi pehle hi sun le... Comment tbhi likhungi... Prologue uske baad ek do chapter likh agr tune story beech me chodhi naa toh main... Kisi ko chura k le jaaungi *evil me*

Ok sukku cool down

Now CS... Hailaaa millionaire vs mere jaisi bechaari teacher (simple khud KO bechari Ni bola bus ishu Ki jagah li) :P
Prologue millionaire bana teacher... Is it love at first sight for him...
Update do Period
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Posted: 9 years ago
#37
Interesting update soon 😊
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Posted: 9 years ago
#38

Hi my beautiful buddies!

How are you all doing?

Well, I am back to this story with the new and first update. I apologise for updating it after almost half a month. But now I am here to present this story. Hope you all enjoy reading the further updates and keep showering your likes and comments.

If you guys have forgotten the prologue, then you may recall it. Here you go for the PROLOGUE.

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PART ONE

In a journalism department, a lady was called to her boss's cabin. She entered in and spoke- Sir, you called me?

Boss- Yes Nidhi. I wanted to know what's the progress on Mr.Raman Kumar Bhalla's article?

Nidhi shook her head in positive and continued to speak, "I am very close to the truth, sir. I have been trying to get a conference with him but seems like Mr.Raman is a very busy man. I will soon get him in my paws."

Boss- Do it sooner. I don't wanna waste my time.

Nidhi- Yes sir.

Saying so, Nidhi walked away from the cabin and engrossed in her motive to assassinate one of the Indian richest businessmen, Mr.Raman Kumar Bhalla who was an Indian origin and had recently came in NewYork in order to establish his business there. He had overtaken a company which was in loss since three years in a huge amount and was the MD and CEO of Bhalla Group of Enterprises (the overtaking company). From the first day, when the news was aired that this richie has come over here just to rescue this sinking ship, every journalism department was after him to know more about him. But this young handsome, sweet hearted person with jovial nature wasn't much attentive to get the attention of medias and T.Vs. He was a successful businessman because of his sensible etiquettes, his father's inspiring guidance and because he was purely in love with his profession.

On the other side, Nidhi was a famous journalist who was behind him to assassinate his fame, name and his character cause of envy. A week ago, after getting the news that he had overtaken that company, she was desperate to get a conference with him. With a great difficulty, she got the appointment and just for five minutes through Raman's mentor cum brother- Mihir. But for her, "five minutes was more than enough." She thought and went to his office. She wanted to trick this smarty through her questions but she failed in doing this and was determined to crush his attitude into pieces. Mr.Raman was a simple and sweet guy whose principles never taught him to show off attitude. But his fame was making some to think like this.

PRESENT

Raman was working in his office when Mihir walked in to his cabin and showed an E-Mail.

Mihir- Bhai.

Raman- Mihir, yaar did you fix a meeting with the Indian clients or not?

Mihir worriedly came near him saying, "Leave the work Bhai and have a glance at this."

Raman in a tensed tone asked, "What's this?"

Mihir made him read the e-mail which had given a kind of shock to Raman. He became speechless while reading and a lone tear escaped from his genuine eyes.

***

After an hour:

Mihir was angrily staring at the journalist Nidhi who was called as Raman had asked. There, Raman was sitting dejectedly looking at the floor aimlessly when Mihir roared to Nidhi- What's all these nonsense, miss Nidhi?

Nidhi smirking- It's not a nonsense Mihir. It's a truth of your friend cum brother Mr.Raman Bhalla who was gaining so much poplularity and fame just by overtaking a sinking company. I was amazed knowing that one of the Indian's richest has such a terrible background!

Mihir- What rubbish it is?

Nidhi- Whatever you think. But I used my power to dig deep about Raman Bhalla and I got to know that all the praises and appreciations Mr.Raman make for his father are worthless.

Mihir- Miss Nidhi, you have a pen in your hand then it doesn't mean that you have the right to assassinate anyone's character. Why the hell you and your bloody company are bend on ruining a good person's character?

Nidhi smiled sarcastically and spoke taunting- Mr.Raman Bhallas's father's empire was founded on the basis of money that was obtained through fraud and he had cheated his own friend Mr.Vishwanathen Iyer by borrowing 20 lakhs from him. That poor Mr.Iyer trusted Mr.OmPrakash Bhalla and helped him to establish a business. But Raman's deciever Dad took away the money and ran away from Delhi with his family and established a fraud empire whom his son Raman is appreciating and forwading.

Raman was listening her taunts with a dull face and continously looking at the floor. That innocent was clueless about this whole mishappen.

Mihir angrily but spoke ever calmly- You know na Mr.Raman Kumar Bhalla? His name is enough to destroy someone's career.

He spoke pointing towards her.

Nidhi continued- And now the Iyer family is in so much trouble. When Mr.Iyer came to know that his dear friend Mr.Bhalla had decieved him, he died out of heart attack and now his daughter Ishita Iyer is handling that family with so much burden by taking the responsibilites of running Mr.Iyer's owned school. Ms.Ishita lives with her mother and her elder sister's son in Chennai. I feel so pity of her realizing that how strong she is to maintain her small yet broken family with pain of being decieved, pain of losing her father, and passing through financial crisis or I can say now that Iyer family has been financially exploited by the great Bhallas.

A tear rolled down from Raman's eyes listening this. He wanted to speak something but he could not being shameful for his father's misdeeds. But Mihir spoke in his favour scolding her straightly- Miss Nidhi, let me tell you if this rumour turns out to be a false one then get ready to beg for your career in front of Mr.Raman Bhalla! Now you may leave as you have enough bulshitting!

Nidhi walked away from there smirking in anger yet happiness of assassinating Raman's fame whereas Raman broke down with shedding uncontrollable tears from his eyes.

Raman mouthed sadly- I should be shameful for all this...

Before he could complete his sentense, Mihir tried to console him saying, "Bhai, please don't think or badmouth Uncle. Your father is a successful person, Bhai that's the reason these cheapers are behind to defame you. Please don't take her words seriously. It's all a rumour.

Raman spoke dejectedly- Nope Mihir. Maybe, she is right.

Mihir shockingly- What are you saying, Bhai?

Raman- No I don't know anything now. But I want to know the truth behind this. I want to make up for my father's misdeeds by compensating the family that was financially exploited by my own Dad.

He continued disheartening, "I am one of the richest businessman of India but this money is worthless if someone is living in hell cause of this frauded money. And I don't own a single penny of this billions until I rectify their financial status. Please Mihir, it's my request to you that please dig deep about the whole mishappenings. I have not much courage to carry this accusion for my whole life. Please get all the informations about Iyer family and book my tickets to India.

Mihir- But Bhai..tickets?

Raman- Yeah. Book my ticket to India. I am going there to repay that poor family.

Mihir- Then I won't leave you alone in this pain. I will also go with you.

Raman wiped his tears and nodded as if asking him to get the informations ASAP.

***

The very next day, Mihir dig out everything about Iyer family and booked two flight tickets for Raman and himself. They didn't waste a single second in NewYork and forwaded towards India with the guilt.

Soon they landed on India's airport and Mihir booked an expensive five star hotel in Chennai. Raman asked for his car and after ten minutes, a Black Merc arrived in front of their eyes. Both of them mounted into the car and departured for the hotel.

Mihir to Raman- Bhai, you are fine na.

Raman who was carrying a heavy heart with his soul nodded in positive and spoke- I hope they forgive me on behalf of my Dad's misdeed.

Mihir- They will have to. After all, you are returning them the same amount of money.

Raman- I am gonna share half of my wealth to them.

Mihir looked at him in disbelief and spoke- Bhai, are you out of your mind?

Raman- I am in my full sense and I know it's the only way to remove the alligation.

Mihir remained silent seeing him. His face was pale due to the claim pricking his heart.

Soon, they reached the five star hotel.

***

P.S- (Guys, there are some facts you must know about our sweet businessman Mr.Raman Kumar Bhalla and those are that his profession is everything to him. He loves his father so much and he doesn't like publicity so that's why media has legally no right to post his pics on TVs or in magazines, if they would do so, then Raman will sue them.)

I could have added these notes in the update itself but I didn't want to bore you with the official infos. So decided to make you aware separately.

That's all my jaanemans! I hope you enjoyed reading this update. I wanted to set the plot by bringing the conclusion in the first update only so that from the next update, you may get Ishita's entry and hopefully there will be IshRa scenes from further updates if you would provide me 90+ likes in this part. I will be waiting for your response. Do hit the like button for the sake of IshRa scenes and don't forget to drop your views.

Love you all,

Insha🤗.

Edited by -DivyanKaran- - 9 years ago
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Posted: 9 years ago
#39
Lovely updt dear..
Poor raman..
Now he is in guilt for his father misdeeds..
Hope everything fyn soon..
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Posted: 9 years ago
#40
Great update
Nidhi made raman feel so low
Wow ishra r gonna meet
Hope ishita doesnt misunderstand him
Continue soon

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