Fresh IshRaRuDi SS on Current Track *UPDATED PART 5 ON PG15* 19th JUNE - Page 3

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Posted: 9 years ago
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Originally posted by: maduragymhasium

superb update dear

love it so much dear

love ruhi and raman self talk so much

love raman anger com possessiveness so lovely what i love most are he mentioned "meri biwi "

love nidhi fear for raman

love ishu awkwardness when mani help her dear

please continue soon dear

wish and hope ishra to be reunion for themselves for their love first then they rescue ruhi together


Thank u so much, dear! 😳 Stay tune for the next update! 😉
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Posted: 9 years ago
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Loving the pace of this story
Interesting one...
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Posted: 9 years ago
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PART 2

At home, Ishita and Aliya were having a conversation bout Raman.

"Amma, do you miss him?" Aliya asked eagerly.

"Miss? Of course! Sach bataown Aliya I want to be with Raman, but his words which he told me seven years ago, holds me back. Chah k bhi I can't forget! And Raman is happy without me, he doesn't need me in his life! He hates me for Ruhi's death, and why shudn't he? Usne sach he kaha hai, Ruhi mere vajah se margayi! I killed my Ru!" Tears were coming down from Ishita's eyes.

"No! Amma! You didn't kill her! That was meant to happen, nobody cud've done anything bout it! Aapne at least koshish ki thi Ruhi ko bachane k liye, par it didn't work, maybe Ruhi's death was bound to happen! Pls aapne aap dosh maat do Amma!"

"Nahi Aliya! Mere karaan he aaj Ruhi mujhse, Raman se aur saare parivaar se door hogayi! Kash I cud go back in time and sort everything out! Kash, aapne Ru ko keh pati how much I love her and won't let anything happen to her! Kash, mai Ruhi ko bacha pati! I really miss her!" Ishita said with heavy heart.

The door bell rang, Ishita goes to open the door, wiping all her tears. Mani enters with a confused face.
Ishita asked, "Kya huwa? Meeting acchi gayi? Itne tensed kyun ho?"

"Vo Ishu, meeting to nahi ho payi. She had to urgently leave. But I'm not worried bout the meeting not happening, it's sth else!"

"Mani, is everything alright?" Ishita asked with an anxious look.

"Actually, Nupur ayi thi and she said Raman was coming to meet her, she got scared, like really scared hearing Raman's name. Soon after that she left saying she had to go meet someone urgently." Mani told.

"Kya? Raman k naam se dar gayi?" Ishita laughed it off.

"Kuch to hai Ishu! The way she panicked, it looked as if some secret of her will come out, if she hadn't went from there!" Mani said with confidence.

"Accha chodo yeh saab! Nupur had called me and said Ruhaan will start shooting after 2-3days! We should be ready for that!"

"Oh, finally! Koi good news ayi!"

AFTER 3 DAYS

Everyone is at the shoot. Both shoot will happen on the same day.
Mani and Ishita are talking, Mani says sth and Ishita laughs. On one side, Raman is just staring at Ishita with teary eyes. He is smiling, looking at her.

Adi came at the shoot. He was looking for Raman when suddenly he saw Raman smiling looking at Ishita. He was surprised but happy at the same time.

"Papa, mujhey pata tha, aap Ishima se abbhi pyaar karte ho! I know you miss her a lot and dying to be with her! Abh kab tak apni asli feelings chupaow ge? Jo bhi ho mai app dono ko ek saat lakey rahunga! Aap dono kono saath ana he padega, ek dusre k liye!" Adi ended his mind talk.

Adi had brought Pihu along with him, as she was insisting on going to the shoot to see her rockstar Ruhaan.

"Pihu dekho papa us haar wali aunty k taraaf dekh rahe hain! Aur smile kar rahe hain!" Adi said.

"Oh wow! Haarwaali aunty bhi yahan hai! Mujhey voh bohot acchi lagti hai aur papa toh romi chachu ki shaadi mein bhi unhe dekhrahe the, aapko pata hai Adi bhaiyya?" Pihu said in a naughty tone.

"Accha? Jaow jake papa se pucho, vo unhei kyun dekh rahe hai!"

"Ok, Adi bhaiiya!" Pihu said enthusiastically.

"Papa! Aap uss haarwali aunty ko kyun dekh rahe ho? Romi chachu ki shaadi mein bhi dekh rahe they, aur yahan bhi, kya baat hai papa? Aap unko jaante ho?" Pihu asked happily.

Raman stayed mum. He got angry and called Adi, that why he came here with Pihu, and told them to go home.

"Papa! Vo Pihu ki zidd thi, isiliye! Rehne do na papa! Hum shooting dekke chale jayenge!" replied Adi.

"Shut up! Meine kahan na jaow!" Raman said in angry voice and went away.

Pihu got sad, but Adi cheered her up.

"Koi baat nahi Pihu! Chalo hum Ice cream khaane jate hain! Jo tum kahogi hum vo khayenge, Ok?"

"OK!" Pihu said happily.

But before going she went to Ishita, to say hi. She was very eager to meet her and Adi happily allowed her to go.

"Hi, haarwaali aunty! Aap kaise ho? Mujhey appko thanks bol na tha, us din k liye, aapne meri jaan bachaiy nah, so thanks a lot!" Pihu said with an innocent face.

"Aww! Mere baccha! Kitni pyaari aur masum ho!" Ishita said in mind.

"Koi baat nahi Pihu! Thanks bol ne ki zaroorat nahi par haan aap promise karo, aap aise bina bataye nahi jaowge kahi bhi?"

"PROMISE!"

"Aap bohot sweet ho aunty!" Pihu said.

Ishita cudn't control herself and hugged Pihu. Adi smiled looking at them. Mani looked on with confused face and a slight smile.


Ruhaan came in the set and was looking for Ishita. He thought to ask Ishita about what she really meant that day. He needed answers.

Just when he was watching here and there, looking for Ishita, he saw her hugging Pihu, with huge smile on her face.

Ruhaan's blood boiled. He got furious seeing them together.

"Oh! Toh Ishita Pihu k saath hai! Of course, after all unki khud ki beti jo hai, mau to sauteli beti thi na!? She chose her own kid over me! How can I forget? I hate you Ishita!" Ruhaan said in mind.

"What the hell is this? Ye koi script hai?" Ruhaan started shouting.

Ishita broke the hug, as soon as she heard Ruhaan's yelling. Pihu was shocked to see this "Angry" side of Ruhaan.

"Abh kya huwa isko?" Ishita said to herself.

"Who the hell, finalized this script? Yeh koi ending hai? Itni wahiyat script!" Ruhaan continued to yell.

Raman also came to the scenario hearing someone yelling. Ishita, Mani went up to Ruhaan.

"What's the problem Ruhaan? Why r u shouting?" Mani asked.

"What is this? Itni boring script!! I thought ending toh acchi hogi but nope! Kisne finalize ki hai script? Aapne? I'm sorry but mai ye shoot nahi karsakta. Yeh ad karke mai apni image kharab nahi karne wala! Sorry! Pack up!!!" Ruhaan declared.


"Enough Ruhaan! Enough of this tantrums!" Said Raman.

Raman's word took Ruhaan by surprise.

This time Ruhaan managed to piss Raman off too, though it wasn't bout his shoot.

"Dekho Ruhaan! We both companies have invested crores on you, so stop this rant and start shooting! Unke baad mera shoot karna hai tumhei, toh pls finish their shoot asap!" Raman said in a polite yet angry voice.

Ruhaan was shocked to see his papa scold him over Ishita. This made him more furious.

"Shut up Mr. Bhalla! You don't tell me what to do! I know my job very well, so mind your own business! I will do the shoot jab meri marzi hogi! Alright? Now, pack up!!" Ruhaan shouted.

"RUHAAN!!! Is this how you talk to someone?"said an angry Ishita.

Ruhaan glared at her and stormed out of the sets.

"Is ladke ko to mai..." Ishita started to walk of to meet Ruhaan, but was stopped by Adi.

"Ishima, relax! Ruhaan sey mai baat karta hun! Abh yahi raho!" He convinced Ishita to stay back and went to Ruhaan's vanity.


(Ruhaan in his Vanity van)

"Aaj papa ne mujhe daata? Vo bhi us Ishita k liye? Nahi, vo mere papa hai nai! Vo Pihu k papa hai! Mr. Raman bhalla aur nahi Ishita, un dono se mere koi rishta nahi hai abh! Sab ne mujhey bhula diya na? Theek hai, abh mai bhi dekti hoon Raman aur Ishita saat kaise ate hain! Mere hote huwe Raman aur Ishita kabhi ek saat nahi honge!"

As the door was slightly open, Adi heard the last words of Ruhaan, before going in.

He was stunned to hear what Ruhaan just said.


That's all for this part! Sorry guys, I just wanted to sketch out Raman and Ishita's actual feelings, a lil bit. Some parts could be repetitive but everything above will have impact on the following story line. Hit LIKE if you loved it. 😊 Leave ur comments below. Stay tune for the upcoming part! 😉 Thanks! 😳


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NOTE: Ultimate ending will be reunion of IshRaRuDi. ❤️
Edited by Water_Angel - 9 years ago
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Posted: 9 years ago
#24
Awesome update...
Continue sooonish 😳
Already waiting for the next part 😆
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Posted: 9 years ago
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Originally posted by: PinkRose95

Awesome update...
Continue sooonish 😳
Already waiting for the next part 😆



Thanks dear! 😳 For the next part, it might take time though but it will be the worth the wait, I ensure u all! 😉😆
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Posted: 9 years ago
#26
nyc part...
update soon...
raman stod up for ishIta.
n ishita for raman..
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Posted: 9 years ago
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Thanks buddy! 😃😳
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Posted: 9 years ago
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Will try dear! Thanks! 😊
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Posted: 9 years ago
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extremely sorry for late reply dear

fantastic update dear

adi and pihu bond was cute

pihu scene with ishu so lovely

love raman admire ishu smile

what i love most are raman stood for your ishu

i am happy that adi hear everything

sorry is moved on so interestingly dear

ishu is so hurt need raman love for cure her pain

all are too good in this update but mani behavior is confusing dear thank god mani tell about ruhaan mom fear about raman tried to hide from him

continue soon dear
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Posted: 9 years ago
#30
Beautiful yup. .
Do pm me

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