I M GOING !!! an OS !!! 12.05.2016

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Posted: 9 years ago

#31

First OS it remain ur best

Awesome update

Kuch zyada hi ruladiya apne

D way u described ishitha feeling is jst perfect no words for tat loved it

Nw Raman understood how much ishu suffered in these 7 years by his words

BT I wnt ishu too feel Raman pain even he suffered too much without her

Di try to gv Raman POV in nxt part actually he is d one who suffered more (means between ishra)

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kaa1202

@kaa1202

Sparkler

Posted: 9 years ago

#32

Nice writing Swati..

It's an heart wrenching OS...

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lakshmi

@maduragymhasium

Rocker

Posted: 9 years ago

#33

congrats for first os dear

brilliant take

excellently written dear 👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏

wish and love to see raman povs also please please dear

cvs take so much time to make them reunite moreover involving kids in between also but reality is they are already crossed the phase now they are couple who madly deeply love with each other

please make them together for themselves and fulfill the wish for every fans and make them fight together for kids please please

its not about ishu or raman moreover its about the pure love

continue soon dear

hope and wish you will continue dear

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1023427

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Posted: 9 years ago

#34

its so emotional and painfull. U first os was great not bcoz its emotional but bcoz u put what ishita feel these 7yrs was wonderful and very nicely described.

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anisha960

@anisha960

Dazzler

+ 4

Posted: 9 years ago

#35

congrats for your 1st os swati

it was very nicely written
ishita opens her heart in front of raman through a letter
tht make him face the cruel reality
wht he has lost
it was emotional

loved it too much