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Svati12

@svati12

Stunner

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Posted: 9 years ago

This is an OS.. my FIRST OS.. Im trying it n i hope u al like it.. Its based on d current track.. Its after ishita had a face off wid raman n he gv her a piece of his mind added wid certain harsh words wich he dosnt mean bt said in anguish...

It is bascially a LETTER frm ISHITA to RAMAN...

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Svati12

@svati12

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Posted: 9 years ago

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Svati12

@svati12

Stunner

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Posted: 9 years ago

Do gv ur comments n views on ds OS..

I vl b waiting...

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Mdwst

@Mdwst

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Posted: 9 years ago

First of let me Congo you for writing your first OS.
What a topic to write about
It was emotional, you had taken into account all the situations. I teared up, it's painful to see ishita left, she reiterated that he ( raman) was the one and only one in her life.. It will always be so. The line that she's waiting for her death, was heartbreaking. I'll try to add some more later.

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zainab kassim

@sahra1977

Explorer

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Posted: 9 years ago

very good story it made me cry please do continue soon please

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raksha

@cutieruhi

Trailblazer

+ 5

Posted: 9 years ago

It was very beautiful swati

Must say well written

But I want a second part where ishra will be together back

Update soon

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Alu-

@Alu-

Inactive

+ 3

Posted: 9 years ago

Great great story, I cried reading it. I know story ended but second part with patch up would be great

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snehaseshan

@snehaseshan

Dazzler

+ 2

Posted: 9 years ago

Beautiful xlent 👏 loved it 👏

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Sharmin

@fSharm

Rocker

Posted: 9 years ago

Congo for ur first os dr...
Awesome dr..
Wel written...
Wanted another update yar...

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Balasri

@Sri1091

Sparkler

+ 2

Posted: 9 years ago

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So emotional yaar d words whch she couldn't say on face she wrote in a letter atleast she took it off from her heart and made things clear I would love to read Raman's POV too after reading this if possible plzz wrote dat too

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