IshRa OS || Dhadhkan

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-Atii-

@-Atii-

Rocker

Posted: 9 years ago

Back with another OS. This was inspired somehow after watching the movie Dhadhkan.. I don't really know what I wrote, myself. I just thought of this concept and before I could stop, I had started penning it down.. So here is nothing.

My insane girls 🤗

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-Atii-

@-Atii-

Rocker

Posted: 9 years ago

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Vijaya Priyadarshini

@ishra_bestluv

Rocker

Posted: 9 years ago

bring it on😳

lovely...😳😳😳

Edited by ishra_bestluv - 9 years ago

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Svati12

@svati12

Stunner

+ 3

Posted: 9 years ago

please make it to MEMBERSONLY n also NOCOPY

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-Anku-

@-Anku-

Stunner

+ 4

Posted: 9 years ago

Atiii MERI JAAN 🤗 oops sorry I shouldn't have used that endearment 🤣 but you are my jaan mai kya karun.

I have told you this innumerable times before and telling you now, your love and attachment and IshRa and the way you perceive them is so palpable I swear that the intensity on the show isn't even half to what you depict when you write.

I love the confrontation they had, the outburst and like always they were both ready to give up each other for each other. It's something IshRa would do. Only they can destroy each other and then heal each other, can fight each other to no end and then fight the world for their love and just a few stanzas have made that so visible here.

I love the end, love their verbal lashing and inner turmoil worded so well in dialogue. I didn't want it to end. 😒

But this was beautiful and I love you for writing 🤗

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Boo2014

@Boo2014

Voyager

Posted: 9 years ago

Really enjoyed ready this.

I'm glad Raman grew a pair and went to get his wife back. I've not been feeling anything for Ishra since the leap, but having read your story I am gushing again.

My favourite part was when Raman said 'When you're sneaking from your husband to come see me because let's face it, he will never satisfy you the way I do." 😳

Well done 👏

Edited by Boo2014 - 9 years ago

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gargpoo

@gargpoo

Sparkler

Posted: 9 years ago

Awsm...
U said right in ur previous os...mani is best for ishita bt he is not raman..
They r imperfectly perfect for each other
Loved it

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Pasoori

@ChanChanMan

Rocker

+ 6

Posted: 9 years ago

👏

I don't wanna ruin it's beauty with my words

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MG_Inactive

@MG_Inactive

Dazzler

Posted: 9 years ago

Oh God, Ishra 🤗

The lines are so raw, hard-hitting yet so lovely.

They are not perfect but together they just fit in like a puzzle.

If possible, plz do write an epilogue to this.

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scookie2

@scookie2

Beginner

Posted: 9 years ago

#10

Gosh, why doesn't BT fire their clueless CV's and hire these awesome writers on the forum. I could only say DT and KP will do a fantastic job of portraying this onscreen . Great writing!