FS || Dheere Dheere Se...|| COMPLETED on Page-19 || April/13

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Hi guys...

Actually I reserved another thread for the same update but sadly I could not post it there 😔 IF sucks at times 🤢😆

Coming to this story...;

Most of you know this story, which I started as an SS and did not continue because of certain reasons that I don't want to point down here. I've been avoiding the topic of posting it from a while but Abha, Nishu were pestering me too much, and I had tried at last!

Well...this is not going to work with other stories. Once you get a bad vibe...it's difficult to collect your thoughts to make it up. And I'm not going to work hard again 🤣

Finally...I'm here with two very very very lengthy updates.

Those who had read the story would be finding it easy to read because most of the part is that which I posted already. A difference is, I've changed the narrative style for my own convenience because it is difficult to describe everyone's POV in a TS

Hope you would enjoy it...


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Posted: 9 years ago
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Posted: 9 years ago
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itna saara res kyun?
me too res

I typed twice a long comment
now I can't
seriously IF is irritating
will give u long comment on next update
sowwwyyy


nice updates
devil Raman n poor soul ishu
feels bad for both
but I love Raman.
update soon
Edited by Roohachu - 9 years ago
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Posted: 9 years ago
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Thanks for continuing DHEERE DHEERE SE,
PMs kyon nahi diya?
Edited by vij1978 - 9 years ago
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Posted: 9 years ago
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Huge...
Me and my 1000 words are ready 🤣

Btw one more part to come kya...??
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okay i will try bit long one...pardon me if i blabber...this is cool to make it long one😉...

Before i did commented but was not that big...

So let me start,...Raman is a big jerk...u know super big one...Girls are play for him and he just wanted to find a pray...He get one...who turned about to be ishu...who was highly impressed with Ramu(not kaka😆)...we cant blame her...RKB is just😳...But characters matter tooo...but let our snow white which is painted more white offcourse by u is now foolish tooo and ofcourse bff ever bond is back,...so she praises for Raman ...who is like bro or frnd to her...Now i got it why RKB was evil😆...sara paint shagun par kahatam ho gya na...🤣...thoda bahut bachaa tha tumne ashok pe laga diya...

That parmeet stunt was just🤢...RKB is so cruel...He doesnt care what she will felll...poor her think she found solace,,,,...but she was with devil in disguise...aaaghhh this man...and parmeet...though u didnt painted him white...


Ishu is naughty and so attracted to devil that she tried to be naughty with Raman...haaye☺️...madrasan is in love...But he didnt felll..😭...hard nut to crack.,...And they kissed☺️☺️...But he was in lust mood😡

and he promised ashok...thank god...or else poor ishu...

Even after trying to so much he didnt get her...he could not take her to bed,...He just let her fall for him...so bad man...

ab yeh richa ka kya panga h yar...what is she upto...about Ashok what they planned yar...i am scared hope no danger for ishra...

I think there is more to all this bala mystery yar...but Raman got one more reason for revenge...Hope he doesnt do anything bad with Ishu...I am scared...she trusted him...kept him above her parents and instead getting just betrayal that to for one night...this is so cruel on Raman part...

But shaggy came...so Raman is trapped...He cant literally show his true face to shaggy bcoz he married ishu and he is goody in front of shaggyy...so what will hapoen next...

I tried to give longish one...it is around 400 words...i know i am breaking it...but 1000 is tooo much...u just made it member post...i cant even copy post lines i love but want to tell u...

This worth all mine and nishu efforts...yeah ours😆

i dont know how many times i typed plzzz for this and finally sunday deadline...but u cheated so did I...my 1000 will full with whole update...

But u know i love u...thank u so much for typing this...even though u were in no mood...

thank u long update...

Next part kal yaay...

Update soon!!!!!!
Update soon!!!!!!
Update soon!!!!!!
Update soon!!!!!!
Update soon!!!!!!
Update soon!!!!!!
Update soon!!!!!!
Update soon!!!!!!
Update soon!!!!!!
Update soon!!!!!!
Update soon!!!!!!
Update soon!!!!!!
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Update soon!!!!!!
Update soon!!!!!!


yeah this increases word😆😉

excerpt to my old comment...thats effort...i literally searched story then my comment...huhh...too much time for this comment...


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i read it whole...tum phir raman ke peeche padh gyi...
let him live and love...😳

poor ishu she will be heartbroken...still fool and will gave upon as always like ishu do...like she did manmarziyaan...can ur ishu be hard on raman? just asking re...

Hope he gets needful pain...😆...

Waise again a question...same one which i always ask...yeah jtjb2...😆🤣

chal have peace,...i will not irritate u more...😃


second comment...

Hmmm ...Awesome part.., so something gone a happen...
Obviously this will not go expected way...so I am waiting for more surprise and obviously raman to fall in love...I know its not easy but yeah I am waiting...

Waise bhi name bhii dheere dheere h...

Update soon...

P.s. I too love u and miased u...

P.s.s. why u are not on wa...


Uske baad u discontinue...

P.S. I miss my p.s.
P.S.S. there still one thing common...i still ask for updates...🤣..
P.S.S.S. I hate u now❤️😳

Edited by --abha-- - 9 years ago
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Posted: 9 years ago
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Originally posted by: Roohachu

itna saara res kyun?
me too res


Some error...
I couldn't post in the previous thread.
Don't expect another story 😆
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Posted: 9 years ago
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Originally posted by: vij1978

Thanks for continuing DHEERE DHEERE SE,

PMs kyon nahi diya?


PMs on the way 😳
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Posted: 9 years ago
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OMG!!!
I'm yet to recover😲...I can't believe you actually continued this one...I was sure that you'd ditch me n abha😆...but you updated

Now the update...
You said its looong right,but this was just like a synopsis...
Actually only the last part was new... Baaki sab same...
So I disagree,I wasn't long😉

Raman n shagun,he treats her as his sister🤣😲
I liked ashok n Raman's bond...but he shouldn't support Raman when its about women...only if he'd injected some sense in raman😕

I like shagun,as of now...
In all this my heart goes out to ishita,she'd be shattered if she realizes that she's fallen for a man, who might ditch her once he gets what he wants...ishita😭

Now what's with iyers and bhallas, Bala killed rinki😲
Kaise sochti ho yeh sab😆
Its completely pathetic yo seek revenge from ishita,for whatever bala did...that's bad...Raman😡

Richa n ashok...what's their plan😕...is it cos of her Raman turned this rude n heartless??

Why does Raman ruin women...I mean why destroy them??
I hope he gets his lesson...
Devil kahika😈

And the last part of the update... What is ashok up to???
Cliffhanger😡
I need an update... Soon...
Pleaseee
Pleaseee
Pleaseee

And yes this is one of my favorite stories... No not just yours,on the whole❤️
N I do not noe,why I like it soo much😳
Edited by -Nii- - 9 years ago
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Posted: 9 years ago
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Originally posted by: --abha--

Huge...
Me and my 1000 words are ready 🤣

Btw one more part to come kya...??


Yeah I'm waiting...
BTW, one or two more parts are there...
I don't know if I'd be able to type long one and wind up in another part.
I won't update Mannmarziyan today. I'm tired...you know I typed it twice 🤢

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