FF: AFTER LOVE update chp 8 pg 25 25th april

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AFTER LOVE
Hello, fazza is back, i'm in UK now. Well, i don't really bother about the show anymore, actually i just got an idea so i tried to pen it down while having a night shift in the ward. Do comments everyone :) Thanks in advance.

CHARACTERS:
MAIN

Raman: 28 years old well established ceo. Married to ishita on basis of building up a perfect family for his orphan niece, ruhi whom her parents passed away in accident. He dream to have a perfect life with another woman name Shagun but God know better for him.

Ishita: a simple 27 years old dentist, dreaming of having fairytale like married life but her destiny told the opposite thing ; infertile & not worth to be married , her life was demeaned by this stigma. Unknown to her, a little miracle will change her destiny, perhaps...

Ruhi: baby girl that change the whole story of life for her uncle raman and ishita.



PROLOGUE

A hard slap landed on her face, stain of blood appeared beside her lip... "Ishita.. are you ok?" asked mrs bhalla which shooked her out of her shock.A non stop tears make a way out of her brown eyes..

"Don't you bother ma to ask this cheap woman is she ok or not. She is a bloody murderer, my daughter almost die because of her! Inspector, take this woman away!" raman spit those hurtful words..

Ishita lost all the strength that she had, she is not a murderer but with those accusation from her husband, she surrendered herself to the police, "take me please.." said her in a choked voice😭. Her weak steps dragged her out of raman's sight.

"Ruhi, be strong, papa will punish that woman who tried to take you away from me.." said raman in angst when he obserevd his 6 months old baby girl fighting for her life.


Should i continue or not? Please do leave comments and suggestions.


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Posted: 9 years ago
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Interesting
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CHAPTER 1

"Ishita!!! how dare you try to take away ruhi from me! who do you think you are?! you are just a cheap bloody baanj whom being rejected by the world. You know you are the biggest mistake in my life and i won't ever forgive you if anything happen to my ruhi. your life will become a hell for you. You deserved to be alone in this world, that's why god make you infertile. Get out of my life now! i'm sick of you for a long time and now get lost before i can kill you with my bare hands.!" roared raman in anger which make the situation became havoc in the hospital.

On the other side, ishita hopelessly accepted all those harsh words that killed her instantly at the moment, she also almost loosing her
daughter but at that time nobody sees her pain, they only know that she is the almost murderer to be, "raman..hear me.." replied her while inching closer to him. She did not expect to receive a big suprise from him..

A hard slap landed on her face, stain of blood appeared beside her lip... "Ishita.. are you ok?" asked mrs bhalla which shooked her out of her shock.A non stop tears make a way out of her brown eyes..

"Don't you bother ma to ask this cheap woman is she ok or not. She is a bloody murderer, my daughter almost die because of her! Inspector, take this woman away!" raman spit those hurtful words..

Ishita lost all the strength that she had, she is not a murderer but with those accusation from her husband, she surrendered herself to the police, "take me please.." said her in a choked voice. Her weak steps dragged her out of raman's sight.

"Ruhi, be strong, papa will punish that woman who tried to take you away from me.." said raman in angst when he obserevd his 6 months old baby girl fighting for her life. He leave the hospital and drive somewhere in a mission to do justice fo her daughter without realizing he will punish an innocent soul.

Meanwhile ishita blankly stare the concrete wall, she was put behind the bars solely on basis of attempting doing a murder, unknown to the world she love her daughter to the extend that she can sacrifice herself and how can she being accused as a murderer? She was dead inside out that she had nothing to fight anymore, thus she took the blame without reasoning with it. She was totally shattered and thinking ending her life is better than living with the guilt.

"Pathak, i want you in any way possible punish this woman.She tried to harm my ruhi!" raman let out his frustation while having a
conversation with his lawyer. "Bhai..calm down.. i will try my best..lekin bhai, what if in any possibilities you punish bhabhi for no reason..bhai... what if she innocent?" said pathak. "No! she is not innocent! let me tell you pathak, that woman already ruined my dream and now he tried to snatch my baby, to the hell she is! raman said in furious while throwing away the glass in his hand.

"Ishita.. you have a visitor. you have 5 minutes to talk.." said the warden. "Ishu di...why jiju did this to you..." said mihika in tears.. "ssshh.. don't cry na, its all written in my destiny miku.. mama or papa know about this?" asked her. Mihika, her younger sister
nodded negatively." don't tell them yet miku, they will be shattered, let me faced all this alone. you have to stay strong my girl, take care of ma and pa.. i'm sorry i will always being a bad luck in everyone's life." said her and unable to hold her tears anymore, she broke
down right at the moment. "I will help you di, i'm a lawyer remember? i'll prove you that jiju had convicted the biggest mistake in his life." said mihika in determination. She leave from there in a mission of saving her sister, the one who will always make everyone happy even she is the one who suffered the most.

Ishita sit in the corner, only a dimmed light accompanied her behind the bars. "You are the biggest mistake in my life! you deserved to be a baanj!" those harsh words echoed in her mind. Crystal clears tears make a way from her eyes," raman.. i know where my place is in your life, but please don't kill me like this, i'm not a murderer...i'm not.." she was drowned in her pain and agony..

"From the beginning till now you really make my life a hell, i'll never forgive you if i lose my ruhi! i already lost my dream because of you cheap woman!" raman in angry mode, plus the effect of alcohol. His family member scared to come near to him in this situation because they were well known how raman can turn into a monster if anyone hurt his ruhi.

"Mrs bhalla, ruhi is currently stable and we will monitor her from time to time to ensure everyhting improved positively.." a doctor
informed the anxious grandparents. "Thank you my lord" said mrs bhalla while having a sigh.. "Romi, tell raman ruhi is stable..quick.."asked mr bhalla to his youngest son. He nodded positively. "Hello..bhai.. ruhi is stable now..come quick.." said romi.Raman quicken his steps to meet his daughter.

"Ruhi..mumma so sorry na baby.. i don't deserve you in my life, you only get pain because of me..ruhi..ruhii..." mumbled ishita while her whole body shivered on the cold floor. beads of sweats formed on her forehead. She is feverish, her breath is erratic, her face became pale. "Ishita..get up..get up now!" said the warden sternly. Unknown to her, ishita is halfway conscious, her fever is so high that it only permit ishita to merely open her eyes.. Lastly, she lost it, the last thing she can recall was she was rushed to the
hospital...unknown fate of her.

At one side a little girl won the battle of life while the other part, her mom surrendering her fight to survive..

to be cont.. much appreciate any comments or suggestions :)
Edited by mafaz29 - 9 years ago
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Posted: 9 years ago
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Oh wow that was a brilliant start to this story!!!
So sad and emotional!!!😭
Poor Ishita being slapped by Raman and accused of murder!!!😭
He also says that she deserves to be called a banj!!!!😭🥺
Ishita taken to jail accused of murder - Mihika to defend her!!

On one side Ruhi gets better but on the other Ishita fallen really ill!!!!

Please update soon I cannot wait for the next part!!!
Thank you so much for the pm!!!!
Oh and welcome back - we missed you loads!!
Hope all went well in Africa!!!!!!
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Posted: 9 years ago
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Hey for the first time I am the first to comment yipppeee!!!!!!!
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Posted: 9 years ago
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Welcome back Fazza..
Hope u r doing good re..
U r back with a bang it seems..
What an heart wrenching update it is..
The Accusations, the cry, the agony, the plead & finally the guilt...
U r an unbelievable writer woman..
But I seriously wish that u make Raman understand as soon as possible that Ishu is innocent..
Cont soon re...
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Plz update soon the nxt part
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awesome update di
so emotional
Raman slapped ishita and that harsh words...
finally ruhi is stablle and now ishu is in hospital
bang on di!!!!
update soon
thnx for the pm!!!

P.S: plz Pm the link nxt time as i was not getting the link..thanks again😊
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Very emotional plsss update soon
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Originally posted by: nahtani88

Interesting

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Update Soon
Thanks 4 The PM


Thank you, will update asap😊

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