ISHRA TS: Tu Naseeb Hai mera..Shot 2 updated on 8 April - Page 7

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Posted: 9 years ago
#61

Originally posted by: Cutie-smiley10

interesting story update soon



Thanks dr
will be updating soon😊
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Posted: 9 years ago
#62

Originally posted by: sukanksha

Awesome
N the shayeri was too good



Thank you so much di
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Posted: 9 years ago
#63

Originally posted by: Mitishrafan

Lovely update
Love in disguise
Ap shayer to nhi 😉



Thanks Mitali
kuch yuhi samaj lijiye Janab😉
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Posted: 9 years ago
#64

Originally posted by: mayraa

Superb start

Like the shayari
Continue soon


Thanks dr
will cont soon dr😊
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Posted: 9 years ago
#65

Originally posted by: maduragymhasium

sorry for late reply dear

welcome back dear

amazing

fabulous start dear

i love it so much dear

but i have an request dear please give english subtitles from next part if possible please ( not well in understanding hindi )

continue soon dear


Its alright Lakshmi di
i m sorry lakshmi di
i cant give subtitles it takes lots of time
hope u understand di😊
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Posted: 9 years ago
#66

Originally posted by: sonidivan18

nice story line
ishu is mad for Raman n anjan, plz both should be one
shayari is fabulous, I read all shayari very carefully, it's awesome
but raman wali shayari was best
first meeting in the bus...nice
waiting for the next part
plz pm me



Thank s dr
may i know ur name plz?
will be updating few min dr😊
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Posted: 9 years ago
#67
Hello guys
i m back with an update
first of all Thank you so much for ur comments
and sorry, i m unable to give subtitles as it really consumes my lots of time ...sorry again Shaarmin di and lakshmi di
hope u understand...

I had try to give u a big update guys
but the next update will be after 17 April i wont be able to penn it down the next one so soon ...
hope u understand.
Regards Tanu

not proofread
enjoy reading...


Shot-2

Raman:

Khoobsurat Tumhari Aankhen,

Aankhon Mein Haya Bhi Hai

Inpe Duniya Main Vaar Deta,

Par Ye Cheez Khuda Ki Hai

Ishu: wow...kaafi achhi shayari bol lete ho aap...

Raman: kya kare aap ki khoobsurat aankho ne hume kehne pe majboor kar diya...

Ishu: achha...aur bhi kuch kahiye...hum zaroor sunna chahenge janaab

Raman: lekin phir aapko aap ka naam batana hoga...deal

Ishu laugh

Ishu:deal...

Raman: to chaliye aap ki khoobsurti se shuru karte hai

itna khoobsurat chehara hai tumhara
har dil diwana hai tumhara
log kehate hai chand ka tukda ho tum
lekin ham kehate hai chand tukda hai tumhara

ishu: hmm kuch zyada hi tareef kar di aapne humari...

Raman: jee nhi humne wahi kah jo humara dil ne kaha...waise is chand ka naam

Ishu smiled(st):kyu na ise galat naam batau..haa. ye hi achha rahega

Ishu: Naina...

Raman:

Be Naam Musafir Hoon Be Naam Safar Mera
Kis Rah Nikal Jaon Kuch Kah Nahi Sakta

Be Naam Meri Manzil Be Naam Thikana Hay
Kis Dar Pay Main Ruk Jaon. Kuch Keh Nahi Sakta

Iss Paar To Roshan Hay Sara Mera Rasta
Us Paar Andhera Ho Kuch Keh Nahi Sakta

Tinkay Ki Tarah Main Bhi Beh Jaon
Samandar Main Mil Jaye Ga Kinara Kuch Keh Nahi Sakta

Mil Jaye Gi Tabeer Mery Khawaboon Ki Aik Din
Ya Khawab Bikhar Jayen Kuch Keh Nahi Sakta

Ab to bata de apna asli naam

Musaafir hi to hu koi dhoke baaz nhi jo daga de jao

Aur itne aasani se koi kisi ko daga de nhi sakta

Ishu: hmm...mera naam naina hi hai [hmm..my name is naian only]

Raman: uff..asli naam to bata do...mujhe pata hai iss puri bus main naina naam ki koi ladki nhi hai...are yaar abhi ticket le kr aa raha hu list dekhi hai maine...

Ishu: oh!!!

Raman: naam nhi batana to bol do

Ishu:Ishita...

Raman:huh?

Ishu: Ishita naam hai mera... Aur ye hi sahi naam hai...tumhari baari

Raman: Raman...

Ishu:raman(a dreamy smile appear on her face)

Raman: kaha kho gyi..

Ishu: kahi nhi

Raman: achhi baat hai khayalon main khona

Ishu: kya matlab

Raman: chaliye hum apne andaaz main samjhate hai aapko

Ishu:to samjhiye...

Raman: gaur farmaiye...

Kashish Dil Ki Har Cheez Bhula Deti Hai
Band Aakhon Mein Bhi Sapne Saja Deti Hai
Sapno Ki Duniya Jarur Rakhna Dost
Kyun Ki Hakikat Aksar Logo Ko Rula Deti Hai

Ishu: kya baat hai...aap to bade shayar hai

Raman: haan yuhi kabhi kabhi mann ho jaata hai...

It was raining outside heavily...someone from front open the window and now ishu's whole face was wet...due to rain drops...

Raman: arey bhaisaab jara window band karna..paani andar aa rahi hai

Person: sorry...

He closed the window...

Ishu wipe her face...

Raman: aap thik to hai...puri bheeg gyi hai

Ishu: nhi ...koi baat nhi...

Wo baarish hi kya jisme hum na bheege

Raman: oho to aap bhi kaafi achha bol leti hai...

Ishu: naah...bas thodi koshish kar leti hoon...

Raman: mujhe aur sunne ki tammanna hai..sunayengi aap?

Ishu: zaroor...

Raman: to sunayi ye

Ishu: well issi baarish ke andaaz ko baya kartein haain hum...kisi k liye...

Barishon Ka Mausam Hai Rooh Ki Fizaaon Mein Ghamzada Hawaaein Hein

Be-Sabab Udaasi Hai Iss Ajeeb Mausam Mein Be-Qarar Raaton Ki Be-Shumaar Baatein Hein

Un-Ginat Fasanay Hein Jo Bohat Khamoshi Se Dil Pe Sehtay Phirtay Hein

Aur Ba-Amer-E Majboori Sub Se Kehtay Phirtay Hein

Aaj Mausam Acha Hai AAJ Hum Bohat Khush Hein

Raman: ye app ksis ka kehkar khud ka hale dil bayaan kar rahi hai mohtarma

Ishu: jee nhi hum ne to kisi ka hale dil bayaan kiya...hum ne humari baat to ki hi nhi

Raman: to ab aap ki baat kijiye..aapko ye mausam pasand hai ya nhi?

Ishu: aapko itni dilchasbi kyu hai...jaise aapne kaha hum musafir hai...yaha se kahi aur chal denge...phir jaan kr bhi kya faidaa...

Raman: hmm..intellligent

Ishu: wo to hoon hi...

Nd they both started to laugh

Raman: achha kya hum dost ban sakte hai...

Ishu: humara safar shayad yahi tak tha agey humme akela raasta tay karna hai,,...milenge to dost banenge nhi mile to yaad ban ke saath rahenge...

Raman: phir bhi dosti karne main kya problem

Ishu: dosti karna asaan hota hai..usse nibhana mushkil

Raman:

Alag pahechan banane ki aadat hai hume,
zakham kitne bhi gahere ho muskurane ki aadat hai hume,
luta denge dosti me sab kuch kyuki dil se dosti nibhane ki aadat hai hume...!

Ishu: achhha...to chaliye hum aapk dost hue..par abhi jaana hoga...

Raman:

Abhi na jao chodkar k dil abhi bhara nhi...

Ishu: Dil to samandar se bhi gehra hai...wo bhar jaye to ghum hi kyat ha...

Sorry have to go ...bye...

Raman: bye

After some time they both reached pune and part their ways...unknown to them was the game of their fate which destiny has planned for them...

Raman reached their house and ishu her house...

Raman's house:

Maa: arey puttar tu to bheeg gya pura...jaa jake fresh ho jaa

Raman: maa maine kaaha aap se mujhe shaadi nhi karni...phir bhi aap ho ki samajhti hi nhi

Maa: arey puttar tere papaji ne jaane se pehle apne dost ki beti ka rishta tere saath tay kar diya tha

Raman: par mujhe abhi koi nhi chahiye

Maa: ab kya mera itna bhi haq nhi hai k main marne se pehle tum dono ki shaadi dekhu

Raman: maa..aap hi ka to hq hai mujhpar...warna main to anath tha aap dono ne hi to pal pos kar bada kiya...14 saal ka tha jab papaji ghr le kar aaye the...

Maa: na puttar mera wo matlab nhi tha

Raman: jaanta hoon ma...sorry..nas yaad aagya aaj itne time baad aap ne unka zikar kiya isiliye'

Mihir:waise bhai aaphi ne to ghr ko sambhala hai papaji k jaane k baad

Raman:aisa kuch nhi hai...filhall ye hai ki mujhe abhi shaadi nhi karni...

Maa: haa to shadi mat kar na..kudi nu dekhle bas...thik hai

Raman : achha thik hai maa...

At ishu's house:

Ishu: appa...aap ne kyu mera rishta tai kar diya wo bhi bina mujhe bataye,,...seriously appa...mujhe shaadi nhi karni bas

Appa: kanna plz manjao na...acchha shaadi mat karo..ladke ko to dekh lo. Sirf ek baar mere liye...pls kanna...

Ishu: ladka kya karta hai? Kaun hai

Appa: wo surprise hai

Ishu:kya? Mujhe ladk ka naam bhi nhi pata...kya naam hai bolo na aapa

Appa: kaha na surprise hai kal pata chal jayega...so chill ishu...jao bahot thak gyi ho..thoda aaram kar lo...

At night in ishu's room:

At call with mihika:-

Ishu: miku mujhe shaadi nhi karni...plz samjhao na appa ko

Miku: akka mujhe abhi abhi pata chala. Ladka aur koi nhi balki mihir ka bhai hai

Ishu: kya? Oh no!!

Miku: kyu? Kya hua ishu? Tu tension mat le , tu bata dena kit u kisi aur se pyaar karti hai...

Ishu: achha aur phir wo appa ko jaake bol dega and sab kuch khatam phir

Miku: to phir ek hi raasta hai

Ishu: kya?

Miku: bhool jaa raman ko...nikal de uska khayal apne dil aur dimag se

Ishu:

Dil Se uska Khayal Jata Nahi,
usk Siva Koi Yaad Aata Nahi,

Ji Chahta Hai Ke usko Roz Dekhun Par,
Woh Waqt Kabhi Aata Nahi

Miku: shayad waqt kabhi aayega bhi nhi

Ishu: nhi nikal sakti use apne dil se...2 saal se be intehaa mohabbat ki hai maine unse

Miku: ab ye hi ek raasta hai...

Ishu:ughhh...miku..mujhe tujhse baat nhi karni...bye goodnight

Miku: ok..goodnight...

AT Raman's room:

Raman: pata nhi kaun thi wo

Phir bhi ye dil ussi ki yaado main khoya...

Hayye bade dino baad aisa laga jaise khoyi hui kashti main koi kashtiwala aa gya

Aur mano kashti ko kinaare mil gya

Thodi der baat pata chala wo to musafir tha...abhi iss kashti main to phir dusri kashti main chala gaya

Raman bas bhi kar wo sirf ek hissa tha teri safar ka...duniya k liye raman bhalla ek rude arrogant insaan hai koi shayar nhi cha lab so bhi jaa

Both slept in each others thoughts unknown to them

Next morning both families were sitting in living room of Ishu's house...soon Ishu was called and she did appear in kanjivaram saree of pink colour.

As they both saw each other they both said "aap?"

Ishu: aap yaha kya kar rahe hai...don't tell me ki aap mihir k bhai ho?

Raman: haa main hi hoon..koi shaq haai aapko...

Maa: tum dono jaante ho ek dusre ko?

Raman: nhi maa hum kal bus main mile the...

Maa: achha thik hai...

All were sitted and chatting with each other

Raman: main Ishita se akele main baat karna chahta hoon

Appa: haa haa kyu nhi bte

(to ishu): kanna inhe bahar garden main le ke jao

Ishu:ji..aaiye

Raman: after you

Both smile towards each other and headed towards

In the garden both were sitted in the table

Raman:

Jeene K Lye Dard Ka Samaan Bohat tha

Kuch Roz Se Apna Dil Pareshan Bohat tha

Milte Hain Shabo-Roz Sabhi Log Hum Se

Aik Tujh Se Mulakat Ka Arman Bohat tha

Humne ki fariyaad uss khuda se aik mulaqqat ki

Aye ajnabi us ne sunli aur fariyaad muqammal ho gyi

kyunki akhir kaar mujhe tum mil gyi

ishu: Ab flirt karna band bhi kijiye...mujhe aap se serious baat karni hai

raman: Aur wo kya hai?

Ishu: Raman dekhiye mujhe filhaal shaadi nhi karni,,...maine kal hi apni exams di hai so abhi degree milna bhi baaki hai...but appa hai k mann ne ko hi tayyar nhi hai

Raman: hmm...thik hai..waise sach kaho to abhi mujhe bhi shaadi nhi karni

Ishu: wo kyu?

Raman: actually mujhe important kaam hai to main kam se kam six months tak usmain busy rahoonga..u know main apnaa poora time nhi de paonga agr shaadi ho gyi to

Ishu: oh!! Thik hai...

Raman: waise aap age karna kya chahti hai?

Ishu: mera ambition kahe ya dream but mujhe the famous Criminal Lawyer Raman Bhalla k under kaam sikhna hai..nd I just wanted like to be him..a great lawyer...

Dekhiye na Itefaaq se aap ka naam unse milta hai

Raman:achha...hmm wo to aap ko jaald hi pata chal jayega...

Ishu: main kuch samjhi nhi

Raman: ughh...main keh raha tha ki mujhe aap pasand ho...main shaadi k liya tayyar hoon par abhi nhi...mujhe lagta hai hume thoda time saath main spent karna chahiye...ek dusre ko janna chahiye...kyu?

Ishu nodded nd gave a nervous smile to him and they headed to the living room where all were sitted

IN LIVING ROOM:

Maa: ho gyi baat?

Raman: ha maa, mujhe Ishita pasand hai par

Maa: par kya?

Raman: maa humme ek dusre ko janne main tho waqt chahiye aur tab tak mera current case bhi khatam ho jayega ...

Maa: kitna waqt?

Raman: six months

Maa: thik hai...

Mihir: congo bhai!!!! Aur Ishitaji aaj se aap humari bhabhi hui

Maa: to hum mihir-mihika aur raman-ishita ki shaadi ek saath hi karenge...ab aap ki dono betiyaan humari hui...aur hum humari amaanat yaha chod kar jaa rahe hai

Appa : jee zaroor

Mihika too reach there but mihir'family was gone till then..she was so happy and excited as her marriage was fixed with Mihir now,,...his prince charming

In Ishu's room:

Mihika barge in

Miku:Ishu ishu ishu..i m so happy...finally appa man gye..shaadi k liye...

Ishu:hmm

Miku: hey kya hua? Kyu udaas ho? Raman Bhai ache nhi hai kya?

Ishu: aise nhi hai par ishq to Raman Bhalla se karti hoon na,,

Miku: mere pass ek idea hai jisse lathi bhi na tute or saap bhi mar jaye

Ishu: kya?

Miku: shaadi ko six months baaki hai...so in this time why don't you tell Raman Bhai that u r already in love with Raman Bhalla...

Ishu: offcourse I will tell him yaar..i wont keep him away from the truth...

Miku: achha ab bata anjaan ka kya...?

Ishu: kya? kuch nahi

Miku: tune decide kiya kit u kis se pyaar karti hai? Anjaan se ya Raman Bhalla se

Ishu:offcourse Raman Bhalla se...anjaan ki awaz se pyaar karti hoon..kahi na kahi usk gaane m jo dard hai use mitana chahti hoon...

Miku:thank god..warna main to confuse thi k tu kisse se pyaar karti hai. Chalo ye clear ho gya...

Ishu:hmm...

AT night:

Ishu was thinking something suddenly her phone beep with a msg

Raman: kaha khoyi ho?

Ishu: kisi k khaya lo main..

R:kya wo hum to nhi

I: ji nhi...

R: haaye ek hi tamanna dil main liye baithe the ki app humare hi bare soche par wo bhi puri na ho saki

Ishu: achha..gaur farmaiye

Raman: sunaiye

Ishu:

tamanna ne zindagi ke aanchal mein sir rakh kar poocha..
"main kab poori houngi?"
zindagi ne muskura kar kaha,"jo poori ho jae wo tamanna hi kya?"

raman:

Tum mile har khushi mil gayi hai hume,
Lagta hai ki dusri zindgi mil gayi hai hume,
Zindgi me Jiska tha saalo se intezar hume,
Jeevan ka saathi bina maange mil gaya hume.


That's it for now guys...

hope u like this

Do like and comment

Love ❤️Tanu😊



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Posted: 9 years ago
#68
Nice one Tanu dear..
Their journey was nice..
Next day they got the shock of their life..
Both accepted the proposal..
I understood some shayaris not all..
Good going..
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Posted: 9 years ago
#69
Superb loved it raman bhalla is the anjaan n criminal lawyer too hope ishu ko aur shock na mile plsss update soon
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Posted: 9 years ago
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Very nice update dear update soon

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