ISHRA TS: Tu Naseeb Hai mera..Shot 2 updated on 8 April

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I know I m Back soon...
Thank you so much guys...
i recieved a lot pms to continue my story and not to be hurt by someone...
thank you so much for cheering me first rakshu di, pooja di then ishu, ash, and many more guys..
who supported me and told me to come back...
Rakshu di..I havent Thanked you yet...
u were the first person in this forum who supported me...send my pms and motivated me along with Nithya di to write more...
I love u di...❤️'

kya di kabhi maine aap ko Thank you bola hai...nhi na...aaj bolti hoon...Thank you so much...🤗🤗.







Rakshu di this story is a gift for u from me...aur kuch filhaal de nhi skti

This special Thank you to all my lovely readers who supported me and almost convince me to be back soon...so Thank you so much guys...🤗🤗😳

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NOTE:

I am continuing my stories now...but will be taking a break in mid April to May..as i have my exams in may...so i m back here due to all u guys...

This story is FOUR shot...well i will try to give my updates regular and will complete this story soon ...pls tell me if u like it..i will extend it only if u guys want...sorry i cant extend my OS when they fall in Love and my TS- Roz shaam aati thi....as i had already written them...but surely i ll give epilogue of both soon...
well this idea popped in my mind and i m here with my new story

Rakshu di, I m dedicating this story specially to you and also my readers who appreciate me...Thanks once guys...😊😃


PS: sorry i cant give subtitles as it takes lots of time...Hope u guys understand😊

Edited by ..Armor_ishra.. - 9 years ago
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shot 1- pg 1
shot 2- pg 11


Edited by ..Armor_ishra.. - 9 years ago
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Saath to mangne se mil sakta hai
Lekin pyaar magne se nhi milta
Kyunki Pyaar kiya nhi jaata
Pyaar to ho jaata hai dil se dil ko jab koi achha lagta hai



|| TU NASEEB HAI MERA||



Shot 1-

Chaliye ek kahaani sunte hai...kya? sunna hai aapko...to suniya na..maine kaha roka hai aapko...😆

In room:

Miku: arey ye kya shuru kar diya tune phirse...sone de mujhe yaar...ishu?

Ishu: chup...sunne de mujhe...mere anjaan ka gaana aa raha hai...

Background sound on the radio

Jukhi Teri Palko Mein

Mil Jaaye Mujhe Panah

Palke Ghire Aansu Bhari Reh Jaaye Mere Nishan

Tute Dil Ki Mat Kar Tu Fikar Mere Hamnawa

Pyaar Du Tujhko Is Kadar Reh Jaaye Mere Nishaan

Mere Nishaan.Mere Nishaan

Mere Nishaan.Mere Nishaan

Mere Nishaan.Mere Nishaan

Mere Nishaan.Mere Nishaan

Ishu was also singing with the somg ...soon song ended...

Miku: seriously...subbah subah neend kharab kardi meri...

Ishu: chup miku...mera mood bahot achha hai..kharab mat kar...

Miku: tera kuch nhi ho sakta...chal college k liye ready ho jaa...library jaa kr pad le kuch...kal paper hai

Ishu:haan...finally last paper hai...aand then phir mujhe meri degree mil jayegi and I will work with my role model...Raman kumar Bhalla...

Miku: sapne dekhna chod...tu mujhe ye bata tu Anjaan se pyaar karti hai ya uss Raman kumar Bhalla se...huh?

Ishu: Raman Bhalla to meri inspiration and main anjaan par fida hoon you know uski biggest fan...maine do saal se ye sapna dekha hai ki mai Raman kumar Bhalla ki tarah ek Famous criminal lawyer banoongi..infact unhi k niche kaam kar k banna hai mujhe...

Miku: shakal dekhi hai kabhi unki?

Ishu: nhi..na unki dekhi na anjaan ki but unki saare cases study kiye hai maine...wo apna sirf naam aane dete hai ..koi bhi news channel unki photo nhi dikhata pata nhi kya kiya hai unhone...ye dekho aaj ka unca new case jo main pad rahi hoon...

Miku: tu pagal ho gyi ya to raman k pyaar main ya anjaan k...

Ishu: I love both of them...wo kehte hai na

Tera Na Milna Mera Naseeb Hi Sahi Lekin,

Ae Sanam Meri Qismat Mein Likha Hai Tujhe Toot Ke Chahna

Miku: Itna pyaar karti hai un dono se

Ishu: hmm...jiski koi seema nhi hai

Miku:

Us Ajnabi Ka Yun Na Intezar Karo

Iss Aashiq Dil Ka Na Aitbar Karo

Roj Nikla Kare Kisi Ki Yaad Mein Ansu

Itna Kabhi Kisi Se Na Pyaar Karo

Samjhi?

Ishu:

Ek Ajnabi Se Mujhe Itna Pyar Hai

Inkar Karne Pr Chahat Ka Ikrar Hai,

Use Pana Nhi Meri Taqdeer Mein Shahid,

Phir bhi Har Mod Pe Usi Ka Kyun Hai.!

Miku:achha ok..ab bata agr tujhe shaadi karni hogi to kisko choose karegi tu?..anjaan ko ya Raman ko??

Ishu: offcourse Raman bhalla ko...main anjaan ki biggest fan hoon usse pyaar karti hoon but mujhe pata thodi hai unki real identity kya hai...is he married or not?

Miku: if he is not married then?

Ishu:Miku wo mujhe nhi pata...

Miku:exactly kyunki wo sirf ek ajnabi hai...u know tera anjaan...anjaan hi..aaj tak kabhi kisi ne nhi dekha use...wahi baat Raman Bhalla ki bhi hai...wo bhi ajnabi hi hai...

Ishu:

Wo Ajnabi Sahi Koi, Rishta Zaroor Hai

Mene Kisi Jaghan Use Deikha Zaroor Hai

Ye Aur Baat Hai Wo Milta Nhi Humein

Lakin Humare Pas Wo Rehta Zaroor Hai

Hum Hi Samajh Na Paye Tu, Us Ka Qasoor Kiya

Kuch Khamoshi Ke Lub Se Wo Kehta Zaroor Hai

Sansoon Ke Aane Jane Sy Milta Hai Ye Ehsas

Es Dil Mein Koi Aj Bhi Rehta Zaroor Hai..

Hayye wo ajnabi sahi koi, rishta Zaroor hai...

Miku: par do alag logo se itna pyaar kaise?

Ishu:uff..ye to mujhe bhi nhi pata...

Miku: ye pyaar nhi but tera ek infatuation ya vrush hai..thats it...warna ek ajnabi se koi kaise pyaar kar sakta hai?

Ishu:

Ek Ajnabi Se Hamein MOHABBAT Hogayi Hai

Ye Zindagi Hamari Mukammal Hogayi Hai

Sochte Hain Wo Chehra Kaisa Hoga Jis Se Hamein CHAHAT Hogayi Hai

Jab Leti Hoon Naam,Ye Saansein Mehek Uthti Hain

Ab Ye Saansein Bhi Meri Us Ki Hogayi Hain

Miku:ab ye kis k liye tha

Ishu:Raman Bhalla k liye...

Miku:ughh...ishu u r totally mad now

Ishu: kya kaaru pyaar insaan ko pagal bana hi deta hai...

Miku:

Ajnabee Mehfil Main Kisi Se Dil Na Lagana.

Suna Hai Bin Bulaye Anay Waly Bin Bataye Chaly Bhi Jate Hain.

Ishu:

Dilme Me Aansuon K Siwa Koi Cheez Nahi Tikti


Kab Milegi Uski Yaadon Se Mujhe Mukhti


Zindegi Toh Mela Hai Ajnabiyon Ka


Kisi Ajnabi K Chale Jane Se Zindegi Toh Nahi Rukhti

Miku: achha agar wo tera ajnabi tujhse pyaar na kare to?


Ishu:


Na Koi Kisi Se Door Hota Hai,


Na Koi Kisi Ke Kareeb Hota Hai,


Pyar Khud Chal Kar Aata Hai,


Jab Koi Kisi Ka Naseeb Hota Hai...

Miku:teri baat sunkar muhe naseeb aur taqdeer ki ye baat samaj hi nhi aati..

Ishu: kaunsi?

Miku:

Taqdeer Se Apni Sabko Shikayat Hai...wo kyu ye pata nhi

Hairaan hoon main jab sab ko shikayat hai to tujhe kyun nhi

Jo Dost Nahi Mil Sakta Usi Se Mohabbat Kyu Hai

Kitne Kaate Hai Raho Pe

Phir Bhi Dil Ko Usi Ki Aarzo Kyu Hai

Jab naseeb main dil lagana hi tha

To phir use teri taqdeer ne milaya kyu nhi......

Ishu:

Mohabbat Muqaddar Hai, Ek Khwab Nahi,

Ye Wo Rista Hai, Jisme Sab Kamyab Nahi,

Jinhe Saath Mila, Unhe Ungliyon Pe Gin Lo,

Jinhe Mili Judaai, Unka Koi Hisab Nahi...

Samjhi?

Miku: ye sab kehna aasan hai ..tu jisse chahti hai wo tera na hua to? Wo anjaan aur Raman Bhalla dono alag hue to? Obivio dono alag hai...par phir bhi

Ishu:nhi dono ek hai...tujhe bataya tha na ...mai gyi thi studio anjaan ka pata lagane...manager ne kaha k unhe bhi nhi pata but ek CD aati hai...maine uski puri info nikali thi and wo CD..the great Raman Bhalla k office se aati hai...

Miku: ye coincidence bhi ho sakta hai na?..wo sirf ek ajnabi hai..yeh baat tu jitni jaldi samaj le utna achha haai...

Ishu: ho skta hai...u know aisa lagta hai jaise main janti hoon usse..jaise wo aas pass hi hai...usk gaane main dard hai jo mujhe mehsoos hota hai...apne andaaz main kahe to

Ek Ajnabi Hay Magar,Rooh-Shanas Lagta Hy

Meri Tarha Mujhy,Wo Bhi Udaas Lagta Hy

Karon Talash Tou Ho Shak Wajood Pe

Us K Jo Aankhain Band Karon,Aas Paas Lagta Hay

Miku : ughhh...ishu.tujhse main kabhi jeet paayi hoon? nhi na..so i don't wanna talk about this...mujhe ready hona hai library k liye...

Next day after giving the paper...in campus:-

Ishu: yayyy...finally papers khatam...

Miku: haan yaar ek tension khatam...ishu sunna ...

Ishu: ha bolna...kya baat hai..tu serious dikhri hai bahot...

Miku: mujhe orphanage jaana hai

Ishu: mai bhi yahi soch rahi thi...chalo chalte hai

Miku: par..

Ishu: par kya miku

Miku: appa ka phone aaya tha..he wants us to come home asap...

Ishu: haan to thik hai na...I ll book tickets of night...now we will go to orphanage and at night will travel to pune...

Miku:ishu. Night will not be safe na

Ishu: hmm...so what u wanna do?

Miku: simple..convince appa that we will come tomorrow...

Ishu: ok...but I want something...

Miku: what?

Ishu: I wanna meet ur boyfriend...ur buddhu just once...

Miku:what? But why? Ishu main dekh rahi hoon u r desperately trying to meet him since one week..what is the matter

Ishu: kuch nhi bas milna hai mujhe...

Miku: are par kyu? Kahi tujhe usse

Ishu:chup pagal...kuch bhi sochti hai..he is like my brother jaise u r my sister...plz na miku

Miku: achha thik hai ...wait mujhe use call karne de..

She calls her buddhu which is none other than mihir

Mihir: Hello miku, aaj itne jaldi phone? Are haa tumhara paper kaisa gya?

Miku: arey mihir, paper achha gya...ishu ko tumse milna hai

Mihir: kya? Achha thik hai but kya main jaan sakta hoon kyu?

Miku: offo Buddhu, mujhe pata hota to main tumhe pehle nhi batati..abhi hum bahar jaa rahe hai..kya hum dinner k liye mil sakte hai...

Mihir: main zaroor milta miku but main abhi pune jaa raha hoon kuch kaam hai important, maa ko leke

Miku: maa? Oh tumne bataya tha kuch imp kaam k liye jaa rahe ho ryt?

Mihir: ryt...chalo I m driving, bye...

Miku: bye, drive safely

Nd the call ends.

Ishu: ab kya hua?

Miku: nhi milsakta...travelling to pune kuch kaam hai...

Meanwhile ishu receives appa's call stating to come home soon and board the very next bus...they had urgent work from her in the morning...

Ishu: miku, ek kaam kar why don't you go to orphanage, mai next bus pakadkar pune nikalti hoon, tu kal aa jaana...whats say?

Miku: but tu akele?

Ishu: chill miku...i m not a small kid so relax I ll manage...bye

And they both headed to their destinations...

Kehte hai jo hamari destiny main hota hai wo humme mil kar hi rehta hai...to chalo aage bade k hamari ishu ki destiny m kya likha hai...

Ishu was hurrying at Bus stop as it was last bus to Pune...she somewhat grab that bus...After Half an Hour bus stop near a restaurant to have some refreshments for passengers

Same time at that restaurant too somewhere Raman was talking to mihir

Raman: kya yaar mihir? Ye gaadi ko abhi kharab hona tha yaar...

Mihir:bhai..aap restaurant main hi hona...waha dekhona koi mechanic mil jayega aapko

Raman: are sab se puch kar ho gya..yaha ka mechanic bahar gya hua hai...

Mihir: are bhai aap jaha ho waha buses rukti hai dekho na aur chad jao bus main...

Raman:par mihir milna to chahiye na...

Mihir: arey bhai dekhoge to milegi

Raman: mihir ek bus aayi hai..main inquiry karta hoon...call u later

And he hung up the call.

It was starting to rain so he approach to the conductor as fast as possible...

Bus conductor:arey ek hi seat khali hai par double paisa lagega..chalegi

Raman: haan baba chal jayegi...

And he take the ticket and move to his seat...

Raman(st): seriously koi bolega ki iss bus main the great Raman Bhalla travel kar raha hai...agr maa ne kasam na di hoti to aaj main apna case solve kar raha hota...yaha bus main nhi...

He was searching his seat and saw his seat was beside a very beautiful girl...

(she was none other than our ishu)

He saw her...she also gave him a look

Raman(St)kya aankhe hai ...haaye chal jaa k baith jaa...raman control tu ladki dekhne jaa raha hai.

He sat beside her and bus started his travel while they both started their journey unknown to them...

Ishu is very fun loving person while raman...ab main kaise bata sakti hoon...main to sirf ishu ki story bata rahi hoon na...so u guys see what happen next main to chali...I m sleepy guys...

Raman:(st) bore ho raha hoon kya karo? Ye to gaane sunne main magan hai...pata bhi isse ki itna handsome hunk isk baju main baitha hai...ek nazar dekhne ko taiyaar nhi...

He was thinking this and suddenly his phone fell down. Now ishu look at the phone and when he picked up his phone she was looking at him...

Ab hamare raman puttar se raha nhi gya...

Raman:

Khoobsurat Tumhari Aankhen,

Aankhon Mein Haya Bhi Hai

Inpe Duniya Main Vaar Deta,

Par Ye Cheez Khuda Ki Hai

Ishu: wow...kaafi achhi shayari bol lete ho aap...

Raman: kya kare aap ki khoobsurat aankho ne hume kehne pe majboor kar diya...

Ishu: achha...aur bhi kuch kahiye...hum zaroor sunna chahenge janaab

Raman: lekin phir aapko aap ka naam batana hoga...deal

Ishu laugh

Ishu:deal...

Raman: to chaliye aap ki khoobsurti se shuru karte hai

itna khoobsurat chehara hai tumhara
har dil diwana hai tumhara
log kehate hai chand ka tukda ho tum
lekin ham kehate hai chand tukda hai tumhara

ishu: hmm kuch zyada hi tareef kar di aapne humari...

Raman: jee nhi humne wahi kah jo humara dil ne kaha...waise is chand ka naam

Ishu smiled(st):kyu na ise galat naam batau..haa. ye hi achha rahega

Ishu: Naina...

Guys i had given my every effort for this shot

pls Do like and give longgg comments...


Love❤️ Tanu😊

Edited by ..Armor_ishra.. - 9 years ago
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unres
as i said before
its just awesome
and the shayaris are so good
loved the whole concept
continue soon
thanx for pm
Edited by vaishnavi28 - 9 years ago
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updated shot 1
have a look
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Res
Unres...
Awesome..
Ishra hav not met each other until now...
They are still strangers...
& ishu say her name as naina...
Interesting...
If possible can u give englishvsubtitles..
Edited by fSharm - 9 years ago
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Superb!!! Ishu is completely mad, loved her.. n Raman toh pehli nazar me flat ho gaye!! Continue super soon
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Nice update yaar ishu loves Raman Bhalla and now he is with her and she doesn't knw dat he is Raman Bhalla wow and I too think dat singer is Raman only kahi indono ki shaadi keliye nahi soch rahe hein inke parents??
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lovely update tanu dii
ishra bua meet was awesome
waiting for nxt part continue soon

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