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This was a beautiful idea to write on. Something so different from the usual. The man caring more for the girl, busy in enjoying his life and the girl more bothered about their future and thus end up hurting each other. I would have expected an intense and long bitter separation here but the mature angle this story has taken surprised me. Both the characters went though a journey of understanding the others point and situation and in fact came out stronger from the ordeal.
I am in love with how you can create such strong characters in the span of a few updates, sometimes even just One shots. That although they aren't the same from the show, we can feel them.Can't wait for the next one. 😳
Thank you so much! Glad you liked the concept of this one with Raman being more carefree while Ishita is focused on their future! If I were to write a longer separation, it would have been a longer story to write with very impulsive and angry character which I find hard to write. So I took an easier way when what I had originally planned for this one to go on with them stepping into the other's shoes to realize where they themselves were going wrong! I'm glad you liked this take on this concept and enjoy the characters that are created, it means a lot! Thank you so much for liking and commenting!
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