Ishra TS || Distance || Completed

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Posted: 9 years ago
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Hey everyone! I'm back with one more TS. This one is something I had been thinking about for a while, but never got down to writing it out. And after staying away from writing for a couple of days feeling extremely uninspired, I finally began to write and this idea came back into mind. Hope you all will enjoy this one...

||Distance||


Prologue - Below
Shot 1 - Page 8
Shot 2 - Page 16
Shot 3 - Page 22
Epilogue - Page 27


Prologue


She into their dark apartment turning on the dim lights. Checking her watch that read 1am, she sighed thinking about how much sleep she would be getting before she entered their room. Slowly walking in knowing he would asleep by now, she was left looking around when she saw the state of their room. Stepping onto the rose petal scattered all over the room a sweet fragrance took over, she looked around to find her fianc.

She looked on sadly when she found him sleeping on the couch in sitting position telling her he had fallen asleep waiting for her. Slowly walking over to him, she kneeled down by him before she gently shook him. As he stirred in his sleep, she called out his name softly.

"Raman..." He opened his eyes slowly sitting up straight and began to rub his eyes getting a hold of what was going on around him.

"Hmm...you're here?" He sluggishly asked her yawning.

"Come on...go sleep on the bed." She tugged his arm asking him to get up and as he did slowly walking over to their bed. As he saw her tiredly taking out her pyjamas, he slowly got into their bed throwing off the roses scattered around it as he asked her...

"Did you eat?"

"At a meeting...did you?"

"I got tired of waiting so I had some of the take out." She knew he was expressing his displeasure and only looked down as she mumbled an apology knowing he had been looking forward to some time with her.

"I'm sorry...again."

"It's okay. Just put the champagne back for another day." He lay down in bed shutting his eyes while she shook her head upset over ruining his plans and making him upset.

"I promise I'll make up for tonight." She tried to smile at his sleeping figure while he only opened his eyes looking at her as he nodded before he turned his back to her. As she began to walk to their bathroom, he mumbled to himself thinking she had gone, but she heard him as he complained to himself...

"Like you did for last week...and the week before..." He sighed in frustration before he covered himself with the duvet and went back to sleep while she quietly walked into the bathroom to change thinking about how everything that changed for them.

He felt something under his head and as he pulled out a card that he had left on for her. It had been 4 years since they had gotten together and he wanted to make this day special for them, however it seemed as if it didn't really make a difference to her whether he had done anything or not. She was just too busy for him that he couldn't even get one day that was special for both of them. In his anger, he ripped apart the card he had made for her and threw it away before angrily going back to bed wiping off a tear that had fallen from his eye.

On the other hand, she knew they hadn't been getting as much time with him as before after she had moved in with him a year back right after he had proposed to her. But she hoped he would understand that she had become busier than ever when she had gotten her promotion, and she was only working this hard for him. Looking down at the 4 carat solitaire diamond ring that he had put onto her finger and looking around at the newly renovated lavish bathroom she was in at the moment, she knew he hadn't been able to afford any of this but had still gotten all of this for her.

And now all she wanted to do was help him pay off everything. But now she found herself in tight spot when working for them and their future came at the cost of this distance cropping up between them when they were supposed to be closer than ever before. And with their grand wedding that she had excitedly planned not knowing what it meant for them before nearing sooner than she thought, she didn't know what to do. As she wiped off a tear that fell from her eyes thinking about how upset he was with their lack of time together, she only hoped that whatever would happen would make them both happy in the end...

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That's all for the prolgue! Please do like and leave your feedback! Looking forward to reading it! And for those of you asking me to update my other TS and SS, I will get to those once I finished this one and get some motivation to continue writing on Ishra again...

Also PMs will be late for this one...

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Posted: 9 years ago
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Wow.. u r back with a bang prab...,
Is this based on any yhm tracks or something different ?
Loving it
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awsm prologue dear
loved it
felt bad for both of them
plz continue soon

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U r back...yayyy
Intetesting prologue..
Both r sad...
Cont soon
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Posted: 9 years ago
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Hi Prabh 😊

It feels great to have you back on the block!

First of all, I love your narrative style. It's got this charm to it... a simplicity which not everyone inculcates!

The prologue was exceptionally well written. It's amazing how at your age you are able to pen with such maturity. The topics you tackle in your works are so urban and relatable!

I really liked it how two people, even though, have this unwanted distance cropped between them; care so much for the other ...!!

I loved the prologue and I'm waiting to see how the duo dissolve this distance!

Perfection defines your talent! God bless you baby!! 👏
Edited by Badtameez_Dil_1 - 9 years ago
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Posted: 9 years ago
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Hi Prabh,
Sounds interesting

Thanks for the pm
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I fell in love with your writing all over again. The reason is simple, you wrote and brought out both of their emotions and the love behind it. I am so glad that I am your reader.
Continue soon would love to read this concept, I also had something similar in my mind. But would love your version of it.
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Nice prolouge dr...
Different concept..
Continue soon..
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Posted: 9 years ago
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Hey u r back
nycc prologue
both love each other bt r having prblms due to lack of tym
continue soon
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Posted: 9 years ago
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Hyeee prabh!!

This looks interesting...
I am excited...

Update soon!!!!

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