ishra ss:For All Eternity||part-16 aug-27th - Page 10

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Posted: 9 years ago
#91
its nice but also feeling sad for raman and anshu specially for raman how he is living without anjali and what happened to her why she is not in this world is she is suffering from some disease or any body killled her plz tell what hppnd to her and also continu
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Posted: 9 years ago
#92
Lovely
Update Soon
Thanks 4 The PM
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Posted: 9 years ago
#93
awesome update
loved it
cont soon
thnx for the pm!!!
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Posted: 9 years ago
#94
Hi Friends iam updating my next part,i couldnt reply to your comments as i took most of time in writing next update i will reply to all comments later,thanks for your love towards this story,hope you will love this story till end😊

note:should i write anjali/raman part in bits between present situation or should i complete first anjali and raman past then continue with present or should i not write anjali and raman part at all in the story,please let me know your thoughts so that i can continue further,please let me know😊

part-2A:

morning:

raman walks into the kitchen where his mother and neelu preparing breakfast 'maa please make a tea for me and warm the milk for anshu
i will wake him up as i have to go early to the office'
mrs.bhalla:raman till when you will struggle alone,you cant manage office work and anshu at a time,you know anshu's health was not fine
please marry nidhi raman
raman:maa you may love nidhi as she was your brother's daughter,but i cant marry any other woman,for this life it will be anjali
mrs.bhalla:but raman anjali is not there now with you
raman:for you she might not be here,but for me she is existed in every corner of this home and my heart
mrs.bhalla:thumse baath karna mujjse nahi hoga,listen one thing raman a mother cant see her child pain,please try to understand me
raman:iam happy maa,iam living with anjali's memories,you are worry unnecessarily about me
mrs.bhalla handing over the tea to raman she speaks "your wish raman,today you have doctor appoinment for anshu health checkup"
raman:i will take anshu to the hospital in the evening while coming back to home,now let me go and get ready your grand child,everyday it will be a big task for me to bath him
mrs.bhalla:laughing at his son's plight 'go and try to pass in your exam i will bring milk to anshu
raman:walks into his room agreeing with his mother
seeing his son playing with toys he walks towards him 'anshu come you have to brush your teeth'
anshu:jumps into his father's hands listening to raman's words
...
raman was taking out his suit and anshu new pair of dress when his mother walked with milk
anshu:hides under the bed seeing milk in his granny hands
raman:anshu come out papa has urgent work in office
anshu:papa mujje duudddh nahi chahiye,he speaks prolonging each word
raman:then papa will go alone to office
anshu:comes out glaring at his father angrily
mrs.bhalla picking anshu into her arms helps him to complete drinking his milk
raman:putting anshu down tries to remove his shirt to take him to bath to only get pulled back by anshu
mrs.bhalla:smiles seeing father and son fight getting started
raman:anshu common what is this,daily you will create drama while removing your clothes
anshu:papa shame shame
raman:no shame shame anshu,iam your papa naa
anshu:chii papa
raman:anshu come fast now
anshu:nahi yeh mera dress hi
raman:ha meri baap yeh thumara dress hi,but now you have to take bath
anshu:nahii shame shame not listening to his father he runs around the room being stubborn to remove his clothes while raman runs behind him
atlast catching anshu he removes his clothes and takes him for bath
after lots of play with his father both duo comes out from bath and gets ready to office
mrs.bhalla:raman dont forget to take anshu to hospital
raman:anshu haa maa i wont
carrying anshu he walks towards his car
on the way to office
anshu was settled in the passenger seat safely secured with seat belt while raman drives to his office
he stops at lodi gardens and takes anshu into his arms after getting down from the car,standing infront of the garden
he looks at anshu with tearful eyes,while anshu wipes away his father tears and kisses his cheek very lovingly
making raman to walk into his memory lane of anjali
3years back:
raman completing his MBA returned back to his city delhi where his papa put forth a test to raman before handling his business to his son
mr.bhalla:raman you did MBA course but we have one branch with fashion designing you doesnt know anything about it so first join in my friend raghuram company as
an employ learn fashion designing and then take the management of our companies
raman:papa this is too much,just for one branch you are asking me to work in some other companies
mr.bhalla:an MD should be able to manage all his business so work for 4months in my friends company thats it
mrs.bhalla:haa bhallaji after 4months we will do raman's marriage with nidhi
raman:maa just stop it i doesnt like nidhi,iam waiting for my dream girl
mr.bhalla:now you both stop your nonsense and get into the work
mrs.bhalla:walks into the kitchen scolding her husband while raman walks out driving his car to his company where he has to work
...
raman halts the car with a sudden break infront of lodi gardens seeing a beautiful woman in yellow chudidhar who is none other than anjali
he couldnt take of his eyes from anjali
he looks at the auto rickshaw infront of anjali where the driver is trying to repair his car while anjali was biting her nails frequently checking time in her watch
raman walks towards the driver 'problem kya hi'
driver:rickshaw karab hogaya saab,turning to anjali 'madam please hire some other rickshaw'
anjali:iam getting late now,next time please check the rickshaw condition before you ask the passenger to get into it,she scolds him softly paying him the required amount
driver:sorry madamji
raman:hello miss
anjali:Looks at raman
raman:where you have to go,i can help you
anjali:thanks no need,i will hire some other rickshaw
raman:see you are getting late,iam helping you
anjali:i have to go ARR fashion designs
raman:ok you know the address right
anjali:haa
raman:then please come i will drop you
anjali:after thinking a lot to get into his car or not she gets into his car
while raman makes a dance inside seeing her getting into his car

ignore typing mistakes😛
please do comment as i wrote it even after getting tired from my work 😊

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Posted: 9 years ago
#95
it was nice part dear
so cute and lovely
anshu antics r so cute
raman is in so much pain
fb scene was so nice
and i want raman past with present
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Posted: 9 years ago
#96
Very nice part...
Raman loves his anjali only
Raman anshu scenes r so cute
Fb ws fantastic...so they r going in same co..
Waiting for next
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Posted: 9 years ago
#97
Superb..
I think you should focus on present then reveal past in short
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Posted: 9 years ago
#98
superb
i too agree with rida di
just tell about the present cut past in short one...tell about ishra present..
it will be more interesting
well it is interesting only...
overall nyc ypdate dr'
i loved anshu's antic

haaye shame shame😆
update soon
thnx for the pm
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Posted: 9 years ago
#99
Very nice update dear... Plzz I want you to describe present ishra story cont soon dear
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Posted: 9 years ago
Awesome dr...
So raman's love z love at 1st sight...
Egerly waiting update soonish...

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