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Posted: 9 years ago

#71

Uff such a loonngg update
At first i feel bit discomfort to read bt atlast i ended up crying nearly 10-15 min while reading dis.
Such a beautiful story which shows true love n true friendship
Loved shagun n karan characters
And abhi hw much he stoop low to take revenge frm ishra
Ishra lost their baby too sad
Finally ishra ended up together glad
Gret work dr ur all stories r different wich hv magnetic power
100+ likes congratz

Thanks for pm

Edited by sanayhm0001 - 9 years ago

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lekahravi

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Posted: 9 years ago

#72

I'm new to this forum...
First I spotted ur OS...
OMG u r amazing writer...
Raman and ishu feelings ,emotions..well written...
Continue ur writing...
If u can pls pm for future updates...

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Greeshma

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Posted: 9 years ago

#73

WAAAW 109 Likes

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zeny_Nian

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Posted: 9 years ago

#74

Res

coming back to read n unres within a couple of hours :D

Unres

Sorry for not being able to edit on time...wrapped by the schedules you know

This is your OS han🤣

Okey this is such a good story...initially though I thought you just reversed yhm...but NO the story had so many plots and twists and turns to get me hooked till the end👍🏼...took an hour to complete reading.

Abhi the scoundrel raped her to separate them...wished his mh was ruined by Raman! Rooh baby tied them both finally😊

IshRa the chupe rustam had it already in their teens hmm but never let anyone Know🤣...it was always IshRa for IshRa...bechare side characters...kash serial dekh lete pahle.😛

brilliant story girl...try to come up more with SSS (short single shots )

Edited by zeny_Nian - 9 years ago

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rufana

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Posted: 9 years ago

#75

finally i have finished reading it...😳

nd seriously i'm speechless...it was

amazing...

fantastic...

awesome...

wonderful...don't have any more words to praise it...😳

only u can write like this Gaya 👏

kudos to your writing girl...

really liked it...😊

p.s. congrats for 110+ likes 👏

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Roohachu

@Roohachu

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Posted: 9 years ago

#76

Hlooo
Pehle kuch personal baath
I love U so much
U wrote it again
Thank u🤗
I'd completed reading this story the very next moment u send me a pm
N by now I read it 100 times.
Yep I read this story 100 times by now.
I just loved this one that much
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Coming to the story
It was just awesome.
Waise acha hi hua that u made it an OS;otherwise I'd have died out of curiosity
At first I was like Ishu - karan Raman - shagun
Totally confused relations.
N then as the story progressed I was confused that Ishita who believes in the system of marriage has such a irritating character I know not the apt word
N as I get to know about there past it was heart breaking.
It was always Raman n Ishita
Aur beech mein uss Shaniyan aagayi ABHI of crse😡😡😡😡
I hate him😡😡😡
How dare he do such a thing to a woman?
I just hate him.
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N the teeny weeny love story
While reading about that part I was like 😲Kya?
They were lovers once?
N when they lost their baby I was like 😭😭😭
I hate when babies get hurt
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N Karan is such a sweet heart
He brought the reality of Ishra's life infront of Raman n Ishu
Thanks Karan
I just love him
After knowing that Ruhi will not be his daughter even by name he loved her
That was sweet
Aur Shagun
I really loved her iss baar
She is also a sweet heart
Waise ab Shagun aur Karan akele ho gayi na?
Felt bad for them.
Shagun n Karan I love U both.
Ishra I'm crazy about them
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Well ek epilogue milegi kya?😊😉

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sukanksha

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Posted: 9 years ago

#77

Woh!!! I am speechless... It is just WOW wow wow wow

One thing I didn't get why people were against this ? Aiwe

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Greeshma

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Posted: 9 years ago

#78

wow girl 121 likes

Amazing

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Gaya3sb

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Posted: 9 years ago

#79

Originally posted by: AttitudeQueen13
wow girl 121 likes Amazing

People are crazy...
Once they would act like 'please gaya don't torture us with this crap' and then... 😆
I'm sorry to say but yeah...I'm not feeling good about it...though I'm happy as well 😳
I can't really do my entire stories like this no...in a go... 😳
Anyways...I'm happy for the response

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Greeshma

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Posted: 9 years ago

#80

Originally posted by: Gaya3sb

People are crazy...
Once they would act like 'please gaya don't torture us with this crap' and then... 😆
I'm sorry to say but yeah...I'm not feeling good about it...though I'm happy as well 😳
I can't really do my entire stories like this no...in a go... 😳
Anyways...I'm happy for the response

You're My rock star😳 . See Hard work never goes UNREWARDED👍🏼

Edited by AttitudeQueen13 - 9 years ago