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Greeshma

@FreedomOfSpeech

Dazzler

+ 2

Posted: 9 years ago

#61

Originally posted by: Sk-Sharmin

Gree told k u deleted dis1
den i checked..
was waiting fr u to continue bt tumne to kand hi kar diya tha...
THANKS TO GREE FR TORTURING U...
i love u Gree...

Of course honey i love you too 😳 . Agar vo aur dher kiya hotha tho update mei. My next target was you angu😈. I thought to torture you also ihaha😈. Coz of you only i got addicted to her lovey dovey ahem ahem stories🤣☺️

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Sk-Sharmin

@Sk-Sharmin

Voyager

Posted: 9 years ago

#62

Originally posted by: AttitudeQueen13
Of course honey i love you too😳. Agar vo aur dher kiya hotha tho update mei. My next target was you angu😈. I thought to torture you also ihaha😈. Coz of you only i got addicted to her lovey dovey ahem ahem stories🤣☺️

aiyoo...
mai kya kar sakti thi..
agr tune torture mujhe kiya bhi hota to...
i cant give u wht she gives to u... [stories i mean 😉]

i nly suggested u her stories..
u nly gt addicted to does...
dnt blame me..

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Roohachu

@Roohachu

Voyager

Posted: 9 years ago

#63

Hey Diii
Thanks for the update
Well this is obviously not a comment for this story as I'm not in a good mood to comment like the way it deserves to be.
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I really believe that U shouldn't have deleted at first Dii
U got 95 likes Diii for this update
I'm sooo happy
Congratulations.👏👏
I'll give a long comment once I get back in a good mood😊

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Malvika

@mayraa

Dazzler

Posted: 9 years ago

#64

Fabulous update gaya

U truly a twist Queen

I literally had tears in my eyes while reading it

Ishu & Raman suffered alot just because of that bloody abhi

Disgusting😡

I was enjoying when karan beat him to pulp

Like to see understanding shagun and karan

I'm glad to see them together again with their rooh

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swathin

@swathin

Rocker

Posted: 9 years ago

#65

Beautiful os
Really felt for ishra
Their emotional was beUtiffuly expressed

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nafnaf

@nafnaf

Rocker

+ 3

Posted: 9 years ago

#66

Oh wow that was unbelievable!!!!!

When you had first started this story, although I read and wanted to continue reading it, I was not too sure as I could never reconcile the fact that Ishita seemed to be the villain and Shagun was Raman's saviour.

Now having read the OS in one go - I have to say that it has been one hell of a roller coaster ride!!!!!!!!!!

Ishra being first for each other at the age of eighteen yayyy!!! And because of that Raman could not commit to any other girl!!!

They get married "sirf business ke liye"!!!!!!!!!!! and they fall for each other (of course😆) I felt sorry for Abhi at first but that soon changed!😡

What a nasty piece of work he turned out to be!!!!!!!😡😡

Poor Ishra both suffered so much without knowing the real culprit, instead each blaming the other!!!!!!!😭💔

Karan was so sweet - I loved him and poor Shagun (for a change I felt very sorry for her)

Loved it when Karan beat Abhi to pulp and gave him so much pain and maybe even disabled him!!!

Loved it when Karan came to Shagun and tried to pacify her and together they explained to Raman what happened and Shagun released him from his promise!!

Please writ an epilogue and bring these two together - that would be so sweet!!!

Thank you so much for writing this in one go - extremely beautifully written and it was sooo well worth spending whole day writing it as I have just spent most of my morning reading it!!!!!👏👍🏼

Please continue writing like this (and also please consider an epilogue??!?!??!?)

Thank you so much for the pm!!!🤗

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Gaya3sb

@Gaya3sb

Rocker

+ 4

Posted: 9 years ago

#67

@Abha and Sri
Like really 😲

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Balasri

@Sri1091

Sparkler

+ 2

Posted: 9 years ago

#68

Originally posted by: Gaya3sb
@Abha and Sri
Like really 😲

Yes really

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asma18

@asma18

Inactive

Posted: 9 years ago

#69

Omg ..Omg Amazing OS! 👏 👏 👏
Loved it sooo much
Rula diya aapne. ..
So so beautifully written. .. 👏
Finally ishRa ek sath hai. ...
I liked karan shagun...
Thank you so much for this amazing story 🤗 🤗

Edited by asma18 - 9 years ago