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Posted: 9 years ago

#21

Originally posted by: kaa1202
Amazing one Prabh..
CVs turned everything into comedy..
But this one is apt.
Reactions of a father who thinks that he failed r unbelievable..
Hope u write more like this re..
Great work...

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Originally posted by: sireesha76
Awesome OS prabh
Loved it

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Posted: 9 years ago

#22

Originally posted by: ishrasoul
Superb

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Originally posted by: kras
Amazing dear
I was thinking it is about radi
But I was surprised to know that it is about Mr bhalla and raman
U did a fabulous job

Cvs end this track in a comedy manner
And I was so disappointed with this
But we can't do anything
But thank u for write this

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Posted: 9 years ago

#23

Originally posted by: cutekhusboo
Awesome os...

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Originally posted by: MysticRiver
Nice OS..👍🏼

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Posted: 9 years ago

#24

Originally posted by: 7APK
Mind Blowing
Amazing OS
Loved it
Thank for the PM

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Originally posted by: smilesusmita
Superb os

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#25

Originally posted by: shravsss
Awesome prabh...
Col please sooner...

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Originally posted by: mystigue
awesome

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#26

Originally posted by: sririt
Very emotional update

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Originally posted by: NIDA.ISHRAFAN
Superb work

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#27

Originally posted by: Roohachu
Nice update Prabh
At first I thought its about Raman n Adi
I find out at last that it was Mr.Bhalla n Raman
Well emotional tha yaar
U wrote it well

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Originally posted by: Mdwst
Loved it it was beautiful
Bhallaji' so art was too emotional.
I thought it was Raman and the sick was adi...I was shocked it was bhallaji and Raman ..
Emotional

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#28

Originally posted by: meghnaghosh
To tell you the truth.. I was really confused about the story..couldn't understand what is happening and what has happened.. But then 'Raman' and I grasped it instantly.
A really nice take on what could have happened.
Please do write more such stories but the next one should be on Ishra (I know I am being greedy lol)..

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Originally posted by: traveller_girl
Superb os
Very nicely written

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#29

Originally posted by: sukanksha
Different one and a superb one.
I wish cvs learn from this one at least

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Originally posted by: -Kamal-
Very Beautiful OS

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#30

Originally posted by: ranisa123
awesome os dr.quite different but nice

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Originally posted by: maduragymhasium
sorry for late reply dear

beautifully written

you show the father pain to away from his son amazingly dear

so emotional

but more excellent dear

love it so much dear

👏👏👏👏

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Originally posted by: desire_nikki
Awsome Os yr...
I do have a slightest of idea that it was about Raman..
yippe i guessed it right..
it was so emotional...

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