An ISHRA OS- U CAN CALL ME LIAR parts-4@page-5

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Hima Bindu.CH

@himabindu.ch

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Posted: 9 years ago

Hello guys!! This is Hima Bindu... I feel like writing some thing for my Ishra for this V-day... I was hesitating from last 4-5 days... But thought of penning it down...

Actually it is based on an English album song which I love... On hearing it, I got the idea of writing an OS based on this song...

Here I go

Prolouge:

Ishita- Raman, who is this Sonali??

Raman- Sonali,,,, She is my friend Ishita... He is trying to cover up and he is avoiding eye contact with Ishita...

Ishita- So she is ur friend... Right??? Tumne pehle kabhi nahi bataaya uske baare mein...

Raman- Haa ha,,, She is my friend... Voh ku kuch din pehle hee US se aayi hai na... So U don't know about her...

Ishita- Jhoot mat bolo Raman... If friendship is the only thing between u people, then why did she cut the call when I picked up ur phone???? (Ishita is already in the verge of crying)..

Raman- Ishita vo...

So, How is it friends??? Give ur opinion on it.. Positive or negative let me know... Will be waiting for ur replies...😊😊

Index:

Part 1 and 2- page 3

Part 3- page 4

Part 4- page 5

Edited by himapriya - 9 years ago

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Hima Bindu.CH

@himabindu.ch

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Posted: 9 years ago

Thank you for your support guys...😃...

Here is the character sketch...😊

Raman Kumar Bhalla- Not rich by birth... worked hard in his life and now holds a good position in an MNC... Lost his family in a plane crash...😭😭😭... So he is all alone now...

Ishita Vishwanathan Iyyer- A pediatric dentist... No health issues as in the serial... second daughter of senior Iyyer couple(at chennai)... Lives with her akka and jiju(Bala and Vandu) in Delhi...

Mihika- Ishita's best friend...

Raman and Ishita - Neighbours in the old Mayur Vihar apartment... Love each other to core...❤️

Sonali- Friend of Raman in childhood...Highly qualified Doctor by profession... Recently shifted to Delhi...

Edited by himapriya - 9 years ago

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rufana

@rufana10

Dazzler

+ 2

Posted: 9 years ago

interesting prologue and

nice CS Hima 👍🏼

waiting to read d OS

update it soon...

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nafnaf

@nafnaf

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+ 3

Posted: 9 years ago

Interesting start please continue soon!!!!!!!!!!

I would really appreciate it if you were to pm me please!!!!

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1023427

Hibernated

Posted: 9 years ago

ITS nice And superb Dear and very interesting continu soon and pm me when u update and belated happy rose day.

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Hima Bindu.CH

@himabindu.ch

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Posted: 9 years ago

Hai guys... Thank you sooo much for ur support... 😃😃... Love U all...🤗...

Here is the part -1

Part-1

Ishita is in her clinic having some random chat with her friend Mihika...(Mihika works in Raman's office but in different section)... As there are less appointments for Ishita that day they both decided to meet and spend some time together...

Mihika- So madam,,, What's next??? You are in love with your prince since past one year... Are you going to tell uncle and aunty about ur love???

The very mention of Raman's name is enough to make Ishita's cheeks go pinkish... She was blushing and Mihika started teasing her..

Mihika- My God!!! Ishu even his name is enough for you to go weak on ur knees yaar... Kya baat hai... Voh bahut hot aur romantic hai naaa??

Ishita- Shut up Miku!!! Voh tumhara bhai jaisa hai... Don't you dare to call him hot ok???

Mihika- See this is the reason why my jiju calls you JKR...

Saying so Mihika looks at her watch and says she have to go as she had some pending office work to complete...

Ishita also gets ready to leave... On her way to home,,, she calls Raman to get a busy tone in reply... But she did not pay attention to it as she knows that he will be busy at office... She reaches home and gets freshen up... The time was 8:30 PM... She is looking at the opposite door still being locked... She thinks on...

At the same time,,, Raman is waiting for Sonali in a coffee shop... Just then Sonali came with her 1 year old daughter Ananya and hugged him...

Sonali- Sorry Raman, actually this choti naa,,, bilkul apne baap pe gayi hai... baby dekho,, yeh Raman uncle hai... say hello to him...

Raman who was dull till then on seeing Ananya, started smiling... He loves children a lot... He took her in arms and started playing and cajoling her... Sonali was happy that Raman is smiling heart fully and enjoying his time with Ananya.. Some time later they started talking about some thing serious and Raman's face is sooo pale...

They both were unaware that Mihika who came out for a walk is watching them from some distance... She is just warning her self not to think negative about her jiju... She know that Raman is not that type of guy who goes on shifting from one woman to another... But at the same time she is worried for Ishu... Any ways she did not want to confirm any thing based on this... So she silently goes from there...

At home,,, Ishita is hell worried for Raman, as he did not return home till now... She called him many times but he did not pick up the phone... She is pacing in the corridor, just then she heard his foot steps... She could feel his presence near her..

She turned around and she saw him there standing, totally exhausted and tired... His face is very dull and his eyes don't have that life in them... All of a sudden he seemed to be soo weak... She just ran to him and hugged him tight... He is soo numb that he is not hugging her... She released him and asked,

Ishita- What is this Raman?? It is 10 PM now... Is this the time to return home??? Why can't you be a bit early... i have been calling you from past two hours and you did not pick up my phone... She went on scolding him...

Raman was just listening all this silently trying to avoid eye contact with Ishita... He is just controlling his tears... She then realized that he is not responding and asked a bit worried..

Raman- Kuch nahi Ishita, vo office mein bahut kaam hai... So have to work late... and I am dealing a very big project... He said rubbing his for head...

Ishita- Raman,, are you ok??? You are looking pale... saying so she touched his face and then realized that he had fever...

Ishita- Raman, you had fever?? Why u did not tell me before??? You are working with fever all this while... Raman you have to take care of your health also na??? How can you be soo irresponsible??? First come inside... saying so she opened his flat and made him sit in the sofa... She went to bring food for him from her house... Raman tried to stop her but she is not in a mood to listen to him... Ishita brought the food and fed Raman... raman can feel the concern and pain Ishita has for him... He Know that she too had not eaten any thing,,, so he took a piece of roti and started feeding her... She ate it smiling... Thus they fed each other...

After they both finished dinner,,, she gave him medicines and and made him sleep... She kissed his for head lovingly and saw tears in his eyes..

Ishita- raman,, Kya hua?? Why are you crying??? Do you have head ache??? She asked worried...

Raman- just wiped his tears,,, and said Nothing dear,,, I just wanted to ask you why you love me sooo much???

Ishita- What type of question is this Raman??? I love you... means I just love you... That's it... No one will have a reason to love...

Raman- He is looking at her in awe... he is amazed and at the same time afraid for the love she had for him...

Raman- He said crying... You know mumma and papa ke marne ke baad, main akela ho gaya hun... It was you who gave me a new life by loving me, by caring for me... Tumhaare alaava iss duniya mein mere liye koyi nahi hai... Thank you Ishita, for loving and caring for this orphan... He said and hugged her ...

Ishita- Raman, how many times I told you that, you are not an orphan, I am there na... Kya main tumhe kuch nahi lagta kya??? She said crying...

Raman- You are my every thing Ishita... You are my reason to smile, to breath, to live... You are my world saying so he hugged her more tightly...

Ishita- then don't say that you are orphan... ok...

Raman- Ok JKR... I love you... He said staring at the ceiling... thinking of some thing...

Ishita- I love you too...

Saying so, she made him sleep by patting him... After he slept she again checked his temperature and felt relieved that his fever got down and went to her house locking his house from outside...

So how is it guys... Please give the feed back to me... Will be waiting...

Edited by himapriya - 9 years ago

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gargpoo

@gargpoo

Sparkler

Posted: 9 years ago

Very nice update ..ishra love each other..wat sonali n Raman were talking? Curious to know..y is Raman so sad n wat is he hiding??
Update soon!

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Hima Bindu.CH

@himabindu.ch

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Posted: 9 years ago

Hai guys!!!!😛😛!! First of all happy chocolate day for all (sorry it is very late)... Thank you all for encouraging me... I will try to put my best efforts in this...

Part-2

Next day morning, Ishita woke up and made coffee for Raman and went to his house to give it... She saw that he is awake by then...

Ishita- Gud morning Raman... How are you feeling now? Here is ur coffee...

Raman- gud morning yaar... I am fine now... he said taking coffee...

Ishita- Raman, tum aaj office mat jaao... Take rest for today... U are still looking weak...

Raman- No Ishita, not today, I have an important meeting... I have to go...

Ishita- Please na,,, Aaj rukh jaao... Thoda aaram karo na...

Raman- Main ne kaha na Ishita, I have a meeting and I have to attend it... saying so he went to take bath...

Ishita- nodded her head saying this man is impossible...

Then they both had break fast...after that they left for their respective works...

Raman was at office, deeply thinking of what ever Sonali told him... He cant stop worrying about Ishita... So he tried to divert his mind and concentrate on work.. He made some important business calls and mails...

On the other hand, Ishita is continuously trying to call Raman to ask whether he had his lunch or not... But all she got is busy tone... So she thought of calling Mihika and ask...

Ishita- Hello Miku, are you busy???

Mihika- No yaar, just had my lunch... what about you???

Ishita- I will have it later... acha miku, can you just see whether ur jiju had his lunch or not... Unka tabiyat thoda teek nahi hai... I am calling him from lat 1/2 an hour, but I think he is talking to some one on phone...

On hearing this Mihika's thoughts went to last night, where she saw Raman with another lady... She know that Ishita wont believe it even if she say about that... infact she her self cant believe it...

mihika- came out of her thoughts and said, see some one is soo concerned about my jiju here...

Ishita- Miku!!!

Mihika- Ok ok relax... I will see and inform you about it... saying so she hung up the call...

She went to raman's cabin where she saw Raman sitting with closed eyes and catching his head in his hands... On hearing the sound of the door knob, he lifted his head and saw Mihika standing there...

Raman- Arey Mihika, come in na, you need not ask permission...

Mihika- Jiju, Ishu asked me to inform her whether U had ur lunch or not... She is really worried about U... Are you Ok jiju???

raman could not stop smiling seeing the concern his madrasan has for him... Just then his phone rang and the name flashed as Sonali on his mobile... It did not go unnoticed by Mihika... Raman got tensed and told Mihika to leave saying that he will have lunch after some time as he had to attend some important call...

Mihika got even more suspicious about the phone call... So she decided to tell Ishu about it... She informed Ishita that Raman told he will have his lunch later...

That evening Mihika asked Ishita to come to a coffee shop to tell about her doubt regarding Raman...

Ishita- Miku, u told you have to tell some thing important... What is it...

Mihika- Ishu, What ever I am going to say, I am damn sure you will not believe me... But cant stop my self... I am just worried about your relation with Raman...

Ishita- Miku, kya hua, tum aisa kyun keh rahi ho...

Mihika- Ishu, maine kal raat jiju ko ek aurat ke sath ek coffee shop mein dekha hai... Unke saath ek choti bachi bhi hai...

Ishita- So u have a doubt that my Raman is having an affair with some random woman and they both have a baby also... What rubbish miku??? Tumne koyi aur ko dekha hoga... Yesterday raman was working in office till 9:30 PM... He just came home at 10 pm... How can you see him at a coffee shop???

Mihika- No Ishu, my eyes never lie to me... I saw him and the time was 8:30... I am damn sure about it... And today afternoon when I was in jiju's cabin, he got a call and it from some Sonali... You know jiju lied to me that it is some business call and he sent me out immediately... If there is nothing of that sort then why jiju had to lie to me...

Ishita- thinks on... But she don't want to believe all these... At the same time she knew that mihika cant be joking in such matters...she knows that Raman can do nothing of that sort.. But she is scared of loosing him... She says to mihika that she will ask Raman about it and leaves from there...

On her way home, Ishita still thinks about what Mihika had told her... She calls Raman...

Ishita- Raman, where are you??

Raman- Ha Ishita, I am at my friend's house... We met after so many days and he took me to his house...

Ishita- Acha ok... Raman, please come early today, mujhe tumse kuch baat karni hai...

Raman- I will try Ishita.. Ok bye..

Raman thinking- i am so sorry Ishita... I am so sorry... I am hiding the truth from you... going on telling lies... Please for give me... He wiped his tears and went in to the doctor's cabin...

I was trying to find a reason

to tell you that I'm sorry

I have been lying all this while

so that you never worry

Baby meeting friends and

working late it was just a story

Girl I lie , made you cry...

So how is it guys... Is it sooo boring???? 😳??? Will be waiting for feed back...

Edited by himapriya - 9 years ago