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Posted: 9 years ago
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Nice updates
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read both parts together
very nice updates...
beautifully written...
loved it
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Posted: 9 years ago
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Hello guys!!!! Here is he 3rd part... Hope you will enjoy it...😊😊😊
Part-3

Sonali and Raman are sitting in her cabin and talking about some thing...
Sonali- Raman, I can understand your situation,,, but you too need support in this situation... I think you have to tell Ishita about it...
Raman- Do you think I am getting pleasure by hiding all this from Ishita?? You know, I am dying each and every second... It is very difficult for me to hide any thing from Ishita... But how can I say that I will... She loves me way tooo much... how can she compose herself... I cant see tears in her eyes... No no... I cant do that...
Sonali- Ok Raman,,, as u wish.. I have talked to Dr. Sundar Paul... He told that he is in Australia for some important surgery and will see these reports after going back to France... You know he dealt many cases of this sort and most of them are successful... I just hope every thing will be fine...
Raman- Hope so... He said sadly... Then he saw the time and remembered about what Ishita told him...
Raman- Acha Sonali, I have to leave now... It is pretty late and Ishita will be waiting for me... Good night... Take care...
Sonali- Good night... and please don't forget about the medicines...
Raman- Ok... Bye...
Ishita is waiting for him in her balcony for him to enter the apartment premises... It is already 8:30 and till now he did not come... Raman just then entered the building and parked his car... Ishita saw this and went down to give him a piece of brain... She is glaring at him angrily...
Raman- Ishit, I am soo so...(before he could complete)
Ishita- When will you change Raman?? I have told you that we need to talk about some thing important so please come early... But no... For you ur office matters the most... At least you can pick up my call na??? How many times I have called U??
Raman-Ishita, Ishita Let me speak... My car broke down the way and I have to get a mechanic to repair it... And my phone has some problem,,, it is not receiving calls at times... I think I have to replace it...(He lied) Ab shaant ho jaavo aur bataavo kya baat karni hai...
Ishita- Ok fine... First let us have dinner... Mujhe bahut bhoo lag rahi hai... Come lets go... They went up...
Raman- Where are Bala and Vandu??? Vo dono ghar par nahi hai kya??
Ishita- No they went for their colleague's marriage and will be coming tomorrow morning...
They both had dinner at Raman's place...
Raman- Ab bataavo madam???? Kya baat karni hai mujh se??
Ishita- Raman vo, vo (don't know how to start the conversation)
Raman- vo vo kya, batavo na??
Ishita- Raman, I will ask you some thing. But don't get angry and shout on me ok?? she asked with a pout...
Raman- Ok. I will not shout, ab bataavo...
Ishita hugged him and asked...
Ishita- Raman,you love me naa...
Raman- puzzeled, Ishu is every thing ok???
Ishita- just answer me, do you love me or not?
Raman- Of course jaan... You are my every thing...
Ishita- Then you should not lie to me... where were you yesterday night?? Were you really at office working late??
Raman is shocked by this, he is wondering how Ishita came to know about it... He turned to other side and said
Raman- Why are you asking all this Ishita??? You think I will lie to you??? He is hell worried...
Ishita- Please Raman, look into my eyes and say...
Raman- composed and said to her- Haan Ishita I was at office and working on my new project... But why are you asking me all these...
Ishita- Yeh sach hai na??
Raman- Of course yaar.. Tum mujh par shak kar rahi ho???
Ishita- No Raman, it is not like that.. I believe you...yeh Mihika na, all this is happened because of her... She is telling that yesterday she saw you at some coffee shop with a lady... Now i will tell her to stop her stupid nonsense..
Raman- on hearing this, he felt relieved that Ishita believed him instead of Mihika...
Ishita- she also told that, you are talking to some girl, what's her name?? ha Sonali... She said that she saw her name in ur mobile... Kuch bhi bolthi hai...
Raman- Haan haan, she might have seen some one else and thought that it was me...
Ishita- I know my Raavan kumar, he will not cheat me... She hugged him tight...
Raman- was amazed by the trust she had on him... He is feeling guilty for hiding and telling lies to her...
Ishita- Raman, leave it na,, come we will see a movie...
Raman- tum jaavo, main abi aata hun... he went in to his room..
Ishita- jaldi aa jaavo...
Raman- started crying,, why Ishita, why do u love me this much?? why do you believe me this much?? What happens if you come to know the truth... I am so sorry jaan... I am soo sorry...
Ishita- Raman, come fast na... I am waiting...
Raman- wiped his tears and said haan comind Ishita...
he came out and both started seeing the movie, TWILIGHT...
Ishita kept her head on Raman's shoulder while seeing movie...
Raman was just looking at Ishita and thinking...

I said my car ran outta gas
I had to walk till I was late
No reception on the phone
tried to call but had no change
Baby I never meant to lie to you
but the truth was hard to face
Girl I tried... Not to lie...
After some time, Ishita slept on Raman's shoulder...
Raman noticed it and he picked up in his arms... He went to her bed room in her house and laid her there... She cuddled like a kid and slept... He kissed her fore head and hands..
Raman- I am so sorry yaaar... Mai tumse sach chupa raha hun... because I cant tell the truth to you... Please forgive this Raavan kumar... Saying so he left to his house... He tried to sleep but could not...
You can call me liar
I was too weak to face the truth
You can call me liar, I couldn't tell you
I 'll leave you soon
Girl I had my reasons believe me
I never want to see that you cry
You can call me liar I really love you
That's why I lied
You can call me liar (liar liar)...
You can call me liar (liar liar)...
You can call me liar (liar liar)...
I really love you that's why I lied...

So how is it friends??? Please let me know... Will try to update next part today itself...😛😛😛



Edited by himapriya - 9 years ago
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Posted: 9 years ago
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Its nice
So raman have some desease
This he is hiding from ishu
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Posted: 9 years ago
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nice update
raman is hiding his disease from ishita!
nicely written...
looking forward to d next update...
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Posted: 9 years ago
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Hai guys... How r u???
Here is the next part..😊...
Part-4

Next day was a sunday... Ishita decided to take a good class of Mihika for making her doubt her Raman... So she went to Mihika's house...
Ishita- Miku, all this happened because of U... Because of U I doubted my Raman... You know how bad he felt when I asked him... Next timw I wont spare U if U talk any thing against my Raman...
Mihika- Ishu, You know na, I can never lie in such matters... It is regarding you yaar... You are my best friend that's why I am concerned about you and Raman... I sincerely wish that you both have a great life together... But believe me Ishu,,, I saw him with some lady and I am damn sure about it... Mihika tried her best to make Ishu believe...
Ishita- No mihika, I don't believe U... And please,,, not a word against Raman... He can never cheat up on me... Did you get it???
Mihika- But Ishu, plzz believe me na???
Ishita- No Miku, I am just leaving if u want to say something against Raman bye... She left saying so...
Mihika- how should I make u believe me Ishu???
She thought of meeting Raman and directly ask him... So Mihika called Raman...
Mihika- Hello jiju!!! Gud morning!!!
Raman- Haan Mihika,, Gud morning.. Kya baat hai???
Mihika- Emmm Jiju, I want to talk to you,, plzz it's really important... Can we meet at the coffee shop near our office???
Raman thought that still mihika is not ready to believe him...
Raman- Mihika is it reagrding ur so called doubt on me??? Ishita had told me every thing...
Mihika- Please jiju... We will meet and talk what ever the matter is... Be there by 10 am... I will be waiting for U..
Raman- Ok... he hung up the call... he is worried what to tell her...
At the coffee shop
Mihika- Jiju, I am so sorry that I doubted you... and I feel really bad doing it... But I cant stop my self worrying about Ishu... She is like my sister...
Raman- Mihika, I know u are worried about Ishu, but why are you hell bent in saying that I am cheating her... I mean how can I??? You know na, I love her???
Mihika- Jiju, plzz don't lie to me!!! I know that night it was you with that lady in the coffee shop and I am damn sure about it... And yesterday that phone call, I saw it clearly that it is from some Sonali, but u lied saying that it is some important business call... Why are you doing all this jiju... Why are u lying to Ishu??? If she comes that you are lying and cheating behind her she will be broken... Plzz jiju... Tell the truth...
Raman- He shouted angrily...Mihika plzz... Stop this non sense... I am not cheating her and lying to her... I love her a lot and she too loves me... Then why will I cheat her??? And plzz stop nosing in my matters... It will be better for U... saying so he left her shocked...
Mihika- How can this man lie so easily??? No no I cant let Ishu spoil her life... I have to do some thing...
Raman in car- I am sorry Miku, I intentionally shouted on u, so that you will leave it here it self.. I have to be rude with you... But I am helpless.. saying so he drove away...
Raman is sitting in his house seeing his medical reports and thinking about all the happenings in the past 2 weeks... The days which changed his entire life... Which made him lie to the most important person in his life... His Ishita... Tears are flowing from his eyes..
He got up to take some water then suddenly he felt his head spinning and paining all of a sudden... His vision is becoming blurred... Now a days it is common to him... When ever he is stressed his head starts paining and spinning all around... He started searching for his medicines every where... He messed up the room completely... At last he found them and took them... Now he is feeling a bit ok... He fell on the couch and relaxed... Soon he slept off under the effect of the medicine...
It was the knock on the door that woke him up in the evening... Ishita is knocking the door from the past 15 minutes but he did not hear it... He woke up and opened the door...
Ishita- Raman, From how much time I am knocking the door and r u sleeping inside?? saying so she looked at him... His attire is a complete mess and he is looking so sleepy and weak...
Ishita- Raman,,, R u fine??? she touched his fore head and face to see whether he again had some fever... To her relief there is no temperature...
Raman- Haan Ishita... I am fine... weekend na I am sleeping just like that... Come inside... saying so he gave her way to com in...
Ishita came inside - Raman plzzz baba,,, don't stress ur self in that stupid office work... You have to take care of ur self also na... Always u will be in office and even bring it to house also... Some times I feel that office of ur's is my Sautan... You forget completely that there is some one waiting for ur mere presence with her... I hate ur office a lot... It will always steal u from me... She pouted saying so...
Raman laughed on hearing her complaint... and thought how can she live if she knows that I will leave her completely... This is the reason I am hiding every thing from U jaan... I know u cant take it...
Iahita- raman where are you lost??? I am speaking to U??? she shook him to bring him to reality...
Raman- Nothing yaaar... So U are missing me a lot?? he pulled her in to his embrace... She shyly hid her face in his chest...
Ishita- Haan, bahut miss kar rahi hun tumhe... Aajkal tum mujhe time hee nahi dete ho na... Humesha office and friends... What about me...
Raman-(slowly) U have to learn living with out me Ishita... he said absent mindedly... He forgot that Ishita is near him...
Ishita- hearing this- Kya?? Kya kaha tumne??? Raman are u out of ur senses...
Raman- just came to reality and said- nothing nothing Ishita, I was just saying some thing... That's it... Leave it na?? Acha, Ishu mere liye tea banaavo na... Plzz I am having slight head ache.. he said to divert her attention...
Ishita- though not satisfied completely nodded her head and went into the kitchen to make tea for him... while making tea she is constantly looking at him... Raman is well aware of this... So to avoid her graze he went into his room... Ishita thought that there is some thing Raman is hiding from her...
Raman is keeping his medical report and medicines in the cupboard which he left on the table that afternoon...
Ishita- Raman what is this??? you completely messed up the room??
Raman- on hearing her voice suddenly turned back and closed the cupboard behind him...
Ishita- I am asking you Raman??? What is this??? you know how much time it took for me to clean ur room last week...
Raman- Emm Ishita, I was searching for a file but did not find it and it is the result of that search...
Ishita- U will never change Raman... How many times I told you that ur files will be on that table and u need not mess up ur room... Now take this tea and let me clean ur room...
Ishita- Raman if u do this after our marriage na??? see I will not spare U???
Raman- just staring at her and thanking God for sending this angel in to his life... After his parents left him there is no one for seeing his well being... It is Ishita who came in to his life and changed it with her magic and love... He felt happy that he has some one to look after him like a mother, scold him like a father, fight with him like his JKR,,, encourage him like a friend and always be with him like his Ishita... But he cant live with her life long... he cant give her the happiness she gave to him... He immediately came to her and hugged her from behind...
Ishita was suprised and she can hear his sobs... she turned towards him and cupped his face and asked
Ishita- Raman!!! kya hua??? tum ro kyun rahi ho??? Bataavo mujhe,, she is worried for him as she cant see him in pain...
Raman- Kuch nahi Ishu...Mummy papa ka yaad aa gayi hai... You know I was all alone untill u came in to my life... Thank you soo much for making my life memorable Ishu... he hugged her tightly close to his heart...
Ishita- Ssshhh Raman,,, plzz don't cry na... See I am there na??? And my amma and appa are there na... They are ur amma appa as well... now stop crying naa...
Raman- I love U a lot Ishu...
Ishita- I love U too...


So how is it friends... Hope U dont get bored... Please let me know about it...
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Posted: 9 years ago
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Wow.. Amazing.. Read all in one go... Plz do pm me..
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Posted: 9 years ago
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It's not at all boring
In fact it is amazing
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Posted: 9 years ago
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Very nice update
Nicely written
Continue soon
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Posted: 9 years ago
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emotional update
feeling bad for raman...
nicely written
update d next part soon...

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