OS II Kiyon kay itna pyaar tumko karty hain hum II uptd:pg 6 II feb/2

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Posted: 9 years ago
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nadiay wanted me to write something this ... I have tried.. hope that you all will like it... I am hoping that this teaser looks promising and interesting enough to tease you all and make you all eager to read the os.

ISHRA OS: Kiyon kay itna pyaar tumko karty hain hum


Teaser

A girl was trying to hide behind her father while her father was crying seen her state... the nurses were trying to hold her and take her...

Ishita: appa I will be good girl ... promise. I will not bother... don't send me... cries..

Appa hugs ishita and cries... madhvi comes and holds mr iyer by shoulder and says: its better for ishita to stay in asylum... she will be fine there... we are doing this for her betterment vishwa...

Mr iyer nods and holds ishita and tries to make her sit in the ambulance... she was screaming and crying as loudly as she can.. she was scared seeing all crowd and nurses trying to hold her..

Ishita: appa... cries...

All society members were seeing this heart breaking scene with teary eyes.. ishita pushes the nurse and tries to run away but stumble and was about to fall . she closes her eyes with fear but some one holds her and prevent her from falling...

She opens her eyes and sees him standing in front of her.. she was not believing her eyes... even though she has lost her memory and mental balance but still she remembers him... his eyes, his smile, his dimple...

The nurse tries to come to ishita but ishita hurriedly hides behind raman and says: raman.. raman save me... they are taking me... save me...and she faints...

Raman was not understanding anything... its being two years... he has searched her everywhere but does not find her after that farewell party...

Nurse comes and says: sir let me take her to mental asylum...

Raman hugs ishita close and says: no... she is not mad... she is not mad...

Nurse: sir try to understand...

Raman: no... you cannot take her... I will not let you take her anywhere... He kisses her forehead and hugs her tightly not wanting to get separate from her again...

Raman lifts her and makes his way to his new home.. while all were surprisingly sees him...

That's it my dear friends hoping that you will like it waiting for your lovely response... Do comment and don't forget to hit the like button...

OS: Kiyon kay itna pyaar tumko karty hain hum (updated)

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..abha.. thumbnail
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Posted: 9 years ago
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resssyyy...
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umress...

it looks interesting...

BUt yeh kyaa itna interesting but teaser...

so ishu lost her mental balance...whats story behind Raman and her...Why her condition is like that?

REally i want update asap...

UPdate soon...
Edited by --abha-- - 9 years ago
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Posted: 9 years ago
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Nice teaser.
You very well teased us.
Felt bad for ishita.
Update soon
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Posted: 9 years ago
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Amazing yaar
So painful teaser
But raman saved her
And now support her
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Posted: 9 years ago
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What happened to ishita
Update soon
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Posted: 9 years ago
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Woaaahhh!!! Update soonn... interesting! !
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Posted: 9 years ago
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Awesome teaser
So here I go
Poor ishu is being send to asylum
But y??
Is she mad
I don't think so
Poor girl don't want to go
N here she tried to run n was abt to fall
But raman saved her
Wait a min
Dese lines made me think dat
Everyone thinks dat ishu is mad
As fr dm raman doesnt exist
But he does
Lines r
She opens her eyes and sees him standing in front of her.. she was not believing her eyes... even though she has lost her memory and mental balance but still she remembers him... his eyes, his smile, his dimple..




If em nt wrong
Plxxx yr
Update tomorrow only
But plxxx
Update soon
Em real curious
Plxxx
N du tell me
Am ryt or not..
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Posted: 9 years ago
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Poor Ishita but IshRa moment was adorable
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Posted: 9 years ago
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INTERESTING teaser
poor ishu😭
but
her saviour RAMAN saved her

thanks for pm
please update soon
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Posted: 9 years ago
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Ohh My God Di...

I am very Very Very Eager to read it...please Update Soon...

& How You get to know My choice of Song...This song is roaming around my mind from past 2 days...& You are going to write on it!!!!
Edited by Prayosha.DivAn - 9 years ago

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