OS II Kiyon kay itna pyaar tumko karty hain hum II uptd:pg 6 II feb/2 - Page 3

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Posted: 9 years ago
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Aww so cute & interesting
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Yeh kya hai - in dinno mein teasing bohat horaha hai!!!!!!!!!!😆😆
Looks really interesting thought - Ishita being taken to mental asylum!!
She has lost her memory!!!!
She tries to runaway but falls and out knight in shining armour comes and saves her!!!!😉👏
He has been looking for her for two years - wow!!!!
So she was probably in an accident and lost her memory but when she sees Raman - she remembers him though!!!!!!!!!!!!🤗

He carries her home and does not let her go!!!!!!!!!!🤗

Please continue soon!!!!
Than you so much for the pm!!!!!!!!
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Posted: 9 years ago
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Originally posted by: ishrasoul


Hihi...
Yes there is story behind ishra
If your nephew give me some time to write
I will try to update tomorrow😳

awww...i asked him but he said u had to manage him like this only and also update for us...U know he is naughty...so his maasi...😆...i will keep asking...until u update...

so i want update asap...
plzzz...
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Posted: 9 years ago
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Superb teaser
Feeling so bad for ishita
Raman came there
Continue soon
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Posted: 9 years ago
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Hello readers..

Enjoy the reading...

Sorry for not commenting individually... time shortage..

Kiyon kay itna pyaar tumko karty hain hum


Raman makes ishita lay on bed while mr iyer comes there and sees raman lovingly staring at ishita... he put his hand on his shoulder and says: do you know ishita???

Raman: I was her classmate... raman kumar bhalla

Mr iyer: only class mate...

Raman: I love her...

Mr iyer: and now...

Raman: I love her

Mr iyer: even knowing she is mad..

Raman : she is not mad...

Mr iyer: raman... its good for all of us to send her to asylum...

Raman glares at him and says: if you want to leave her in this state you can... I will never leave her.. bohat dhoonda.. pata nahe kahan chali gayi thi...

Mr iyer: don't take me wrong...

Raman: I will never send her to that hell... you can leave now... I know you don't love her as she is not your daughter...

Mr iyer: raman you cant talk with me like this...

Raman: I can.. just leave...

Mr iyer leaves..

Raman sits holding ishita hands and kisses them and says: what happen ishita... what happen to you... I waited for you there ishita... why did not you came there... I searched you every where... and now when I have found you... in this state...

He calls doctor and ask him to come his home urgently.. doctor comes and examines ishita..

Raman: she will be fine na

Doctor: we need to do some test... you have her old reports...

Raman: one minute...

Raman goes to iyer house and ask mr iyer to give the reports of ishita.. madhvi comes angrily and says: she will not get fine... we have spend lot of money on her... zindagi azaab bana di thi ... we have bear her enough from past three years...

Mr iyer: stop it madhu...

Madhvi: I will not keep quite... she goes inside and throws all the things of ishita in front of raman and fold her hands and says: take her away from us... we will be grateful to you..

Mr iyer: madhu

Madhvi: I am fed up of your niece vishwa...

Raman: I am here for her... and leaves angrily with her belongings... raman gives the report to doctor.. doctor shook his head..

Raman: what happened doc..

Doc: she is traumatized...

Raman: means..

Doc: kisi cheez ka bohat ghera sadma laga hai...

Raman sees ishita.. ishita stir in sleep and screams: save me... save me.. open the door please...

Raman rushes to her and hugs her.. says: open your eyes... ishita.. I am here...

Ishita open her eyes and hugs raman tightly and cries.. raman kisses her forehead and wipes her sweat...

Ishita: don't leave me raman...

Raman: no I will not... just relax... rest.. I am here... with you... he makes her lay and pats her to make her sleep...

Doc: we have to examine carefully... we need to know how she is in this state.. what was the reason...

Raman: last time when I met her was two years ago.. she was completely fine.. then she vanished... and now in this state.. I will find the reason..

Doc: look raman... its not that she is mad... its just trauma... she will be fine with complete care and love... doc leaves..

Raman sits beside ishita and thinks what has happened that ishita is in this state.. ..

Two year before

Raman a Punjabi boy happy go lucky lives life happily without any fear.. comes to Bangalore to do his mba and lives in his flat with his friend, mihir..

Ishita iyer: orphan. Her uncle aunty has adopted her.. mr iyer loves her a lot but her aunt madhvi hates her... therefore mr iyer sends her to banglore to study..

Raman and ishita meets at college and become good friends... and started developing feeling for each other... both wants to confess their feeling but waiting for some right time..

Raman waiting for ishita to come to college.. ishita comes and waves her hand.. says: hi..

Raman: why you are late... I was so tensed..

Ishita: appa ki call I thi... isily hostel say nikalne mein dair hogayi...

Raman: okay.. so whats the plan regarding farewell party.. he put his hand on her shoulder...

Ishita: I don't know..

Raman: so you are going to tell me something special or not???

Ishita: I have to say something special or you should say...

Raman: I think you should say...

Ishita: no boy should say first...

Raman: what...

Ishita: that I love you...

Raman pulls her closer and says: really... you love me... he met his forehead with hers.. ishita shyly smiles and looks down...

Raman: tell na...

Ishita: raman..

Raman: what???

Ishita pushes him and says: we are getting late for class...she turn to leave

Raman holds her hand and comes close to her put few strands of her hairs behind her ears and whispers in her ears: I will say something special at farewell party... get ready.. he blew kiss on her forehead and leaves...

Farewell party

Ishita comes in party dressed in white gown with minimal make up... she was looking breath taking.. raman hugs her from back and whispers in her ears: beautiful... ishita shyly smiles..

Raman: come let me give you surprise that you are waiting..

Ishita takes her hand back and punches his nose and says: not so soon.. I am going to enjoy the party..

Raman: ishita.. making sad face...

Ishita chuckles and turns to leave but stops listening to raman... raman goes on his knees and holds her hand and sings:

Kyon Ki Itna Pyar Tumko Karte Hain Ham
Kya Jaan Loge Hamari Sanam
Kyon Ki Itna Pyar Tumko Karte Hain Ham
Kyon Ki Itna Pyar Tumko Karte Hain Ham
Kya Jaan Loge Hamari Sanam

Ishita smiles looking at raman.. raman kisses her hand and pulls her closer and dances with her

Tune O Jaana Deewana Kiya Hain
Deewana Kiya Is Kadar
Deewana Kiya Is Kadar
Chahat Mein Teri Bhulaya Jahaan Ko
Na Dil Ko Kisiki Khabar
Na Dil Ko Kisiki Khabar
Rago Mein Mohabbat Ka Ehsaas Jara Bhar Lo
Ham Tumpe Marte Hain Thodisi Fikar Kar Lo
Fikar Kar Lo

Kyon Ki Itna Pyar Tumko Karte Hain Ham
Kya Jaan Loge Hamari Sanam
Kyon Ki Itna Pyar Tumko Karte Hain Ham
Kyon Ki Itna Pyar Tumko Karte Hain Ham
Kya Jaan Loge Hamari Sanam

All claps...

Raman forward red rose to ishita and says: I love you ishita... I love you more than my life... will you accept my love... I promise I will be with you till my last breath...

Ishita has tears in her eyes.. she nods and hugs him tightly...

Raman: few line for me... please...

Ishita moves back and sings

Tumse Hain Saansein Tumse Hain Dhadkan
Tumhise Hain Deewangi
Tumhise Hain Deewangi
Rab Ne Hame Di Hain Tumhare Liye Zindagi
Tumhare Liye Zindagi
Wada Sang Jeene Ka Tum Jaane Jigar Kar Lo
Ham Tumpe Marte Hain Thodisi Fikar Kar Lo
Fikar Kar Lo
Kyon Ki Itna Pyar Tumko Karte Hain Ham
Kya Jaan Loge Hamari Sanam
Kyon Ki Itna Pyar Tumko Karte Hain Ham

Raman opens his arms for ishita, ishita smiles and runs to him.. raman twirls her making her laugh aloud.. college was looking at the couple with awe...

Shagun seeing all this from distance fumes in anger and thinks to do something... ishita was enjoying the party when she got some chit.. she thinks that its given by raman.. she read that come to the store room... ishita happily leaves there..

ishita goes inside the store room and shagun locks the door.. ishita screams... but suddenly some red lights flashes.. ishita gets scared... horror sounds.. ishita holds her head and sits on floor crying...

Shagun laughs seeing ishita state and says: how dare you come close to my raman... she leaves while ishita faints unable to bear ...

Raman was searching for ishita he gets call from his house that his grand mother has passed away.. he give chit to mihir to tell ishita that he has to leave due to some emergency... and leaves...

No one knows that ishita in the store room. Next day sweeper comes and sees ishita lying unconscious there... they send her to hospital.. shagun was tensed to know about ishita.. as she thought only to scare her and when she left she has opened the lock... she did not know that ishita will be effected this much that she will be admitted to hospital..

Ishita gets into her senses and she started thorwimg things and behaves madly as she was scared with sound and lights.. mr iyer gets hurt to see his niece. He takes her and leave for dehli..

Shagun being the daughter of the principal, principal tells all student to not to tell about the store room incident to any one.. raman comes back and does not find ishita... he gets to know only that mr iyer took her back... raman tries to know about her but never knew...

Shagun was guilty for playing such prank that has effected ishita this much.. she left india...

Present

Raman was still sitting holding ishita hand when his door bell rings.. he get up and open the door and find mr iyer standing there..

Mr iyer folds his hands and says: make her fine.. I cant see her in this state...

Raman: what happened to her uncle...

Mr iyer tells raman about the prank played on ishita at farewell party and she gets traumatized... he cries... and says: I tried all means to make her fine.. but... I could not.. madhu has locked her in room from past two years... I tried a lot.. I am failed to protect her...

Raman hugs him and says: don't worry uncle.. sorry for being rude... ishita will get fine.. trust me...

Mr iyer leaves...

Ishita opens her eyes and sees raman sitting near her, she sees him.. raman holds her hand and says: ishita...

Ishita jerks his hand and start throwing things on raman making raman hurt...raman tries to hold ishita but ishita was acting madly... Raman cries seeing her state... ishita runs making her feet hurt as the glass pieces prick her.. she goes in the adjacent room and sit there in dark hugging her knees and tightly shut her eyes...

Raman comes to her and sees her crying... he sits beside her and says: ishita.. look at me... raman.. your raman...

Ishita looks on and sees him...

Raman: ishita...

Ishita: raman...

She hugs him tightly and cries and says: save me raman...

Raman: kuch nahe... ishita... I am here...

Ishita again faints.. raman calls the doctor and tells how ishita is scared of light.. doctor tells raman to be calm with ishita.. and make her feel secure... things will get better... give her medicine at time...

Raman bandaged the wound of ishita. Ishita opens her eyes and gets scared again seeing the lights.. raman hugs her and says: relax ishita...

Ishita cuddles more to raman and closes her eyes tightly... Raman lifts her in his arms and moves towards the terrace and sits there still hugging her...

Raman: ishita look... open your eyes... see nature is too beautiful...

Ishita shook her head in negative...

Raman: for me ishita.. open your eyes..

Ishita slowly open her eyes and sees the sky... she tightly clutches raman shirt again due to fear.. raman kisses her forehead and pats her back making her calm...

Ishita gets relax and loses the hold and sees the sky...

Raman: dekha kuch nahe hua... I am here with you ishita... always...

Ishita rest on his chest and sleeps peacefully without any sleeping pills first time after the incident... raman hugs her tightly and cries...

Time passes

Ishita gets calm and her fear also gets reduced... mr iyer was happy to see the changes in ishita behavior.. its being two month in which ishita has recovered much... she goes outside with raman also.. and does not get scared of crowd... she was coming back to her normal...

Raman was returning to home while madhvi taunts him and bad mouth about him that he is taking advantage of ishita.. raman gets hurt.. he leaves... he locks himself in room and cries... ishita sees him and knock the door...

Raman opens the door and hugs ishita and cries.. says: Ishita.. you know na..i love you... I really love you.. my feeling is pure ... ishita was staring at raman... and hugs him and says: I know raman... I know... I love you too...

Both hugs...

Their door knocks.. raman open the door finds society members standing there with the nurses ...

Man: we are taking ishita to mental asylum...

Raman : you cant take her...

Man: we can... this is better for our society... our children gets scared with her screams... pagloon ki jagah ghar mein nahe hoti..

Raman: she is not mad.. he shouts...

Man: look mr. bhalla.. we know you have done so much for her in these past two months... but its better for her to shift in asylum...

Ishita sees all crowd gets scared... she holds raman hand and says: I don't want to go raman..

Raman cups her face and says: no ishita.. you are not going any where...

Other man says: arry sahib... ajkal insaniyaat hai kahan.. ye to apne faide kay liye is pagal larko ...

Raman slaps him hard.. and shouts: mind your language...

Other woman: kiya lagti hai tumhari ye...

Raman: sab kuch... and I am not answerable to any of you... just leave my house right now or else ...

Man: we will not go without taking her..

Raman shows them his palm and says: don't dare to take a step more...

Other man: sharam kahan rahi hai ajkal... kaise aik anjaan larky kay saah ye larki...

Raman: shut up... Just shut up... she belongs to me... you all want relation na... I will show you ...

Raman hurt his hand by banging the wall.. blood ozos out.. he fills her partition with his blood.. ishita was staring at raman...raman shouts: no one dare to say a word against ishita raman kumar bhalla my wife.. and just get lost...

He pushes them and closes the door.. ishita hugs raman and says: they will take me raman... raman hugs back ishita and says: no one can separate me and you... I will never leave you... he kisses her forehead...

Raman takes ishita and left the society and moves to his other house... mr iyer blesses the couple and ask raman to take care of ishita always.. ishita condition was getting better day by day... her reports also comes better... raman was so happy to see ishita normal... Raman love was the cure for ishita...

After one year

Ishita working in kitchen while raman hugs her from back and rest his chin on her shoulder...

Ishita: raman ap agaye...

Raman: I love you ishita...

Ishita : I love you too.. go and get fresh... Just two minutes and dinner is ready...

Raman: but my dinner is ready... and I just want to eat up her now...

Ishita hit him and says: enough of your chessy comment raman... go

Raman: ishita...

Ishita: what??

Raman: your husband want some attention and you are not giving him two minutes... very bad..

Ishita chuckles...

Raman turns off the stove and lifts her in arms and says: your husband is shameless... he is madly in love with you and no chance of recovery... he pecks her lips

Ishita wound her arms around him and says: I don't want him to recover... you know selfish..

Raman makes her lay on bed and takes her lips in his and kisses her passionately... and break apart and start dropping kisses on her jawline... ishita pulls him more closer... and moans his name... listening to his name from her in such romantic ... he start kissing her neck and buries his head in crook of her neck... he bites her earlobe making ishita moan in pleasure...

he claimed her lips while his hands were moving to feel her curves.. his soft touches and caresses were making ishita insane.he open her blouse and started dropping wet kisses on her bosoms.she moaned in pleasure. he continued loving her passionately. at last he entered in her marking her as his.

Both were laying cuddling to each other... raman was caressing her hairs with love.. ishita says: raman... why you love me so much...

Raman: because I love myself ...

Ishita sees him..

Raman: you don't know ishita how was that two years without you... I was lifeless... you are my everything.. my soul, my happiness, my world... and I cant live without you... mera dil mera nahe hai tumhara.. hai... meri sansaain meri nahe hai tumahri hain.. tumhain kho nahe sakta... agar ab kho diya to mar jaonga...

Ishita put her finger on his lips and says: don't say... tumhain kuch hua to mein kaise jeeyon gi...

Both hugs each other and promises to never leave each other in any case...

Kyon Ki Itna Pyar Tumko Karte Hain Ham
Kya Jaan Loge Hamari Sanam
Kyon Ki Itna Pyar Tumko Karte Hain Ham

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That's it my dear friends.. I am not sure that it will appeal you all or not.. but still posting it... I am not satisfy with it much... tell me and share your views regarding this os... whether I able to write good or not...

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Posted: 9 years ago
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this was master piece...I just loved Raman...who stand by her when she needed him...

that bimbo and ishu's amma 😡...they should be in hell...

I just loved the os...

ab ek epilogue to banta h...😆...yeah os mein epilogue weired na...🤣...but ishra os without ruhi in end...its not justice...thats only writers laziness😆...

Now just waiting for ru...
Edited by --abha-- - 9 years ago
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Posted: 9 years ago
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Very Beautiful OS Di...

Aww Raman is so caring...He took Ishita with him...

& Iyers were not real parents of Ishita...that's why Mrs Iyer behaved this way...
Shame on her...She bad mouthed about Raman...

His love was true...so he got his Ishota back...

& their confession was lovely ...

Loved this OS...
Edited by Prayosha.DivAn - 9 years ago
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Posted: 9 years ago
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Awesome one
Raman's love and care healed her...
I liked how he stood up for her when others accused and we're going to take her.
Nicely written
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Posted: 9 years ago
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Nice Riddu..
It seems an emotional one..
She was in a trauma..
But his love cured her..
The end seems to be in a hurry but still its a good story..
Good going..
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Posted: 9 years ago
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Originally posted by: kaa1202

Nice Riddu..

It seems an emotional one..
She was in a trauma..
But his love cured her..
The end seems to be in a hurry but still its a good story..
Good going..



thanks dear
glad you like it
yes i also felt that ...

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