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Posted: 9 years ago

Originally posted by: pcnsb

Interesting start...

So ishu is Madhavi's daughter and Bala's sis.. But they don't recognize her..! That's weird but interesting..

Secretive kind of story!!

Raman is driver or he's just pretending to be one to stay close to his wife!!
Do PM me when you update next !
Nandini



Thanks Nandini
Glad u liked it
Will surely pm u
Keep reading
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Posted: 9 years ago

Originally posted by: DivanIsh

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<font face="Verdana, Arial, Helvetica, sans-serif" size="2">Hello doctor</font>

<font face="Verdana, Arial, Helvetica, sans-serif" size="2">As promised i am here to comment</font>

<font face="Verdana, Arial, Helvetica, sans-serif" size="2">let me make a confession...when you asked me to read the prologue i was not in the mood to read anything but i read for your happiness and it was beautiful but to be honest i had forgotten the basic plot</font>

<font face="Verdana, Arial, Helvetica, sans-serif" size="2">so today before commenting i read the prologue and then part 1 again and i must say this is one unique and never touched concept</font>

<font face="Verdana, Arial, Helvetica, sans-serif" size="2">good things need to be praised and you deserve all the appreciation dear</font>

<font face="Verdana, Arial, Helvetica, sans-serif" size="2">as most of them are guessing Chutki is Ishita or Ishita is Chutki but how that is going to happen will be really interesting to read</font>

<font face="Verdana, Arial, Helvetica, sans-serif" size="2">this story is really intriguing</font>

<font face="Verdana, Arial, Helvetica, sans-serif" size="2">and let me mention it is really good to see you experimenting...you have always written simple things which i have always loved but this time it has a bit of suspense and i am really looking forward to read it</font>

<font face="Verdana, Arial, Helvetica, sans-serif" size="2">so yah please update as soon as possible</font>

<font face="Verdana, Arial, Helvetica, sans-serif" size="2">and once again this was brilliant 👏</font>

<font face="Verdana, Arial, Helvetica, sans-serif" size="2">love ya</font>







Oh thank u pankhuri
My sweetheart
Thanks for always appreciating
Bcoz of you i could post this story
Muah dear
I m lucky to have a friend like u
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Posted: 9 years ago
Hello everyone
Here goes the next part

PART 2




Ishita was shocked to see him.

They shared a brief eye lock which was broken by Bala voice.


Bala - Raman yeh hai vandu my wife my amma and this is Ishita. She is like my sister.


Raman smiled


Bala - Okay then you can stay in garage. Kal se be on time.


Raman - Ji sir


Bala turned to leave but saw Ishita standing with straight face looking at Raman.


Bala - Ishita kya hua


Ishita - Nothing Anna.


She took her flat keys and moved to her floor.


An hour passed, Ishita was hell restless and was waiting for Madhavi & Bala to sleep. She needed to talk to him and sort this soon. Sensing all to slept she climbed down and made her way to garage.


She took small baby steps towards garage but found it to be dark. She entered and switch on lights.


Raman - Bahut der laga di. I was expecting you soon.


She moved in the direction of voice and saw him standing near window with folded hands around his chest and a naughty smile of his face.


Ishita glared at him - What are you doing here.


Raman - Ishita is this the way to talk. We are meeting after so many days. Be polite. Ask me how I am, about my whereabouts.


Ishita - Raman I am not in mood to joke. Tell me what are doing here. You didn't tell me anything. And wait a min Driver like seriously.


Raman - Driver. Now whats the problem with it. Anyways leave all this. Come and give a tight hug first.


He pulled her to himself and embracing her in his arms, burying his face in her hairs , inhaling her aroma.


Raman - I missed you. I missed you so much.


He planted soft kiss on her neck.


Ishita - Raman please. Don't change the topic. Tell me what are you doing here. You didn't tell me anything and all of sudden you landed here.


Raman - Sshh.. I will answer all your question but first let me feel your presence. So just shut up and be in my arms.


Ishita smiled and hugged him warmly this time. After remaining in that position for some time he parted away. Raman held her face and kissed her forehead.


Raman - I missed you Ish.


Ishita - I missed you too.


She pecked his lips but he didn't let her part away but took her lips in his. It was gentle in beginning but slowly their craving for each other overpowered and they become wild, fighting for dominance.


Long time later they parted and he hugged her. Both were silent living that moment to fullest.


Ishita - Raman


Raman - Hmm


Ishita - Can we talk in my house. Yahan machar bahut hai.


Raman looked at her and chuckled - You are inviting me at your home at this hour of night. Irada kya hai


Ishita hit him slightly - So what . I am inviting my husband to my home. Now please come. Enough of this mazaak. Sachi bahut machar hai who are biting me.


Raman - Really how dare they. No one can bite you. He came near ears and spoke huskily. Except me.


She blushed and pushed him out. Secretly they made their way to her house.


Ishita Flat


Ishra moved inside and bolted the door from inside.


Ishita took a deep breathe - Finally we are here safely.


Raman came from behind and hugged her, kissing nape of her neck.


Ishita moaned in pleasure - Raman please.


Raman - Hmm


He continued assaulting her with his sweet torture completing ignoring her plead.

Ishita - Raman


Raman - What. Don't disturb me.


Ishita - Raman please. Answer me first. What are you doing here.


Ishita turned and saw him angrily.


Ishita - Raman say na.


Raman - Uff. I came here because I was missing you.


Ishita - All of sudden. You should have atleast informed me.


Raman - Jaan I wanted to surprise you


Ishita - But I was shocked rather then surprised.


Raman - That's your problem not mine.


Ishita - Phir bhi. Mujhe bata dete.


Raman - Ishita you wanted to come here I didn't stop you. I thought you will be happy to see me. Guess I was wrong.


He turned to moved out angrily when she held his wrist and stopped him . She turned him while he looked away from her. Ishita smiled and cupped his face.


Ishita - I am sorry Raman . You know na how stupid your Ishita is. I an very happy to see you. Sachi...Raman promise. Sorry I didn't mean that.


She spoke pouting.


His whole anger melted in secs and he wrapped his hands around her, pulling her more to him.


Raman - Never call my wife stupid. She is the best. Samjhi.


Ishita smiled - Ok sir.


Raman felt some wetness on his shirt. He pulled her away and held her head - Ish! Why are you crying.


Ishita - Because I missed you. I felt so alone here.


Raman - Ish you were with your family. How can you be alone.


Ishita - Family


She looked at him with teary eyes. He didn't want her to be sad recollecting all painful memories of her past, so he changed the topic and distracted her mind.


Raman - Ish . You really missed me.


Ishita - Hmm


Raman - Then prove it

He winked looking at her lips.

Ishita blushed and looked down.


Raman - Ok leave it. Let me prove how much I missed my wife.


Very next second, he lifted her in his arms, making way to bedroom, showing his unconditional love for her, compensating for all the nights of staying away from each other.


In the morning, Raman woke up first and found her lady love almost clinging to him. He tucked a strand of hair behind her ears and kissed her forehead. She cuddled more to him seeking his warmth.


Raman smiled looking at her. She was his Ishita who sleeps like a small child, totally unaffected from world.


She stirred in sleep rubbed her nose in crook of his neck like her everyday habit. She slowly opened her droopy eyes and looked at him pouting.


Ishita - Good morning Raman


Raman - Good morning jaan. You look adorable in sleep.


Ishita - Hmm.


Raman smiled and placed his lips on her.


Raman - After so many days my morning has become beautiful.


Ishita - Raman I love you. You let me come here without questioning me even once.


Raman - How can I stop u you from meeting your family. Who can understand the value of family more than a orphan.


She stopped him in middle.


Ishita - How many times should I repeat. My Raman is not orphan. Orphan are those who don't have anyone but I am there for you always .

Raman kissed her nose - Sorry. I forgot


Ishita - Never say that again. Raman at least answer me now why you came here becoming a driver.


Raman - I had no other option. I was missing you like hell. Then I came to know that Bala anna was looking for a driver. I found it to be a perfect opportunity to be near you. So I came here, just to be with you.


Ishita - Raman you own a company. Hundreds of people work under you but you are pretending to be a driver just for me.


Raman - Its okay jaan. Ek alag mazaa hai asse chup chup ke pyaar karne mein.


Ishita was about to reply when they heard bala calling for him.


Raman immediately sat up and started wearing his clothes - Mar gaya. I have to go


Ishita - Raman what now. What if he see you here.


Raman - Don't wory jaan. I will manage.


He stood up and left not before kissing her cheeks.


Near garage, Bala was about to enter when Raman came running from behind.


Bala - Raman


Raman - Yes sir


Bala - You are here. Where were you so early in morning.


Raman - Sir I had gone for morning walk.


Bala - Ok I just came to tell you today Vandu is having appointment with doctor in afternoon. So just be ready as I am going out for meeting.


Raman - Ji sir


Bala left while Raman took a deep breathe, relaxed by not being caught.


Days later, a day before Ishita's birthday. She was moving to Madhavi room to give her flat keys when she saw her crying hugging a photo.


Ishita entered while Madhavi immediately wiped her tears.


Ishita - Aunty. I just came to give you keys.


She looked at the picture and smiled a little.


Ishita - Aunty if you don't mind me asking yeh kaun hai.


Madhavi - Oh this. She is my no one. I was cleaning my room and found this old picture.


Ishita - Ok


She turned and left from there.

Madhavi lifted that picture from bed and kissed it( self talk ) - Kana. Tomorrow is your birthday. Though I am angry on you but the fact is your amma loves you a lot. I never got a chance to say but I forgave you long back. Amma loves you a lot. My blessing are always with you.


Ishita opened her room door when she was pulled inside by someone. He pinned her to wall and covered her mouth with his hand. Her eyes widened in shock.

Man - Sshh


He started kissing her neckline.


She removed his hand with other.

Ishita - Raman what are you doing.


Raman - Don't you know


Ishita - Don't forget you are driver here. Be in your limits


Raman - And you don't forget I m your husband also.


She smiled while he crashed his lips on her.


Ishita - Raman lets go home. They will never forgive me. She spoke in between.


Raman - Ish what are you saying.


Ishita - Please Raman. Take me home.


She sobbed hugging him.


Raman - Ish! Whats wrong. Tell me what happened.


Ishita shook her head negatively and hugged him tighter. He tried to part her but she was not leaving him.


Slowly her grip on him loosened and sensing her weight on him , he realized she fainted in his arms.


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That's it. Hope you all like it. Don't forget to leave your valuable comments for it.




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Edited by ruhi_ishra - 9 years ago
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Posted: 9 years ago
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this update was such a big surprise...not exactly surprise but i don't know the right word to be used here

so much happened in one update that i am all confused

Ishita is staying with her family but they don't recognize her...did she get separated from them at a very young age but then you mentioned about forgiving...what would a young child do that her she thinks her family ll never forgive her...it is all a conundrum...Dr. Sapna zara in sab uljhanon ko suljhao

coming to Ishra...the update was full of romance...totally enjoyed it

Raman is too sweet to come here as driver just to spend time with his wife

that orphan part was painful to read

there is so much yet to be revealed

this update was brilliant and i just cannot wait to read ahead

please update as soon as possible

this is getting really very interesting

impatient me😳😳

jaldi update karo bas
Edited by DivanIsh - 9 years ago
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Posted: 9 years ago
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amazing update..
A few things are cleared now..
I was right, Raman's pretending to be driver.. !
Ishra moments were adorable ...
Loved them !
Whats the issue b/w ishita and her family?!
Thanks for pm
Update soon !
Nandini
Edited by pcnsb - 9 years ago
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Posted: 9 years ago
Hi Sapna,

IshRa interaction was superb.

I am wondering what did Ishita do that they are not forgiving her?

Waiting for the next update

Thanks for the pm

Edited by mayasundar - 9 years ago
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Posted: 9 years ago
Nice Sapna..
Raman & Ishu r married..
He is an orphan unlike her..
So her family dislikes her..
She separated from her family at young age it seems..
She feels bad as they r not forgiving her..
She faints but why?
Cont soon..
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Posted: 9 years ago
Aww u written so well seriously awesome plz update soon
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Posted: 9 years ago
Awesome update
Raman is not her driver,they are married
why her family didn't remember her
Also they are angry with her
Pls update soon
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Posted: 9 years ago
These 2 are married? That's a shocker , but a surprise twist ..I liked it. There is a last...waiting fir that to be revealed. Ishu's bday us ominous up..and she fainted..any thing interesting ?

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