Ishra FF:Nazdeekiyan Pt 2 updtd on Pg 27 on 30/5 - Page 9

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Posted: 9 years ago
#81

Originally posted by: gargpoo

Hello hetvi( this is ur name rite??)...u r an amazing writer...ws a silent reader till now...keep it up!!
Very interesting prologue...cont soon!!
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Hi Poonam,
Yes that's my name
So happy that you commented😊
Thank youuu so much 😳
Will try to update soon
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Posted: 9 years ago
#82

Originally posted by: Divanru

Congrates Hetvi for your new story.

It was emotional but nice prologue.
Waiting for part 1
Update soonish

Thank youuu so much di😳
Will try to update soon
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Posted: 9 years ago
#83

Originally posted by: asma18

Congratulations for new story. .

Haye prologue mein hi
. ..ishra ki judaai ... 😭

Raman ne ishita baat nahin suni.

Continue soon.

Thank youuu so much dear 😳
Will try to update soon
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Posted: 9 years ago
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Thank youuu 😊
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Posted: 9 years ago
#85

Originally posted by: sanayhm0001

nice n interesting
cont. soon dr

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Posted: 9 years ago
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Originally posted by: riYa09guPta

Intetesting prologue...
Continue soon...

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Posted: 9 years ago
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Originally posted by: imabinaya

Interesting prologue

Continue soon dr

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Posted: 9 years ago
#88

Originally posted by: nafnaf

Oh please do not separate Ishra - you know we like them to be together always!!!!

well I hope you are going to clear the misunderstanding soon and get them together!!!!

Waiting eagerly for the next update please and thank you so much for the pm!!!!!!!!!!

Will try to update soon
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Posted: 9 years ago
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Update will be out very soon
Please bear with me
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Posted: 9 years ago
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Thank youuu all so much for the amazing response to this FF.

I know I am very late in uploading this part and hope you all still remember this story.
Very sorry for the delay

Here goes the 1st part.

Hope you like it.

Part 1

She stood reminiscing that painful day when her world her Raman left her because of a misunderstanding.

It had been 4 years since it all had happened.
Ishita had gone on and completed her fashion designer degree.

Within a matter of months,she had gone on and become one of the leading fashion designers in the country.
She and Mihika,her sister and best friend had opened up their own fashion house Ishika Creations and catered to top notch celebrities.
Her parents and her 2 sisters were her pillars of support.

She had everything except Love.
3 years back,Today was the day when Ishita and Raman both had given an identity to their relationship.

Raman on the other hand had gone on to become the CEO of his company and was considered one of the best businessman of the city.
He had his lovely parents and his 2 siblings to support him.
His best friend and confidant was Mihir who worked with him in the company.

Raman had a hard time getting over what happened.He tried to clear his mind off from her thoughts but it only made him feel sad.

R-Why is this so difficult.But she deserved this for what she did.
I have to get over this.

His eyes fell on the date today when he saw the calender.

They both were lost in the memories of the day.

Flashback
3 years back,

They had confessed to their love and Raman decided to drop her back to her home.
She was blushing and smiling and giggling all throughout the trip with Raman teasing her.

They reached her home.
And they bid adieu to each other.
R-Bye jaan

I-Bye handsome
As she pecked him on his cheeks and went to her home.
When she entered her house,Mihika welcomed her with an angry face.

Mi-What is this akka,you ditched our shopping plan and left me all alone.

I-Calm down Mihika...we will go tomorrow na.Why are you getting angry now?
Come on now I will make your favourite chocolate smoothie.

Mi-Yumm...but I haven't still forgiven you.

She said pretending to be angry.

I-Enough with your drama already...do you think I will not know.
Come

Mi-Oh and someone sent this parcel to you.

I-Oh...keep it in my room na till then I will make your smoothie...

Mi-Ohkk

Ishita made the smoothie and gave it to her while Mihika was on her phone.
Ishita went to her room to see who had sent her the parcel.

As soon as she opened up the parcel and saw the sender's name,her face lit up in a smile.

Raman had sent a turquoise blue flowy dress which stopped just below her knee.

It had had a note accompanying it...

Be ready by 7
Cannot wait to see you in this dress

Raman

She was ready by 6.45 looking simple yet elegant.She had worn minimal make up and delicate jewellery.

Mi-All the best akka...
You are looking just lovely.My would be jiju will be flat looking at you.

I-Kuch bhi...
As she blushed.

He called her at 5 minutes to 7.
R-All set?

I-Yes...
Coming in 2 mins.

R-Come soon.

I-Byee Mihiku...take care of amma appa.

Mi-Dont worry,I am there na
You enjoy

She smiled and went down.
The moment they saw each other,they were lost on each other and shared am eyelock.
He was looking handsome in a black tuxedo suit with a red shirt.

She came closer to him.
R-You are looking breathtaking. So simple yet so beautiful.

I-You too are looking very handsome.

R-So shall we go now?

I-Hmm...

The ride was a lovely but silent one with soft romantic music playing in the car stereo.

Soon they reached.
R-Come

They entered the restaurant and soon went to to a private area of the restaurant which was specially decorated for them and far away from the normal area.

I-All this for me...It's just beautiful...I am speechless .

R-May I...
He asked forwarding his hand.

She smiled gently and accepted his.

He gestured to the musicians and the music started playing.

Bheegi bheegi sadkon pe main
Tera intezaar karun
Dheere dheere dil ki zameen ko
Tere hi naam karun

Khudko main yoon kho doon
Ke phir na kabhi paaun
Haule haule zindagi ko
Ab tere hawaale karun

As they moved closer to each other and lost themselves in the words of the song.

Their eyes locked with one another full of love and passion for each other

Sanam re, sanam re
Tu mera sanam hua re
Sanam re, sanam re
Tu mera sanam hua re
Karam re, karam re
Tera mujhpe karam hua re

Sanam re, sanam re
Tu mera sanam hua re

O ho...

Tere kareeb jo hone laga hoon
To toote saare bharam re

They swayed to the beautiful lyrics of the song.
Their bodies in perfect sync with each other.

Slowly Ishita rested her head on his chest.
This moment they wish the time would stop as the surroundings seemed oblivious to them and they could only see each other right now

Sanam re, sanam re
Tu mera sanam hua re

Baadalon ki tarah hi toh
Tune mujhpe saaya kiya hai
Baarishon ki tarah hi toh
Tune khushiyon se bhigaya hai
Aandhiyon ki tarah hi toh
Tune hosh ko udaaya hai

Mera muqaddar sanwara hai yoon
Naya savera jo laaya hai tu
Tere sang hi bitaane hain mujhko
Mere saare janam re

There was nothing too intimate about their positions but the mere thought I of being with each other was just blissful to them as right now only they mattered to each other.

Sanam re, sanam re
Tu mera sanam hua re
Karam re, karam re
Tera mujhpe karam hua re
Sanam re, sanam re
Tu mera sanam hua re

As the music slowed down they were still in each other's embrace and after some time they went and had a seat.

I-Thank You so much Raman,I am so overwhelmed by your gesture...This is truly very priceless.
I love you

As a tear threatened to fall he wiped it off in an instant
R-This tears are too precious...don't waste them.
I love you too

They had a silent dinner with both of them stealing glances from each other and their eyes speaking volumes.

After the dinner,he dropped her back home.
After changing she was still lost after what all happened in the evening as ahe sat in the balcony for sometime and then slept off thinking about him.

Present

As she remembered all this,tears fell from her eyes.
I-Why Raman?You should have listened to me...given me one chance...

As her words were lost with her tears.
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That's it for now

How was it?

Do drop in your views,will be waiting for them...
Edited by traveller_girl - 9 years ago

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