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Prabhleen Arora

@7APK

Dazzler

+ 4

Posted: 9 years ago

#471

Super - Duper Amazing
Awesome Update
Loved it
Thanks for the PM 😳

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Ishrasoul

@ishrasoul

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Posted: 9 years ago

#472

You ended it...

I m sad...

And demanding long comment

I love this story...

Finally all sorted

I like that Raman made his parents understand...

And ruhi comes...

Superb...

Yes I did not forget queen of trantum ishu...

How much I wanted to say update soon...😭

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nishaani

@-Nii-

Voyager

Posted: 9 years ago

#473

Why did you end this one😲

Nice update...

Om n toshiji👎🏼

IshRa❤️

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mamtasingla

@mamtasingla

Rocker

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Posted: 9 years ago

#474

fantastic update

loved the epilogue😃

thnks for a beautiful story

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gargpoo

@gargpoo

Sparkler

Posted: 9 years ago

#475

U ended it so soon...
Awesome update ..
Finally truth is out .
Loved Raman...he ws with Ishita no matter what
His family learnt the lesson...
Loved it totally...wish u would not HV ended it so soon

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Mdwst

@Mdwst

Sparkler

Posted: 9 years ago

#476

Gayu...nice ending

Paternity test proved that the baby is theirs.

Lived the tantrum Ishu

...her duskigues during delivery ..wow.

Thebest " gphe says I'll. It do that and her come back " how dare u say that"🤣

Enjoyed the story...thanks

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gunmu

@gunmu

Voyager

Posted: 9 years ago

#477

Paternity report bought the truth

ishu's tantrum and Raman reaction😆

nice ending Gayu

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Sharmin

@fSharm

Rocker

Posted: 9 years ago

#478

Wow... Amazing...
But u ended it so quickly...

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smilesusmita

@smilesusmita

Dazzler

Posted: 9 years ago

#479

Amazing
Finally the truth is out
Ishita is a tantrum queen
Happy ending

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nafnaf

@nafnaf

Rocker

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Posted: 9 years ago

#480

That was awesome!!!!!!!

It was different - how when the fact they found out that Raman was the father that you did not make Ishita happy straight away but instead brought another point of view in: "This paper would decide her life. She felt her heart hammering against her chest. This paper would be that which would count the depth of her parent's love. How much she has been pour scorn on for that very night. For the first time, she felt repulsive towards the man who made her a piece of flesh and a woman who crossed the bounds of morale in front of her entire family.

"I don't want this to be positive Raman...I don't want you to be him...Please...Murugan...I won't be able to handle that heartbreak...I just hate that man...and I can't think of him to be my Raman..." She was praying all the while opening the paper with her quivering hands. Her sweat and tears fell down ceaselessly on the paper and vision blurred even more when she met what she feared."

Eventually accepting and then being very happy that Raman is the father!!!!!

Very nicely tackled!!!!!

Also going away leaving the family to make them realise that the way they acted was wrong as they were willing to kill an innocent baby!!!!

Once they moved away, although the right thing to do Ishra were missing the family a lot!!!!

When the family did eventually come to collect them Ishra were so happy and everything worked out so well.!!!!!!!!!!

Wonderfully written!!!!!

Thank you so much for the pm!!!!!!!!!!