Ishra os-tu hi mera sanam hua re updt on Jan 7

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Posted: 9 years ago
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After wishing all my dear friends I think now its time to wish myself as I have completed one whole year in IF.

So happy birthday cutieruhi.

Today I would love to thank all my loyal readers who made me a successful writer.
love u all guys.I am here because of u people .love u all alot.

And to show my gratitude I wanna dedicate this os of mine to all my lovely readers.this song is suggested by asma.love u asma.

The name of this os is

TU HI MERA SANAM HUA RE
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Posted: 9 years ago
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Tu hi mera sanam hua re

A boy in his mid twenties was sitting in a bench under the shadow while outside it was raining heavily.he take his hand out trying to touch and feel the droplets of rain.

Bheegi bheegi sadhkon pe main
Tera intezaar karoon
Dheere dheere dil ki zameen
Ko tere hi naam karoon

He smiled a little and said- aa jao ishita,tum jaanti ho naa main tumhara intezaar kar raha hoon.tumhare intezaar mein Maine yeh paanch saal guzar diye.lagta hai yeh zindagi tumhare naam kar di hai(come soon ,u know naa I am waiting for u from past five years.seems like I have written my life on ur name)

Khud ko main yun kho doon
Ke phir naa kabhi paoun
Haule haule zindagi ko
Ab tere hawaale karoon

Raman- where r u ishita.u know I love u from the day I met u but u took so much time to realise ur love for me.just wish u realised ur love for me.come soon .saying so he couldn't stop himself going back in the memories when they met.

Sanam re,sanam re
Tu hi mera sanam hua re
Karam re ,karam re
Tera mujhpe karam hua re

Flashback

St Xavier's school,new Delhi

Raman was a student of class twelve,the heartthrob of the school, smart ,intelligent, dashing and what not.he is a dream of every girl but the only girl who claim him as her ,and he never bother to deny, is shagun.

Shagun arora,beauty queen of the school.every boy was ready to put his heart under her feets.but she want to make Raman hers.she always claims Raman as her boyfriend while Raman never accepted it nor denied it.

A day Raman was walking with his friend having answer sheets in his hand.

Ajay- hey Raman u r do lucky.shagun loves u alot.and u too love her.

Raman- o please I don't love her,actually I never loved anyone.I don't believe in love at all.saying so he turned and clash with a girl.all the answer sheets scattered on the floor.

Raman - what the hell,can't u see while walking.saying so he look at the girl who was helping him in collecting sheets.

He was lost in her,she was a pretty girl ,wearing glasses ,hair tied in two braids.

Tere kareeb Jo hone lagaa hoon
To toote saare bharam re

Ishita adjusted her glasses and said- I am really sorry I didn't see u.

Raman smiled at her and said- its OK.hi I am Raman.u r

Ishita smiled and said- hi Raman.I am ishita.new admission in class twelve,science section.can u tell where is the class.

Raman did a happy dance mentally hearing she is in his class only.

Raman- yes that's my class .come with me.

Ishita nodded her head and goes behind him.they reached the class together.all look at ishita as she is coming from another planet.while she was nervous.Raman smiled at her and assured everything will be alright.

She smiled and went to sit on the first bench.he goes and sit beside her.shagun fume in anger and come and sat between the two.

Shagun-hi I am shagun.

Ishita- hi shagun ,I am Ishita.

Shagun-and he is Raman,my boyfriend.

Ishita felt a prick in her heart hearing her words.Raman glare at shagun hearing her words.he was about to clear the air but teacher entered and Raman couldn't.

Teacher- ishita come to me,she stands up and goes to the teacher,see students.she is ishita iyer admitted in our class today.she is a topper of her batch.she scored 98.8%in last exam.I hope u people will help her in everything.

All nodded, she came back to sit beside Raman again but saw shagun kept her bag there.ishita slowly took her bag and went to sit on other bench.

Days started passing,Raman was attracted towards ishita.but shagun never leave Raman alone and never allow ishra to be together.

One day Raman was going to the school in his car when he saw ishita was standing in the bus stand.it was raining heavily.he tell the driver to stop the car.

He slide the window and asked-hey ishita what u r doing here.

Ishita- hi Raman,actually I missed my school bus.so waiting for another bus.but seems due to heavy rain no bus will come.so I think I should go home now.

Raman- hey come with me.we can go together.

Ishita- no u go.if shagun see us together. She will be angry and I don't want to be her target for no reason.

Raman- please come naa.

Ishita- no Raman.I will not come.

Raman- OK as u please,he come out of the car and send the driver.

Ishita- hey why u did so.

Raman- u can't come in my car naa.so I will wait for u.

Ishita- but u may also get late.

Raman- so let it be.I want to be with u.

Ishita smiled at him.both start waiting for the bus.but due to heavy rain no bus came.ishita start feeling cold due to rain.Raman see her and take out his jacket and cover her.

Ishita- thank u.

Raman was standing there wearing white shirt and grey pant while she was wearing a grey skirt with white shirt.he too started feeling cold.ishita saw this and said- come near we can share the jacket.

Soon they were in same jacket waiting for the bus.soon the school time was over.she take out the jacket and start getting wet in the rain.her shirt stuck to her body making her curve look more visible.Raman look around and saw some boys looking lusting over her.he came and take her in a hug covering her front.she look at him all shocked.

Baadalon ki tarah hi toh.
Tune mujhpe saaya kiya hai
Baarishon ki tarah hi to.
Tune khushiyon se bhigaya hai
Aandhiyon ki tarah hi to
Tune hosh ko udaya hai

He caressed her face lovingly and said- u r so beautiful ishita.

Ishita closed her eyes feeling his gentle touch on her face.he couldn't stop himself and bend to kiss her.he kissed her closed eyes ,then nose ,then cheeks and lastly claim her lips.she started responding to his kiss.they were kissing each other hungrily .at last they broke in need of air.

Her face was flushed while her lips were swollen.she touch her lips to feel his touch and then realised what they had done.Raman was coming to her when she stopped him and ran from there.

From next day ,ishita started distancing herself from Raman.Raman wanna talk to ishita but she wasn't ready to hear anything.on the other hand ,shagun always try to prove that Raman is her boyfriend infront of Ishita.Ishita stop talking to Raman at all .

It was the farewell of there batch ,everyone was enjoying while two soul were shattered. Raman was sad that he couldn't meet ishita again and ishita was also sad about the same.ishita thought she should talk to Raman for the last time.

She was going to him when she heard shagun telling her friends,today at last Raman proposed me.but I rejected him.because I don't like him anymore.

Ishita was stunned to hear this.she went outside and shagun smirked- now Raman will understand what it mean to reject shagun.now ishita will never say yes to him.

Ishita was crying standing alone when Raman came and said- hey ishita ,I wanna tell u something.I wanna tell u I love u Ishita.

Ishita turn to him and said- wow Raman,today when shagun rejected u .u came to propose me.


Raman- who told u this I didn't proposed her.

Ishita- I heard it myself.how can u do this.

Raman- trust me ishita,shagun is lying.

Ishita- really Raman,from past one year I am seeing u people together. And today u r telling she is lying,why u r cheating me.I don't believe u.and I don't love uu,moreover I don't have time for all this rubbish I wanna be a doctor for which I need to study hard very hard for years.saying so she was going when he pulled her.

Raman- I love only u and I know u too love me.I know I had been an idiot not to deny my relationship with shagun.but I am ready to repent.how much time do u want to realise ur love for me.one year,two year.OK I am giving u five years.

Ishita- five years?

Raman- yes five years.I am going ishita and we will meet here exactly on same date at 10 in the morning .if u can realise ur love for me till then .please come to meet me otherwise I will think my love was one sided.saying so he was gone.

Flashback end

Raman look at his watch ,it was showing 3o'clock.

Raman- it seems u don't love me ishita.saying so he was going ,when he heard her voice.

Raman.

He stopped and turn to look at her.she was fully drenched in rain smiling at him wearing a black kurti with leggings.

She came near him and smile at him.he too smiled and asked with his eyes.

Ishita- tyre puncture.she was holding her sandals in her hand.

Raman look at them.

Ishita- it broke.

Raman says showing his hand,five hours.

She smiled and said- five years.they hugged each other tight drenched in rain.

Sanam re,sanam re
Tu hi mera sanam hua re
Karam re ,karam re
Tera mujhpe karam hua re

Ishita- where were u Raman.I use to come here every year today thinking u might come but u never come.

Raman- sorry I was in abroad.

Ishita- I missed u.

Raman- u missed me but u didn't love me.

Ishita- I love u Raman.

Raman- I love u too ishita.

He look at her lips and said- can I.

Ishita smiled and nodded.

He broke the hug and bend on his knee.

Raman- ishita I love u from the first day I saw u.but I was an idiot couldn't confess my feelings. And when I confessed u denied.I think both of us were foolish. So now its better to stop being foolish and start spending our life together. Coz I wanna love u alot for my whole life. Will u marry me.he said with a ring in his hand.

Ishita nodded and he slipped the ring in her finger.he stand up and claimed her lips in a soul searing kiss.

Mera muqaddar sanwara hai yun
Naya savera joh laaya hai tu
Tere hi sang bitaane hai mujhko
Mere saare janam re
Sanam re,sanam re
Tu hi mera sanam hua re
Karam re ,karam re tera mujhpe karam hua re

That's all for now.will wait for ur responses.
Edited by cutieruhi - 9 years ago
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Posted: 9 years ago
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Awesome os.
Simple yet lovely.
Ishra fell for each other from the very first sight.but they never confessed.
Oops this shagun ,she was haddi in ishra union.
Raman gave five yrs time to ishita and promise to met at same place ,after five yrs.
He was waiting but she was late by five hours.
At last they met and confessed their love .lovely os.
If you want we won't mind reading its epilogue.
At last HAPPY BIRTHDAY CUTIERUHI


Edited by Divanru - 9 years ago
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Posted: 9 years ago
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unress..

lovely os
its too cute
this shagun is really😡
raman is sooo lovely
ishita came every year for raman
so beautiful di

today is your birthday
but you gave us many gifts
which are just mind blowing

thanks for pm
Edited by detha - 9 years ago
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Posted: 9 years ago
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Congrats Dii for completing 1 yr

Lovely os
Lyked Raman in it
Just hate shagun as always we do
So ishita comes every yr to that place
Lyked rain scene
Ending scene was awesome
Thanks for pm
Cont soon

Edited by mannatkhan - 9 years ago
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Posted: 9 years ago
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Hey Raksha...

Many Many Congratulations Dear for
Completing One year on this forum...
And Thank you for giving us so many beautiful
stories of Ishra...

!! HAPPY BIRTHDAY CUTIERUHI !!




Sweet Simple and Beautiful OS...
Teenage story of Ishra...Aww they are so cute...
Written very well...I loved every bit of it...
Choice of Song Beautiful...
Keep writing like this...




Edited by riYa09guPta - 9 years ago
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Posted: 9 years ago
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many many congratulations di for completing one whole year in IF 👏👏

HAPPY BIRTHDAY 2 cutieruhi 🥳

thank u sooo much for continuously entertaining us with your amazing stories
and hoping that we will get many more awesome stories in upcoming future also 😃

coming to the OS it was wonderful 👏
beautiful song...thanks 2 Asma for suggesting it
liked raman's self talk when he was waiting for ishita sitting in a bench and
was trying to touch rain droplets...

except shagun everything in FB was nice...
raman fell in love with ishita at the very first sight 😳
though ishita also liked him but she never expressed it due to shagun...
shagun was a 🤬...she told ishu that raman is her bf 😡
that ishra rain scene was lovely ...loved it 😳
ishra were together in raman's jacket 😳
he hugged her for protecting her from all lusty eyes 😳
their kiss was ☺️
raman confessed his love to ishita but she mu raman for that b***h shagun 😡
raman had given ishita five years to realize her love for him...

finally after five years ishra met with each other 😃
ishita used to come every year in the same place hoping that she will meet with raman...
loved ishra confession and their kiss 😳
happy ending!!
if possible plz give an epilogue of this OS di...
will be waiting for that 😳

again thank u for this beautiful OS di 😊
luv u loads 🤗





Edited by rufana10 - 9 years ago
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Posted: 9 years ago
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Awe it's so cute di
Their school life was amazing
This shagun is urghh
But thank god last mein sab theek ho gaya
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Posted: 9 years ago
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Congratulations for completing one year di
Thanks a lot di for giving us so many beautiful stories
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Posted: 9 years ago
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Congrtz 2 u 4 cmpltng 1 year here... And giving us so many of ur story writings.. Well keep writing it ..
Fabulous is it was. .. (Y)

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