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Posted: 9 years ago
#11
Omg what is this prologue 😲😲
Shocking prologue it is
Jaldi jaldi update Karo
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Posted: 9 years ago
#12
Opening ... A shocker
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Posted: 9 years ago
#13
Interesting start..! 😊
Continue soon..
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Nandini
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Posted: 9 years ago
#14
Mohabbat Me Insaan Insane Ho Jata Hai Ajib Harqat Karne Lagta Hai..
Raman Is Blackmailing Her... Kaho Na Pyaar Hai Warna Hum Marne Ko Taiyaar Hai..rofl..
I Love You Raman..nnn
Nice And Interesting Start Nidhi
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Posted: 9 years ago
#15
interesting prologue Nidhi 😉
waiting for the first part...
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Posted: 9 years ago
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Thanks guys for giving all ur love and support to this story. Keep showering Ur love like this guys.







PART ONE

Due to heavy rains, all trains & flights to Mumbai were stopped. Raman an event manager was cursing his friend Mihir, who called him Chennai. Mihir was getting engaged so he wants Raman to handle the arrangements of his engagement. So to check some arrangements he came to Chennai & ended in stucking in bad weather of the city. He wanted to reach Mumbai asap since he had to organize an event for some minister's b'day party programme the very next day.

Raman was sitting at Chennai railway station in the hope that maybe he could catch any train for Mumbai. He enquired Stationmaster about the arrivals of trains. Stationmaster told him that all the trains for Mumbai are delayed. He sat dejectedly on a nearby bench frustated & tensed about the minister's event in Mumbai. It is a big opportunity for his event managing firm & to set his feet in world . He was continuously trying to update Romi, his manager cum best friend.

Few minutes later,

A girl arrives at the railway station. She was tensed , worried about or by something. She sat on the nearby bench on which Raman was sitting. Since Raman was busy in briefing romi about the function so he didn't noticed the girl. She was continuously fidgeting with her duppatta & fresh tears started rolling down on her chubby cheeks. A small boy came to her who was selling tea.

Boy - Akka ! why r u crying? Feeling cold?

Girl nods her head negatively.

Boy - then what happened?

Girl again nods her head negatively.

Boy - Akka! Have this tea u will feel good.

He forwarded the tea to the girl , but due to fear her hands started shaking and the glass fell from her hand.

Due to breaking of glass Raman looked in that direction, a girl was crying & looking frightened. Seeing tears his heart pricked. He was feeling bad for her. But he has fallen for her...

Aankhon mein teri...

Ajab si, ajab si, adaayein hain
Ho...
ankhon mein teri...
ajab si, ajab si, adaayein hain
Dil ko bana dein jo patang
Saansein ye teri vo hawaayein hain

Aankhon mein teri...
Ajab si, ajab si, adaayein hain
Ho...
ankhon mein teri...
ajab si, ajab si, adaayein hain
Dil ko bana dein jo patang
Saansein ye teri vo hawaayein hain

Aayi aisi raat hai jo
Bohat khush-naseeb hai
Chaahe jisse door se duniya
Vo mere kareeb hai
Kitna kuch kehna hai
Fir bhi hai dil mein sawaal kaheen
Sapnon mein jo roz kaha hai
wo phir se kahun Ya nahee

Aankhon mein teri
Ajab si, ajab si, adaayein hain
Ho...
ankhon mein teri
ajab si, ajab si, adaayein hain
Dil ko bana dein jo patang
Saansein ye teri vo hawaayein hain

Tere saath saath aisa
Koi noor aaya hai
Chaand teri raushni ka
Halka sa ik sayaa hai
Teri nazron ne dil ka kiya jo hasharr
Asarr ye hua
Ab inmein hi doobke ho jaaun paar
Yehi hai dua

Aankhon mein teri
Ajab si, ajab si, adaayein hain
Ho...
ankhon mein teri
ajab si, ajab si, adaayein hain
Dil ko bana dein jo patang
Saansein ye teri vo hawaayein hain


He started coming towards her. He just wanted to hug her & make her feel safe.

Girl - I m sorry chotu! I... I ... I m sorry. (she was continuously apologizing to the boy folding her hands , tears rolling down her rosy cheeks)

Raman came near her.

Raman - bring two cups of tea

Boy - O.K, anna.

Girl looked towards Raman and fell a strong urge to hug him, to hug him hard.

Girl - I m sorry, I didn't do it intentionally.

She was sobbing which was accompanied by continuous hiccups. Raman gave water to her. Her hiccups stopped & she was not sobbing also.

Raman - hi ! I m Raman Bhalla.

Girl - I m Ishita Iyer. Thanks for water.

Meanwhile chotu brings tea & raman hand over one cup of tea and he himself took the other one. they started sipping tea silently.

Edited by tiara9198 - 9 years ago
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Posted: 9 years ago
#17
A very small update???
Nice one awee what happened to ishu? ?
Update soon
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Posted: 9 years ago
#18
Nice update Nidhi..
'What happened to Ishu?
Cont soon..
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Posted: 9 years ago
#19
Nice but chotu.
what happened to ishu
Continue soon
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Posted: 9 years ago
#20
NYC starting..
Wat hpnd 2 her

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