ff : DIL KA RISHTA #2: UPDT PART 16 Pg 80 Add 14 June - Page 21

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Posted: 9 years ago
i love abhi n ram convo it was superb n yes
how ishita take his name n say shravan raman kumar bhallah wow
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Posted: 9 years ago

Originally posted by: 7APK

Wow !!!! Mind Blowing ...
Super - Duper Amazing ...
Awesome Update ...
Loved it...
Continue Soon...
Thanks for the PM... 😳 😳

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Posted: 9 years ago

Originally posted by: hana_y

i love abhi n ram convo it was superb n yes
how ishita take his name n say shravan raman kumar bhallah wow



thank you so much hana
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Posted: 9 years ago
Fabulous update
Thanks for pm
Please continue soon
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Posted: 9 years ago
Hello guys you all are happy as i have been able to give you my four ff in this weeks wow even im happy but from next week it wont as school will enter i wont be able to go in syber in the morning to sent pm or links .


Thx a lot as i got lots respond for this ff im so glad to see your interested for it thx again 😃.


thru this i got more strength to write more or do next updt like im give you another one for it on almost three days wow it all due to you .


you have motivate me more thx a lots 😃.

author note ; mature stuff in last part read on your own risk 😳

here we go


Part 13


It begins with


Shravu who was almost seven months start to walk on his knees n palms like all babies , ishita take his pic n call toshi to see shravu first step , they were happy .



Raman was in a meeting ishita send him pic of shravu , as he seen the pic , he shout in excited n every one look at him , he just told then his happiness n all congrats him , he was happy .


After he return home he did a light lips kiss to ishita n lift shravu kiss him n say " You will be like me right shravu , see madrasan he walk early like me , it means he will love me more than you " ; he play with him .


I " How can you say you walk early han , you dont even remember it , or you will told me you remember right ravan kumar " ; she raise her eyebrows .


R " You are saying this as you are jealous he will love me more right " did wink to her .


I " Ok fine lets see whom he love more , put him on bed n let him go with whom he love , you will see he will come to me " .


R " Prepare you to loose then as he will come to me im sure of it madam ", hold his collar .


Each of them call him with open arms on calling his name , poor shravu dont know with who to go , he walk n stop in the middle n look at both of them n then he go directly jump in raman arms .


Ishita was happy to see how he is attach to raman n say " Very bad shravu mama ke saath aisa kiya , hamara beta sirf papa se pyaar karta hai mama se nahin " ; act as she is crying watching shravu .


Raman knew she want to see how shravu will react n say " Shravu mama rorahi hai , tum mama se pyaar nahin karte " ; talk as a child to him .


Shravu who being a baby could not see his mum crying , he jump to ishita hug him n kiss him , raman hug both n they smile , they did selfie of them .


At night shravu was not ready to sleep how try ishita n raman did then ishita got idea how to mske him sleep by singing , ishita breast him n start to sing .


La la la la

hey ho

hmn hmm

han ha han

lala lala laa


hmm hey ha ha

Dil churale

oh chand si


chehre wale

Muskurale oh

Chand si chehre wale


She caress his hair to while singing , raman admire her n smile he too join her n take shravu to her after he finish breasting n he too sing .


Deen raath mein tujse
Pyaar karu
Paar kaise bhala
ikraar karu
tu na saje meri bekara riya



He lift him swing him , he change his nappy , kiss him , dance with him .


Dil churale oh chand si
Chehre wale
Muskurale oh chand
Si chehre wale
Dil churale


Both laugh on seeing he was not ready to sleep , both hold him n swing him play with him , raman make ishita sit on wheelchair n she carry shravu , he push her


Ab to meri
Zindagi hai tujse
Anawali kaal ki
Jawani hai tujse
Meine deka tujko
Mehsus karke
Meri sason ki
Rawani hai tujse
Gham bulale
Oh chand chehre wale
Muskurale oh
Chand si chehre wale
Dil churale



Raman turn the wheelchair around , he bend his head to her n kiss her forehead , she caress his hair , she hold put shravu on her shoulder n caress his back to sleep , raman too put his head on her lap , she caress his hair too , shravu got sleep raman put him in his craddle n came to ishita in the hall on cont singing .


He he he
Lalaa la laa
He he lala

Teri hi rayalo
Ki duniya
Basayein
kahin ab tujko
Na bul payein
Meri zindagi
Ahja tujko
Bata hoon

Meri har dharkan
Tuje sirf chahein
Azmalin oh chand si
Chehre wale
Muskursle oh chand si
Chehre wale
Din raath mein
Tujse pyaar karu
Par ksise bala kikrar karu
Tu na samje
meri beka ra riyan

Dil churare oh chand si
Chehre wale
Muskurale oh chand si
Chehre wale dil churale


Hehe he lalalaa hehe lala


He lift her from wheel chair n carry her, he spin with her , her hands around his neck , he sit on coach she was on him , he caress her face , he kiss her hand , hug her play with her hair , he rub his nose on her neck , they hug in intense way , he take her on bed , both make light love .



Raman used to take all shravu antics his laughing face crying face each his baby acts he capture all .


One day raman take ishita in their garden n make her walk slowly then he leave her n ask her to walk , he stay near her she could not but he give her courage to do it for him n for shravu , while she try n about to fall he grip her n support her n cont it until he make her walk properly on her feet , she cry with happiness as she was on her feet after almost one month , out of happiness she hug raman shout loudly kiss him on his lips .


I " Raman im on my feet raman i will walk now im so happy thank you raman if here due of your love " ; she hug him n talk with happiness .


Raman was more happy to see her like earlier n say " Yes ishita you did it , im proud of you , dont thx me it my duty madrasan , im happy for you " ; tears was in his eyes their hugs was so intense , he lift her up n turn her around , she open her arms n look up to welcome new life of her .


He throw water on her which make her run after him until inside the house , once they enter in toshi n om was happy to see her on her feet they hug her tears was coming out due of happiness .


Ishra n shravu went to Iyers n give them the surprise of ishita , they become emotional n hug her n they take bless from them .


Mad " Ayo happy you have prove how loving caring hubby you are , with your love support she become normal thx a lots happy " ; she was emo with tears .


Raman wipe amma tears hug her n say " Bari amma im happy after so many days you call me as happy , n why tears now , she become alright now , i must fear as she will not stay sitting now , you know bari amma , she did not wanted to walk , but with my scold she did n see how she is standing now " ; with smile on his face .


Vishwa call bhalla's for diner at their place , they reach all have diner with happiness all was so happy n now it time to make them start their new life , both parents decide to send them in hotel , which they make them accept n leave too , bhalla' s stay for that night at iyers .


Ishra reach hotel raman lift n carry her when they was in the corridor of their room , he make her open the door n as they enter inside flowers fall on them , she was overwhelm to see how it was decorated with flowers , candles , fragrance n on bed there was petals of roses with heart shape which have R L I , she hug raman .


I " Wow it so beautiful impressed really thx a lot , to make me feel special n it like our first night im so happy to be your wife love you a lots " ; kiss him on his neck .


Raman broke the hug , turn her n hug from back his chin on her shoulder n say " It was your wish right to live again our first night expriment right , so im just fulfill your wish madrasan , want to make you feel the first night which we ever dream to have hmm " : he brush his lips on her neck , he trace her arms with passionate way .


His sensation touch make her get shivered all parts of her bodies , likes it his first touch with her in such a way , his touch caress cont from her neck then neckline , he rurn her to face him , her eyes was close , he admire her look how she was ready n how afftected she was in his touch , he was please to see her attraction her pleasure which was sparkling on her face her lips was shivered to feel more , his touch was cont from her bare back , he ask her to open her eyes , he cup her face to him n saw their love sparkling in them , he slowly un lace her dress n stop to have her permition from her .


She could not resist his touch more n hug him tightly on saying " Im all yours raman , i cant resist this torture of yours , please let me enjoy n make me feel the night which i always dream to have with you , the love the passion the sensation i was to feel all that tonight raman i cant control my emotion any more , whole my body want to feel you n yiur touch , i want to never forget this night of ours today raman please make me your wife in full right raman dont haress me with your tiuch only " ; in a seduction sensation voice , she too caress him unbutton his shirt n start to haress him with her touch , which was torture him too .


Music was pkaying in back ground it was Bahon ke darmiyan do pyaar mil rahe hai


He start to kiss her n remove ubdress her , she too did same to him , his lips was brushing each inch of her body , he admire her napped body , he take a rose n trace it all over her part , he start his kiss from down n moving up until her lips n catch it , both start their kissing sassion , they stop to breath n cont again enjoying each ever tongue , his hand was caressing other part of her body , giving her more pleasusre , he broke kiss n start to suck all part of each part of her , her moarns start with love n pleasure , he carry her to bed n he caress her breasts press them he unlace her bra n slip , he suck her breasts his over hand was in her sensitive part , giving her more pleaseure n make her moarns , she engourage him for on playing with his hair , he kiss her navel suck he leave love bite each part of her boby , she take over him n she kiss him suck him suck his chest bite his nipples n press his manhood , he too moarns n love her love attraction to him , both was rolling each ever with moarns both was giving other one the pleasure which they never ever feel from their life partner , he suck her sensetive part , she yells for more , she too did same to him , both play with each ever like this until raman entered her making her his , both yells moarns for more , she was over him also , both was lost in their love passion until the climax , that night was their best n unforgetable night the night pass with love making they look as a thirsty person , their was love , passion , sensation , attraction all was their .


Finally raman make her his with full right , both say I love you to each ever n did a hug n slept at 4 am till 6 am n they take a shower together n make love other there too .


R " Can we go home mrs raman kumar bhalla or you want to stay here a little more hmm " ; pull her close to him n kiss her lips .


I " If there was no shravu i would say to stay a little more but cant need to do mother right too " ; with blushing face n smile .


R " Hmm see how you become red like tomato when you blushing n how was the night it was special or not hmm "; he pull her cheek n wink at her .


I " This night will never erease now im all yours raman , i finally become your wife in a true n right way " , she too pull raman cheeks .


Raman was little confused 😕 on her talk n think what she means on saying finally she become my wife truly n in right way .


His thought broke with her voice n they leave hotel .


That is guys hope you will like it will hit like button n will leave your comment too😃 .

Next : Shravu walk on feet raman in mumbai


thx

love hansa 😃


Edited by --HANSA-- - 9 years ago
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Posted: 9 years ago
superb update di
ishita walking on her feet
luvd raman's bonding wid shravu
aww to cute both singing lullaby for him
ishita has got her memory den y is she nt telling him?
cont soon
love
akku😉
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Posted: 9 years ago
unres
finally they celebrate their Ist night
is ishita remembered her past????
like their cute nok jhok on love 4 shravu
bring more thier cute moments
looking 4ward to see shravu would call ma ya papa Ist
Edited by lonelyyyy - 9 years ago
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Posted: 9 years ago

Originally posted by: akriti154

superb update di
ishita walking on her feet
luvd raman's bonding wid shravu
aww to cute both singing lullaby for him
ishita has got her memory den y is she nt telling him?
cont soon
love
akku😉



thank you so much for your comment im glad you like it

do you think she got her memory dear ?
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Posted: 9 years ago


yeah congrats
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Posted: 9 years ago

Originally posted by: --HANSA--



thank you so much for your comment im glad you like it

do you think she got her memory dear ?


i think she did coz she said i become ur wife truly
had she not got it back she would not have said that coz according to her shravu is their baby

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