Ishra ss-kyunki..tu dhadkan main dil teaser on pg 134 added on Dec 27

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traveller_girl

@traveller_girl

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Posted: 9 years ago

#511

Awesome update...

Raman has a very painful past and Ishita helps him come out of it...

The song...just perfect...

The last scene...lovely. .

Continue soon

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Tulika Roy

@ishra.addict

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Posted: 9 years ago

#512

Nothing to say. You penned every emotion nicely.
Raman went through such pain, but glad that Ishita healed the pain.
Oho!! So finally they made love session.
By the way which film song it was?

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mamtasingla

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Posted: 9 years ago

#513

awesome chapter

ishita console raman😊

and accepted him fully😳

continue soon

thnks 4 pm

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amanabdulla98

@amanabdulla98

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Posted: 9 years ago

#514

Lovely update
Thanks for pm
Cont soon

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1023427

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Posted: 9 years ago

#515

PART 4 & 5 BOTH R SO AWESME AND BEAUTIFUL CONTINUE

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Mirrah Abish

@Mirrah_Abish

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Posted: 9 years ago

#516

She was crying hearing his past.she came closer and hugged him hard.

Raman- I am perfectly alright.u r not needed to hug me and console me.I am very strong.he said stiffening himself.

She hugged him tighter and said- I am sorry Raman.I am so sorry.

Raman- for what.

Ishita- because I was not with u.u had to go through all this alone.

He listen to her words and as if his dam of patience broke.he cried bitterly hugging her tight.she was consoling him.he was crying harder.she kissed him lovingly.

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Mirrah Abish

@Mirrah_Abish

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Posted: 9 years ago

#517

Originally posted by: NIDA.ISHRAFAN
She was crying hearing his past.she came closer and hugged him hard.

Raman- I am perfectly alright.u r not needed to hug me and console me.I am very strong.he said stiffening himself.

She hugged him tighter and said- I am sorry Raman.I am so sorry.

Raman- for what.

Ishita- because I was not with u.u had to go through all this alone.

He listen to her words and as if his dam of patience broke.he cried bitterly hugging her tight.she was consoling him.he was crying harder.she kissed him lovingly.

Luv dis scene

Superb job

How she consoled him

N how he cried in her arms

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Mdwst

@Mdwst

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Posted: 9 years ago

#518

Lovely update
He had a terrible, abusive past. He opened up to her and shared his feelings and she consoled him and they became one. Nice..,, hope Ashok doesn't spoil it.

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Mirrah Abish

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Posted: 9 years ago

#519

He continued- I was drowning in my loneliness. But someone held my hand and saved me from drowning.u know who is she.

Ishita- who.

Raman- u .

Ishita- me?

Raman- yes u,the day I met u changed my life forever.when u cried holding my legs to leave u ,u make me remember who am I.I was also begging to someone to leave me someday but he didn't listen to me.I can't do the same to u.I felt an urge to protect u from this ugly society. That's why that day I leave u.I was confused that why I did it but today I know the reason.I don't want u to go through which I have gone through.but destiny take us together.when u asked for food and I don't have anything.that time I realised how poor I am. I am still that poor boy who cries for food.I was still the same.have no one to share my pain .want to act happy but can't feel the happiness.but since I saved u I am feeling contented like I have won the world.yeh ehsaas pehli baar hua hai ki main bhi kisiki muskurane ki wajah ban sakta hoon.tu roti hai toh mujhe achcha nahi lagta .mat roya kar.he said wiping her tears.

She smiled between her tears and kissed his forehead. He close his eyes to feel her touch.

Raman- phir se karo naa(do it once again)

I luv dis scene

How her helpless state

Made raman remember of himself

N he wanted to protect her from this society

Luv dis scene

Wonderfully described