Thodi Si Bewafai #2 Part 26 on Page 110 - Page 34

Jaisa ki maine kaha tha ki is intezaar ka fal
mitha hoga... par ye to us se kai jyada mitha
nikla...jise padhke mere chehre pe ek mithi
si muskaan aa gayi...really Dii...

Such a beautiful and soul soothing update...
I just like Awww all the time while reading
this...I don't know what kind of magic you
done to me Dii... main to bas aapki fan ho
gai hu...

Song selection...as always amazing...maine
pehle bhi kaha tha ke saare songs sirf aapke
liye hi bane hai...songs to beautiful hote hi
par aap unhe aur jyada beautiful bana dete
ho apne touch se...and that's your forte...


"Main tumse aur tumhari mumma se behad
pyaar karta hoon...chaho toh papa ko test
karke dekh lena beta...ab main tumhe aur
tumhari mumma ko khud se zara bhi door
nahi jaane dunga...ek pal ke liye bhi nahi,
he excitedly looked at his shopping trolley
which was full with baby items while waiting
in the bill line."

"Ab subah shaam din raat har ek second main
tum dono ko pyaar karunga...tum dono ke liye
hi jiyunga...ab dukh hum teeno ke paas tak na
aa paega aur khushi humse door na jaa paegi,
he dreamily drove the car back towards home."
Awww...I fall in love with this Raman...
Diwaani to pehle hi thi ab aur jyada ho gayi
hun...Raman ki bhi aur Aapki bhi Dii...
Aur ye main Dil se keh rahi hun...

Ek anjaan bacchi ke liye itna pyar ... sorry ab
to ye Raman aur Ishita ki bacchi hai ...ise kehte
hai Dil Ka Rishtaa...jo har rishtey se pyara aur
gehra hota hai...
To kya main is bacchi ko Ruhi samjhun ya Ruhi
humein future me milegi...???

Finally everything is clear now...plzz give some
romance btwn them...
I loved the the whole part...waiting for next...
...Intazaar Jaari hai...

Unres on page 31 and 39

RES 😳

I am new to this forum . What go mean by RES
Btw.. Your stories are awesome.. Just fell in love with it.

Originally posted by: Columbus

I am new to this forum . What go mean by RES
Btw.. Your stories are awesome.. Just fell in love with it.

It means u r reserving the space for your comment.. ..
U can edit that later 😊
Hope it helps you 😊

Plz update soon...

Originally posted by: Columbus

I am new to this forum . What go mean by RES
Btw.. Your stories are awesome.. Just fell in love with it.

RES

Aaj nahi padh paungi ... high on fever 😕

~

UNRES

Sabse pehle toh... why was the update so short ... abhi toh start hua tha & then it just ended!

Acha enough of my rant; the update was blissful ... Raman is a sweetheart ...!!

Beautiful update 👏

Muah Muah...

Loved it
Finally Almost whole truth out

Pankhuri...Hats off
Yar You are a gifted soul.

This updte ...As usual
Brilliantly written

Ise sulate sulate hum so jayege
Awe... Sho cute...

Raman use to sleep of boredom not happiness
Nice punch...

Then she sang
Dil chura le

Lovely lyrics...


"You can love this stranger baby so much then I whom you have loved would be loved how much by you.."

My fav

Another I liked Raman talking to trolley

"I love you and your mumma unconditionally...if you want you can test your father dear...now I will not let you and your mumma go away from me...not even for a second"

Yar I am falling in love with this Raman

He loves that baby absolutely...

It was worth waiting...I m saying this again
Whole story characters dialogue...Its just heart touching

What else to say
I m short of words...

Continue soon

Thanks for pm

So wonderful