Thodi Si Bewafai #2 Part 26 on Page 110

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Thread 2 for a story in just 15 parts 😲

All I can say is thodi si bewafai ke saath readers ne zara bhi bewafai nahi ki

As i always say thank you is just a mere word but thanks to each and every one of you who has read this story at any point of time

It is because of you all that I am creating this new thread so soon

This was surely not expected

I guess I have got a pre-birthday gift 😳😳😳

Thanks a lot everyone from the bottom of my heart

And a special mention to all my earnings from IF

Mannu Di, Thapathap, Anki, Akshu, Aru Di, Chaithra, Chutkus, Umeirah, Nandini (both Nandinis'😆😆), Nidhi, Isha, Jum Di, Suni, Sapna and the list goes on. I am really sorry for having missed few people if I have...you are free to curse my poor memory

P.S. A special mention to two of my bros as well... Rex and Deep 😉😉

I am thankful to one and all for this unconditional love and don't have a slightest idea of how to return this love.

All i can do is update which is really nothing at all in return of the love


I love you all 🤗



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Unlike last time, this time i remembered to have a post for index 😆

Index-

Parts 1-15 : Thread #1

Part 16: Below on page 1










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Part 16-



Aur ek baar toh main tumhara bas wait hi karta reh gaya aur tum aayi hi nahi...baad mein call kiya toh pata chala tum beach ke opposite end par mera wait kar rahi thi, they laughed together as he narrated some lovable past memories to her.

(And once I kept waiting for you and you didn't turn up...later when you called me I realized that you were on the other end of the beach waiting for me, they laughed together as he narrated some lovable past memories to her.)

Kitna acha time spend kiya hai na humne Raman, she commented delightfully.

(We have spent such lovely time Raman, she commented delightfully.)

Haan Ishita bahut hi acha...un dino ki baat hi alag thi, he smiled reminiscing the moments from there initial courtship days.

(Yes Ishita indeed a wonderful time...those days were just special, he smiled reminiscing the moments from there initial courtship days.)

Par ek baat meri samajh mein nahi aayi Raman...main achanak gir kaise gayi, she asked in a serious tone.

(But I didn't understand one thing Raman...how did I fall down suddenly, she asked in a serious tone.)

Arre tum bhaag kyun rahi ho...sab bataunga...ek ek baat par order mein toh chalo na...girne se pehle toh bahut kuch hai batane ko, he tried to divert her.

(Why are you running so fast...I will tell you everything...each and everything but in order...there is so much to tell before your accident, he tried to divert her.)

Haan yeh bhi sahi keh rahe ho...order wise to chalna hi chahie...pata hai main keh rahi thi mujhe nahi sunna mujhe nahi sunna par ab aapse yeh sab sunke bahut maza aa raha hai, she happily exclaimed.

(Yah you are right actually...we should proceed order wise...you know all this while I was saying that I don't want to know anything but now I am enjoying listening to all this, she happily exclaimed.)

Didn't I tell you I am always right, he praised himself.

Haanji haanji aap kabhi kaise galat ho sakte ho, she folded her hands dramatically.

(Yah yah how you can be ever wrong, she folded her hands dramatically.)

Waise madam ab chalen...baaton baaton mein kab 6 baj gaye pata hi nahi chala...maine 6 baje tak ki hi booking ki hai...ab nahi chalen na toh yeh log humen uthake phenk denge, he chuckled an one liner to make her laugh and with laughing faces, they both left the place hand in hand.

(By the way mam we should be leaving now...we didn't realize when the clock struck 6 because of talks...I have booked this place only till 6...if we don't leave now we will thrown out from here, he chuckled an one liner to make her giggle and with laughing faces, they both left the place hand in hand.)

Ishita tum car mein baitho main do minute mein aaya, he left without waiting for her answer after making her comfortable in the car.

(Ishita you stay in car and I will be back in 2 minutes, he left without waiting for her answer after making her comfortable in the car.)

Kahan chale gaye yeh, she thought while checking car's dashboard to kill time.

(Where he went, she thought while checking car's dashboard to kill time.)

I love you Ishita, she read a chit that she found in the dashboard and instantly smiled.

Aa gaya main, he announced his arrival while settling himself at the driver seat.

(I am here, he announced his arrival while settling himself at the driver seat.)

Kahan gaye the aap, she asked while hiding the chit in her clutch.

(Where you went, she asked while hiding the chit in her clutch.)

Bill settle karne aur kahan, he lied in the silliest way.

(To settle the bill...where else, he lied in the silliest way.)

Is it...aap kuch chupa rahe hain kya, she tried to open the seal of his lips.

(Is it...are you hiding something, she tried to open the seal of his lips.)

Kya chupuanga Ishita...bill settle karne gaya tha aur kahan jaunga...tum phaltu dimag ke ghode mat chalao aur seat belt baandho, he tried to avoid her continuous questioning.

(What will I hide Ishita...I went to settle the bill and there is nothing else...you stop running the useless horses of your brain and fasten the seatbelt, he tried to avoid her continuous questioning.)

Raman meri help kar do na...bandh nahi rahi khud se, she said mischievously after thinking for a while.

(Raman please help me...I am unable to fasten it on my own, she said mischievously after thinking for a while.)

And as he bent forward to help her in fastening the seat belt, she wrapped her arms around him and tickled him at his neck.

Arre Ishita kya kar rahi ho, her sudden action amazed him.

(Ishita what are you doing, her sudden action amazed him.)

Pehle batao kahan gaye the phir chodungi, she played a smart game.

(First tell me where did you go or else I won't leave you, she played a smart game.)

Tumse chootna bhi kise hai, he gave back to her.

(Who wants to be away from you, he gave back to her.)

So not fair Raman, she left him and helped herself with the seatbelt sulking.

So cute, he repeated his words from the morning and started to drive.

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As he drove on the busy streets of Delhi, she smiled widely recalling the moments from today while looking outside leaning on the window.

Just then her sight stopped at a procession passing by and she could stop herself from drooling at the feeling. Her heart too danced along as she saw the groom riding the horse and the relatives dancing in happiness. Her smile became even wider when her eyes saw the beautifully decorated palanquin.

Aise hi aaye honge na aap bhi ghodi chadhke mujhe lene...aise hi mummy ji papa ji jhoome honge khushi mein...aur aisi hi ek sunder si doli mein bithake aap mujhe apne ghar le aaye honge, she lost herself in some beautiful assumptions.

(You must have come to take me in a similar way riding the horse...Mummy Ji Papa Ji must have danced the same way out of happiness...and you would have brought me to your house in a similarly decorated palanquin, she lost herself in some beautiful assumptions.)

Sabki Baaraatein Aayi Doli Tu Bhi Laana

Dulhan Banaake Humko Raja Ji Le Jaana

(The way processions have come for other brides, you too bring one for me and take me away as your bride.)

Aapko sehre mein dekhke mera dil kitni zor se dhadka hoga...humari aane wali zindagi ke kitne sapne baandhe honge mere dil ne, she went on.

(My heart would have beaten so fast seeing you dressed up as groom...it would have woven so many dreams about our upcoming life, she went on.)

Baandh Ke Sehra Humse Mil Ke

Niklenge Saare Armaan Dil Ke

(Come dressed up as groom and complete all my wishes)

Aur jab aapne mera ghunghat uthake mujhe dekha hoga tab humne ek dusre ko ek dusre ke ander kho diya hoga, she blushed at her thoughts.

(And when you would have seen me taking off my veil we would have lost each other into each other, she blushed at her thoughts.)

Aankhon Mein Taare Naachen Ghunghat Yun Uthaana

Phir Humko Haule Haule Baahon Mein Chupaana

(Take off my veil in a way that stars dance in my eyes and then hide me in your arms)

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Lost in a beautiful trance of dreams, she didn't even realize that she was not brought home but somewhere else.

Yeh hum kahaan aaye hain Raman, she questioned as he stopped the car.

(Where have we come Raman, she questioned as he stopped the car.)

Tumhe ek aur khoobsurat yaad ko yaad dilane, he gestured her to look ahead.

(To make you recall another beautiful memory, he gestured her to look ahead.)

Ab Delhi mein toh beach hain nahi islie socha is false lake par hi le aaun...lake nakli hai toh kya hua mera pyaar toh asli hai, he winked.

(There is no beach in Delhi so I thought of adjusting by bringing you to this false lake only...what if the lake is unreal as my love is real, he winked.)

Mujhe kuch samajh nahi aa raha hai Raman, she asked curiously.

(I am just not able to understand anything Raman, she asked curiously.)

Haath aage karo aapne, he increased her conundrums.

(Forward your hand, he increased her conundrums.)

Yeh lo ab batao, she forwarded her hands following his instructions.

(Here they are now tell me, she forwarded her hands following his instructions.)

Tumhe pata hai humari engagement se do din pehle isi tarah maine tumhare haathon par khud mehandi lagayi thi, he started to recite the incident while showing her a mehandi cone.

(You know I had applied mehandi to your hands just the same way two days before our engagement, he started to recite the incident while showing her a mehandi cone.)

Aapne khud lagayi thi, she asked shocked.

(You applied, she asked shocked.)

Haan baba...woh hua yun ki..., he narrated the whole incident while applying mehandi to her hands.

(Yes...actually what happened was..., he narrated the whole incident while applying mehandi to her hands.)

Kya ho gaya tumhe Ishita, he asked worriedly as he saw tears flowing down her cheeks.

(What happened to you Ishita, he asked worriedly as he saw tears flowing down her cheeks.)

Yeh kaisa Rishta hai na Raman pati patni ka...koi ek insaan humen achanak itna pyaar de deta hai ki uske liye hum apna ghar apne Amma Appa sabko chod aate hain...ab dekhiye na...aapke pyaar ne mujhe kya kar diya hai...Amma Appa ko chodke main aapke paas hoon...ek ghar chodke aayi aur yahan pura jahaan paa liya, she spoke through her tears mixed with a slight smile.

(Raman what a relation this is between husband and wife...one person gives us so much love suddenly that we leave our own house, our parents and everything...just see what your love has done to me...I am with you leaving my parents...I came leaving a house and found the whole world here, she spoke through her tears mixed with a slight smile.)

Apno Se Juda Main Hoti Hui

Kuch Hasti Hui Kuch Roti Hui

Jab Chodungi Babul Ki Gali

Tumhare Angana Aaungi Chali

(Laughing a little and crying at the same time, I will leave everyone including my parents and walk into your world)

And she impressed him yet again. Truly her sacrifice or rather every woman's sacrifice was worth the salute, he thought while wiping off her tears.

Sach kaha tumne Ishita...mere liye tum apne Amma Appa apna ghar apna room apna bachpan sab kuch toh chodke aayi ho, he felt proud of her.

(You are so right Ishita...you have come here for me abandoning everything of yours...your parents, your own house, your own room, your childhood and you have left everything, he felt proud of her.)


Aapke liye nahi humare liye...mujhe toh aapka hona hi tha, she went close in his embrace.

(Not for you but us...I had to be yours, she went close in his embrace.)

Jab Tann Mann Se Teri Banungi

Gori Baiyaan Meri Dharna Haule Se

(When I become yours from my heart as well as body, just hold my arms tight)

Aiyo Amma...sorry, she bit her tongue.

Kya hua, he asked confused.

(What happened, he asked confused)

Woh aapki neck aur shirt pe mehandi, she fearfully said.

(Mehandi on your neck and your shirt, she fearfully said.)

And he just laughed holding his stomach leaving her all baffled.

Kya ho gaya...mujhse aapka nuksaan ho gaya aur aap has rahe ho, she tried to understand his laugh.

(What happened...I spoilt your shirt and you are laughing, she tried to understand his laugh.)

Koi baat nahi Ishita...is nuksaan ki aadat hai mujhe...pehle bhi tumse yahi kiya tha, he pecked the mehandi filled hands before pulling his half ready bride back into his arms.

(Its ok Ishita...I am used to this now...you did the same earlier as well, he pecked the mehandi filled hands before pulling his half ready bride back into his arms.)

Mehandi Wale Haathon Ki Choodi Khankana

Phir Haule Haule Mujhko Baahon Mein Chupaana

(Play with the bangles of my hands colored in mehandi and then hide me in your arms slowly.)

Sabki Baaraatein Aayi Doli Tu Bhi Laana

Dulhan Banaake Humko Raja Ji Le Jaana

(The way processions have come for other brides, you too bring one for me and take me away as your bride.)

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He lifted the veil of her bride who sat in the exact center of the bed in the typical yet the most beautiful way.

And as soon as his tender fingers touched her, she shrank into a bale out of shyness. Responding to her shyness, he hid her in his arms as their hands explored each other's back.

Aankhon Mein Taare Naachen Ghunghat Yun Uthaana

Phir Humko Haule Haule Baahon Mein Chupaana

(Take off my veil in a way that stars dance in my eyes and then hide me in your arms)

Keeping her dupatta aside, he pecked her forehead while tickling her feet with his.

And she succumbed herself to him keeping aside all her shyness, awkwardness and self-consciousness.

Phir Bindiya Ki Sab Chaandniya Aur Payal Ki Sab Raaginiyaan

Tere Ghar Aangan Mein Luta Degi Dulhe Raja Teri Dulhaniya

(I will give away the shine of my forehead's beauty mark and the sparkle of my anklets for you my beloved groom.)

He looked at her; his eyes brimmed with passion as she laid down on the bed with his help. Switching off the scrutiny of artificial lights, he marked every part of her body as his and gave himself to her.

Pehle Tum Khelna Mere Rang Roop Se

Phir Chun Daalna Ang Ang Ki Kaliyaan

(First play with my beauty and then consume every inch of me.)

On reaching the final heights of erotic ecstasy they lied embosomed into each other, consumed and sated.

Gore Tann Ke Phoolon Se Sejiya Sajaana

Phir Haule Haule Humko Baahon Mein Chupana

(Decorate the bed of our first night with my soul and hide me in your arms slowly)



Ishita, his voice brought her back from her dream world and she realized that what happened with her just now was a dream which would turn into a reality soon.

Kab aap apni is dulhan ko phirse khud ke utna kareeb aane ka mauka denge Raman, she covered her eyes with her mehandi filled palms smiling sheepishly unaware of the fact that she was yet to attain that closeness even for the first time.

(When will you give another chance to this bride of yours to come close to you Raman, she covered her eyes with her mehandi filled palms smiling sheepishly unaware of the fact that she was yet to attain that closeness even for the first time.)

Sabki Baaraatein Aayi Doli Tu Bhi Laana

Dulhan Banaake Humko Raja Ji Le Jaana

(The way processions have come for other brides, you too bring one for me and take me away as your bride.)

Edited by DivanIsh - 9 years ago
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Congratulation for new thread

First of all
Let me share my happiness with you.

I m the first one to comment in this thread

Actually I m feeling like I have acheived something special

Ok...jokes apart

What to say

Amazing update
Full of romance!!!!

To begin with... I loved the way he narrated the beach incident

Then that car part... Where he went... Off course not to settle bill... Something fishy...

Meri Suspense Queen...Please reveal it before I get old...hehe

Then My fav. And cutest part of this whole story.

Raman applying mehendi...This time again..She spoiled his shirt..

Hamesha ki tarah I will tell my fav. Line in whole update

"Unaware of the fact that she was yet to attain that closeness even for the first time"

This was the best phrase of all.

And the song .. It was perfect for this situation.

Lovely update

I m happy Pankhuri .. You kept yr promise of daily update...

Please wada kayam rakhna ...hehe

Thanks for pm
Update today...Ok fine...Try to update soon


😉 😉
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Reswa

bas bohot hua yeh intezaar...
apki baar, edit hoke hi rahega yaar
😉 😆

haan toh matlab aaj toh dance and party toh banti hi hai ji.
kyon ji? 😉 🥳

so after party finally main apko virtual handshake krti hoon. spki is apratim uplabdhi ke liye 👏 👏

aap na sacchi bole ki hum readers ne aapke saath ittu si bhi bewfaai nahi ki. vaise bhi itni khoobsoorat bala ke saath gustaaqi hum kar bhi kaise sakte hai ji 😉 u toh know hi na mera matlab 😳

I was reviewing the journey of TSB and saw ki ktna bada journey cover kiya na humne. humne se means IshRa ne and humne. haina di?

IshRa toh they travelled a long way. sarva mangal maangalye, shive sarvaadh saadhike...that was the mantras which was useless for them earlier but now they finally started to realise the meaning of marriage and started a new life. which is commendable. kam se kam ek kaam toh Raman ne dhange ka kiya 😆

but haan I am enjoying this new journey and trust me I am falling for this journey isliye I never wanted this to end. 😊 khair is baare main baat main sochenge

chalo ab aage kya bolu main? aage toh bas yahi ki tum jeeyo hazaaro saal saal ke din ho pachaas hazaar.
aur...happy birthday to you
are happy happy birthday to you
aire gaire samjhe magar
aashiqo main rahe cufue. 😆

bas ab waiting for more parts. jaldi jaldi update karna. kyon bechaare ki band Baja rahi ho. kuch toh them khaao us par. aur bas mast mast updated deti raho taaki hum thread 3 par pohoch jaae
Edited by aarohi26 - 9 years ago
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Congrats fr new thread
Waiting fr da update

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Cngrts
Ek update tho bantha hai dear
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Bahut Bahut Badhaiyan Pankhuri Behena..
Thodi Si Bewafi Ke 2nd Thread Ke Liye...
Party To Banti Hai.
CONRETULATIONS
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Congratulations On The New Thread
Awesome
Thanks 4 The PM
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Congrats for new thread n superb part

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