TS VANRAJ N ISHRA ' PYAAR KARTA HOON TUMSE ' UPDT PART3 PG 1 - Page 4

Created

Last reply

Replies

100

Views

12.5k

Users

31

Likes

164

Frequent Posters

...Forever... thumbnail
10th Anniversary Thumbnail Dazzler Thumbnail + 3
Posted: 9 years ago
#31
Part 1
That was an awesome start
--HANISA-- thumbnail
13th Anniversary Thumbnail Sparkler Thumbnail + 4
Posted: 9 years ago
#32
HELLO DEARIES THX TO LIKE THIS TS TOO EVEN IT KHANNA INVOLVE THX FOR COMMENTS TOO.


IT NOT ONLY ON VANDU N SURAJ THIS TS BUT ISHRA TOO YOU WILL SEE BOTH SIDE BUT EVEN IM LIKE YOU CANT SEE KHANNA WITH IYERS SO READ TO KNOW HOW I POTRAY SURAJ HERE.


HERE WE GO IGNORE MISTAKE N MY BAD GRAMER TOO.



PYAAR KARTA HOON TUMSE


PART 2


It start morning at bhalla house


All was in hall having breakfast ishita was not there ... raman was lost on thinking on ishita talk ... he stares every one look how they are.


Vandu n bala came over there n all praise her necklace ... toshi said ... it look real diamond ...
raman tease her on saying.


Raman... " Vandu ... your diamond looks more real than america diamond ... who knows you may got a student lover ... who offer you this ... bala beware han ", in smile , he wink to vandu in teasing mode.



Ishita came other there n say ... " How can you tease akka raman ... not fair with you ... it not a crime if some one love her she is so sexy teacher too tight jiju " , she give high five to bala n both laugh.



Bala ... " Hmm I must agree with you ishu ... my wife is so sexy ... but im aftaid on the one who will do this error ... on falling love with her ", did a side hug to vandu n wink too .



Vandu hit bala n say ... " What you means han ... im bad I torture you han ".


Bala ... " See how you hit me ... who will bear it only me your old love ... sorry vandu ", he hold his ears.



All laugh on both ... raman was only staring ishita ... same as ishita was staring him n did a what sign to him ... he did nothing sign to her.


Ishita ... " Raman you are not getting late for office ? ".



Raman know why she ask him n know ... what plan he did to know her truth n reply ... " Im waiting for a call then I will leave ... why do you have any problem or you have any plan for today hmm ".



Ishita feel raman was not as always n reply ... " I will go out to meet a patient " , try to not look in his eyes.



Raman know she is lying n say ... " No I dont forebade you to go alone ... I dont want to have any more problems with you ... who knows what you may got this time ".



All looks at n he laugh n did a side hug to ishita on saying ... " Arey im kidding yaar ... I will go with you ... to protect you ... after all you are my only wife ... who can do any thing for me ... hai na ishita ".



Same time prateek enter in ... raman dont waste time ... he said ... " Arey it good you came prateek ... see I was thinking who will go along with ishita n you came ... what a timing I must say thx to come ... can you please acompany her ? till her patient ... I trust you so please ".



Ishita act as she dont want n say ..." But he must have work to do ... I can go alone raman ".



Prateek ... " Im free ishitaji I can go with you ... infact I wanted to take you to one of my friend ... may be he can be help ... raman can I take her to my friend ? if you permit ".



Raman ... " Bring her where you want if its connected to her health ... I trust you prateek ... ok im leaving ... take care of my wife prateek ok ... bye every one ", he stare ishita n leave.


Vandu too leave for college... prateek n ishita too leave ... as prateek car pass the gate ... raman followed them.


Other side on way for college ... vandu saw suraj with dinesh the jeweller ... he was shaking his hand to him ... then both was talking ... vandu feeling something fishing ... she leave the car n went close to them to hear their convo .


Suraj give dinesh money on saying ... " Thank you so much to make real diamond necklace for vanditaji ...she was very happy n was looking very beautiful too ... you did not let her know it not america diamond thx again ".



Dinesh ..." Welcome sir I did what you told me ... I did not let her know truth ".


Vandu was stunned shocked n was furious too with suraj act ... she recall about others talk n raman as a student lover ... she was angry n did to confront him.



Other way raman was following prateek until they pass a gate ... he stop get down n walk toward the gate ... he saw ishita knock at door it open ... she enter in ... prateek check around before he enter in the house n door close.



Raman was wondering who is inside why ishita came there ... he walk inside n notice abhichek jeeb ... he was surprise on seeing it n think abhicheck too is here ... he try to search a place to hear n see what is happening inside n who else is inside in a very caustion way.



He finally saw a window which was little open ... we could hear n saw every thing ... he seek very carefully n see prateek , abhichek , ishita n one who was giving him back but from hair ... he got to know it a woman ... who is the chef.



He heard their convo like ishita said ... " Im feeling so bad n pain on hidding such a big truth from raman ".


Abhicheck was console her on saying ... " We know how hurt n pain you got but think it for himself n for family sake ... we are doing all this ... dont lose hope we are close in our goal ".



Prateek ... " How difficult it is to act as a possede of ghost but you are still doing it well enough ... be strong we know simmi is involve but why ... that we need to know it ".



Ishita in tears say ... " I still dont believe simmi ... simmi will help ashok to kill raman why ? ... raman who love her so much ... you know raman can give his life for his family n his own sis want to kill him ... for what money revenge im so confused ... if it was not related on my kids n raman ... I would never do all this ... even after seeing simmi hurt hand ... I didnt wanted to believe it but after the pic with ashok ... I was shocked n shattered too " .



Ramsn was feeling proud on his wife n shocked to know simmi is walking with ashok ... he feel sad shattered n cont to listening them.



Prateek ... " We should not forget others ... it true all are clear but we should cont on eyeing them too ... some times it happen the person we doubt it shown to be clear n other one is culpit " .



Shagun talk ..." I agree with prateek too ... we should not ignores others ... like sarika romi n even neelu ... we should keep an eyes ... what is the reason behind simmi to walk with simmi ... we need to find out too ... before ashok find out im alive ", she stand n walk to ishita n did a side hug to comfort her.



Raman was more in shocked on seeing shagun alive ... he was happy in one side n other side he was thinking his baby is still alive in her tummy ...he recall subu mother ... on saying she saw her ... for his n kids sake she act to die to save them ... he could not believe his eyes n ears ... his both wives are so concern for him ... they are playing such a big game against ashok n why simmi ... he was in anger to think simmi act then stop to hear more.



Both men ... " Dont you both think if raman would know it ? it would be more easy ... he would be alert n take extra precaution for him n family too "



Both wives ... " Raman would not think about precaution but go directly to ashok n confront him ... n our aim is who is helping ashok bad beeds ... he would not believe us that one from his family member is with ashok ... like us being outsider we was shocked ... what would be his reaction on his ... same as we all ".




Raman was surprise as his wives know him more than himself ...now he too will find out the truth in his style n thx to god to save shagun n to send ishita in his life as wife ... he leave with a last look at them n with relief .



He call someone n say to meet him ... after fifteen min the man come n it not other one than mihir ... he narrate all things to him ... which give him shocked n happy as his sis is alive ... n told him he is with him to find out the truth ... he call some one n he came soon ... they show him pic n asl to have all infos .



While was talking on simmi ... n think why she will do sich a thing with him n family ... he was broken n shattered too ... what is making her do all this n revenge why for whom ... he got the clue n .



Raman ..." Param ! mihir it param ... im darm sure ... she think it all due to me if she is away from param ... yes she always wanted to revenge with ishita ... but she will try to kill me ... I never thought of it... my own sister want to kill me only for her bas***d husband ... n ashok is using het for this ... what i did not did for them yaar ... that i got in reward my dead ... cheating betray from my own sister ", he was in sad voice broken shattered n tears .



Mihir comfort him with his hug n console him ... he got pic whicj shown param n simmi n send the address too ... both leave there ... as they reach the building simmi was coming out .



Both bro take her in corner n start to ask whom she came to meet ... she ans it not there problem n stop spy her ... she is not a kid she can do what she want ... raman was about to slap her mihir hold him .



Raman in anger n frustration ... " You think im a fool ... to not know whom you came to meet han ... you came to meet that dog param right ? ... if want to stay with him then why all that drama han to dirvoce him han ... if you think he has change then go I wont stop sister like you ... who want to destroy me on killing me ... it better to not have a sis than to have like you ", in tears n sad voice.



Simmi could not bear any more n lash out every thing in tears ... " I know im bad bhai ... but if im doing it ... it for us or you mihir ... we all know rinky has been murder but who is behind it ... we dont know ... if im with param n ashok its only to know who is the person who killed rinky ... n most it from our family ... han bhai the day mihika was in jail n heard param ... talking to ashok ",


FLASHBACK


IN resto param was talking to ashok ..." Ashok now your ex wife is in jail ... first mihir now mihika n you are sitting without tension ... how strange they are accusing other person when the muderer is there among them ... poor bhallas family ", with laugh.



Simmi who heard all this and was shocked ... on thinking who it could be ... then after two days she went to meet param on acting ... as she want to take revenge from the family n most from raman ... she met ashok n give him infos on every thing n some times she try to find out about the muderer ... to get ashok trust she drop the balls fire on diwali n delibery miss raman .



End of flash back


Now raman mihir got another shocked from all her talks ... raman hug her n say sorry n think who can it be the one who kill rinky n why ... both bro vows to find out n they leave with simmi on act as they dont know anything .



THAT IT GUYS


NEXT PART : VANDU CONFRONT SURAJ


HOPE YOU WILL HIT LILE BUTTON N WILL LEAVE YOUR HUMBLE COMMENTS TOO .


HANSA



--HANISA-- thumbnail
13th Anniversary Thumbnail Sparkler Thumbnail + 4
Posted: 9 years ago
#33
hey guys uodt part 2 above do leave your comment n hit like button
kras thumbnail
10th Anniversary Thumbnail Rocker Thumbnail
Posted: 9 years ago
#34
Amazing update di
Kaash show mein bhi aisa kuch hota
But never mind aapki story mein to ho hi gaya
--HANISA-- thumbnail
13th Anniversary Thumbnail Sparkler Thumbnail + 4
Posted: 9 years ago
#35

Originally posted by: kras

Amazing update di

Kaash show mein bhi aisa kuch hota
But never mind aapki story mein to ho hi gaya



thank you for your comment n compliment hope so too
IshraMiNeholic thumbnail
13th Anniversary Thumbnail Dazzler Thumbnail Networker 2 Thumbnail
Posted: 9 years ago
#36
Woww wat a u turn in story.. 👏
Superb superb..
Hope in show also CVS shws smthng lyk dis..
Its true.. Ur story is much more better den d shw
--HANISA-- thumbnail
13th Anniversary Thumbnail Sparkler Thumbnail + 4
Posted: 9 years ago
#37

Originally posted by: SuryaIshraholic

Woww wat a u turn in story..👏

Superb superb..
Hope in show also CVS shws smthng lyk dis..
Its true.. Ur story is much more better den d shw



thank you for comment n like too for your compliment im glad
Sk-Sharmin thumbnail
10th Anniversary Thumbnail Voyager Thumbnail
Posted: 9 years ago
#38
get well soon dear...
get well soon...

lvly update...
we dnt want ny teaser or update...
jst b ok nd den update d stories... dey r nt more important dan ur health...
ok!
get well soon...😊
Edited by sksharmin - 9 years ago
kaa1202 thumbnail
10th Anniversary Thumbnail Sparkler Thumbnail Networker 1 Thumbnail
Posted: 9 years ago
#39
A Different take Hansa..
I liked Simmi story & Vandu-Suraj story more in this..
Cont soon...
janani_divan thumbnail
10th Anniversary Thumbnail Rocker Thumbnail + 3
Posted: 9 years ago
#40
Hansu amazing update yaar.
Cv's should take classes from you.
this plot is very interesting.
Keep going on re.

Get well soon,dnt bother about updates..take care.

Related Topics

Ye Hai Mohabbatein Thumbnail

Posted by: Im_sherlock

4 months ago

ISHRA OS:- Tumhare bina main adhoora hoon.

It was one of those rare calm nights in Delhi, the kind that carried a soft breeze, the scent of blooming mogra, and a strange kind of silence...

Expand ▼
Ye Hai Mohabbatein Thumbnail

Posted by: ChanChanMan

4 years ago

YHM DT #8 (Strictly Reserved for IshRa/DivAn)

I dare you to post a thing about anyone other than DivAn.

Expand ▼
Ye Hai Mohabbatein Thumbnail

Posted by: Devanshi14

4 months ago

FF: IshRa ISHQ !!

Chapter # 01 Title: “Pehli Baar Ishq Hua” Raman and Ishita had been married for months now—contractually, yes—but slowly, silently, love had...

Expand ▼
Ye Hai Mohabbatein Thumbnail

Posted by: Im_sherlock

5 months ago

IshRa OS: Unspoken Desires.

On the show, we all know how Raman tried to give hints to Ishita about his feelings and desires, by keeping a box of condoms in her drawer. An...

Expand ▼
Ye Hai Mohabbatein Thumbnail

Posted by: Manan_Pani_fan

7 months ago

Karan Patel and Divyanka Tripathi BOTH NOT part of Sony TV show

Exclusive:; Harshad Chopda and Shivangi Joshi likely to play leads The Sony TV show produced by Balaji Telefilms has seen major developments...

Expand ▼
Top

Stay Connected with IndiaForums!

Be the first to know about the latest news, updates, and exclusive content.

Add to Home Screen!

Install this web app on your iPhone for the best experience. It's easy, just tap and then "Add to Home Screen".