CAN'T TEL U WAT U MEAN TO ME !! SORRY NOTE added on Pg145 dtd 06/03/16 - Page 13

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Posted: 9 years ago
PART 5

Mani : Hi !! mohit ... hw r u ?

Mohit : Hi !! mani.. im fyn..

Mani: HW u cald me? As i knw u dnt cal widout any work... so tel me...

Mohit : Mani... im vry confused n puzzled... I want ur advice.. so can u cum up to meet me at a coffee house in Hauz Khaz...

Mani : Sure... Il b dere at 6pm today

Mohit: Ok done...

It ws evening n both met at d coffee house...

Mani: So... wat u wantd to talk bout...tel me..

Mohit: Listn mani.. I found a girl a month ago...

Mani: (he interuuptd) Oh... toh love advice frm me...

Mohit: NO... its nt about love angle wid d gal... Listn to me first... I found a gal lying unconscious in a miserable condition nearby mayor vihar n i tuk her to d hospital... She ws in coma n came in senses aftr 7days... I dnt knw bout her family... She has lost his memory bt nt full... She remembers certain things wich she told me...N doctors said dat she vl recover full memory whn she meets sumone frm her past... N im struck here as i dnt knw her identity so hw can i let her family knw bout it... Its been 3weeks she has cum out of coma bt she ws in hospital for sum more days bt got discharged jst ten days ago... I had gone to police also bt police didn't paid heed to me n i ws also so busy meeting wid d doctors n in my work dat cudnt find much tym to go to police station so often... I had gone once again to police bt one of d hawaldars said to go away n outcasted me frm d station saying dat "abhi ek bade aadmi ka case aaya hua hai toh hamari lagi padi hai aur jab free honge tuje bula lenge" BT time jst passed n dn i thght of u... BT ys..,she remembers her profession n her father mother bt dat also nt dere full name so i cud find dem... She dosnt even remember her own name... She also told dat she loves sumone bt dosnt remember who he is.. She is vry frustrated ryt nw... As she is missing dat person n her parents bt dosnt remember anything... I dnt knw much bout d city also.. I dnt knw many people also here... So i thght u knw many people here n u cud help me... Wud u help me out ??

Mani: Mohit... u did right by saving her lyf... U r gr8... N ys iv l surly help u... As i hv alrdy lost a frnd n dosnt want anyone else to bear dat pain.. I can understand wat her family n frndz wud b feeling.. I vl help her n dat way i will feel better dat i cud save sumone lyf if nt my frnd...

Mohit : Wat hapnd to ur frnd ? N who is she ?

Mani: U dnt knw her... she ws my school frnd or i shud say she ws my best frnd... v were frndz since childhood.. N jst last month sumone killed her... Ryt nw al her family kids n specially her husband is in pain.. Her husband luvd her so much n she ws his lyf n nw he is jst a walking dead body alive for his kids only... Anyways leave it.. I vl help u find her family.. atlst she shud reach her family n her love..

Mohit : so dn... I take u to meet her tomorw... Ryt nw she must b at work... I dnt knw hw bt she remembers her work.. n she is vry gud at it... I hv experienced it myself... so il msg u my address n u cum tomorw in evening...

Mani: ok done...

Mohit n lady at mohit's house...

Lady: Mohit i hv cooked ur food n im going to my apartment n thank u for arranging a new apartment for me... Im sorry bt i cudnt live wid u as i dnt feel it right.. Hope u understand n again thank u for saving my lyf... bt i dnt knw whn i vl recover n remember everyone frm my lyf..

Mohit: Dnt wry u vl find dem soon... n dnt thank me... tel me u wud hv left sumone u found unconscious on road.. i hv done it out of humanity so need of thank u.. N i hv askd my frnd Mani who had lived here since childhood bt had shifted to turkey n ws luckily in delhi nw... He wud help in finding ur family n ofcourse ur love...

Lady: mani... turkey... I dnt knw y bt dey seem familiar to me... Anyways leave it.. i dnt remebr my name dn hw can i remember sumone else name..

Mohit: K... dnt stress much lost gal... (named by him as she has lost her memory) U go take rest.. bye good night...

Its morning... She cums to his house aftr getting ready for work to cook brkfast for him n herself... Today she cooked idly sambar...

Lady: cum mohit.. brkfast is ready...

Mohit: he cums n asks wat al cuisines u knw to cook... Yday in dinner u cooked dal makhni n nw idly in brkfast... Yday i thght u r Punjabi n nw u seem madrasi...

Lady: I dnt knw bt i jst dnt think n cook wat evr i feel... N yes for lunch i hv cooked pasta... hope u like it...

Mohit: Ok.. gr8.. atlst bcoz of u im getting sum good food to eat.. else i had always had restaurant cooked food n dn i fall sick n i hv survive on khichdi n i knw only to cook dat as i often get sick... Thank u for d amazing meals..

Lady: Its k...

Mohit: Bt i dnt til whn i vl get al dese as one day u vl hv to go to ur family n love..

Lady: Ya,.. bt v can stil meet up n il still cook food for u...

Mohit: K... listn in evening mani is cumin so cook sum south Indian food... he is a tamilian..

Lady: k... done.. Nw il leave for d class... students must b waiting... N mohit i hv a meeting today at a restaurant wid a student's mother... she ws forcing me to meet... So, il b a bit late today bt u vl get d food ready for ur frnd mani...

Mohit: K... il also leave for work...

D lady in her class wid his students.. She ws teaching science to class 11th 12th students n biology to university students.. In a matter of 10days, she had impressed al d students...

On d other hand, in bhalla house, kids were still remembering dere ishima n so seeing dem lyk dat, raman decided dat he vl spend sum tym wid dem today n cum frm office early... Romi ws worried for his brother n so he thght of accompning him wid adi n ruhi... Raman agreed... Nw Romi raman adi ruhi were going out to a park n dn to a restaurant... Bt nw raman went to office n romi went to his shop... Both romi n raman finished al dere work n reached home to pick up adi n ruhi n dey were also ready n dressed by none other dn dere dadi... Al 4 left for park... Romi tuk adi n ruhi n raman ws lost in his world aftr playing for sum tym wid dem.. He ws thinking bout ishita n ws remembering her love confession dere fights...


To be contd...

Thats it for PART 5... nxt update soon... Leave ur precious feedback...😊

I hope its okay nw... Its indeed a long one ds tym...😛

Edited by swatica.arora - 9 years ago
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Posted: 9 years ago
Yay me first
Swati you gave me a heartattack girl,
What is this Ishu lost her memory partially?
She remembers people not not their names? So sad yaar
Why did u do this yaar 😭 , you broke my heart 💔
So mani is going to find out about Ishu and inform Raman. Please let this girl be Ishu 😭. When Raman cones to know that his Ishu is alive, he's going to be the happiest person on earth.
Again you stopped at the climax. Why oh why oh why, how long should i wait?;(
I liked it, it was good
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Posted: 9 years ago

Originally posted by: Mdwst

Yay me first
Swati you gave me a heartattack girl,
What is this Ishu lost her memory partially?
She remembers people not not their names? So sad yaar
Why did u do this yaar 😭 , you broke my heart 💔
So mani is going to find out about Ishu and inform Raman. Please let this girl be Ishu 😭. When Raman cones to know that his Ishu is alive, he's going to be the happiest person on earth.
Again you stopped at the climax. Why oh why oh why, how long should i wait?;(
I liked it, it was good


Di... if ul get evythng at once dn it can b an OS n nt an SS... PATIENCE !!
an advice di.. go to a cardiologist...😆
di u r mistaken.. dat lad lost her memory partially nt ishu... ishu is dead...😉
Plz dont cry... A BOOM SURPRISE AHEAD... dat surprise vl fix ur heart...😛
mani lost his frnd ishu so he vl help dat lady to find her family...
If i dnt stop at d climax dn hw vl curiosity increase... Ds curiosity vl make u wait for d nxt update...
Sory di bt ds wait wud b a bit long... nt on 25nov bt may b 26nov in india...😉

N thnx di... im glad atlst u liked it aftr al ur opinion matters most to me...😊
THANK YOU DI... Luv u...😛
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Posted: 9 years ago

Originally posted by: swatica.arora


Di... if ul get evythng at once dn it can b an OS n nt an SS... PATIENCE !!
an advice di.. go to a cardiologist...😆
di u r mistaken.. dat lad lost her memory partially nt ishu... ishu is dead...😉
Plz dont cry... A BOOM SURPRISE AHEAD... dat surprise vl fix ur heart...😛
mani lost his frnd ishu so he vl help dat lady to find her family...
If i dnt stop at d climax dn hw vl curiosity increase... Ds curiosity vl make u wait for d nxt update...
Sory di bt ds wait wud b a bit long... nt on 25nov bt may b 26nov in india...😉

N thnx di... im glad atlst u liked it aftr al ur opinion matters most to me...😊
THANK YOU DI... Luv u...😛


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Ok ok I will see a cardiologist😉😆. I don't know why I'm impatient nowadays... I need some serious retail therapy. Ok I will wait for your surprise, meri pyaari behen...luv u too. Sorry for the confusion on the dates lol. Now u r using "boom" lol .
Edited by Mdwst - 9 years ago
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Posted: 9 years ago
So much twist and turns dear, but seems interesting.
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Posted: 9 years ago

Originally posted by: Mdwst


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Ok ok I will see a cardiologist😉😆. I don't know why I'm impatient nowadays... I need some serious retail therapy. Ok I will wait for your surprise, meri pyaari behen...luv u too. Sorry for the confusion on the dates lol. Now u r using "boom" lol .


U being impatient is d side-effects of YHM nw-a-days... its nt d same so u r more intrested n impatient for d SS on ishra... In YHM, crappy scens r more... SO, people on forum r more interested n dependent on SS on d forum..
Try out d retail therapy...😆
y sorry for confusn on dates ?
BOOM has nw become talk of town jst lyk HOPENEVERDIES...😆

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Originally posted by: sririt

So much twist and turns dear, but seems interesting.


if no twists n turns dn wats in a story...😉
N compared to CV's twists n turns atlst dey r logical n do justice...
Basically al d stories on forum r far better dn d CVs twists n turns wich becum too ugly jst lyk latest SURROGACY thru Ex-wife... Wat else can b more crappy n ugly dn ds...😡
nyc to knw dat it seems intersting to u...😊
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Posted: 9 years ago
Ishita partial memory loss...why???
Hope she remembers everything when she meets raman.
Again stopped at the wrong time...
Loving the story...continue soon
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Posted: 9 years ago
Wow swati what a surprise
One more update that too so fast
Hats off to u sweety
Finally kaash ye ishu ho
But ishu professor kab se ban gayi
And poor raman I feel really bad for him
U again finish it on wrong time
U know I want ishu and raman together soon
Till then u r a devil
Jise hamein tadpa kar maja aata h😭
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Posted: 9 years ago
nice one swati.. i was feeling like reading something good since this afternoon.. I thought of reading this story once u update the last chapter.. but couldn't stop today 😛
raman and kids 😭
I hope ruhi sees her ishima first.. waiting to read what u have in store
if she remembers her profession why is she teaching?? now don't say she is not ishita 😉
or u added some unexpected twist like the CVs that before being a dentist she was a teacher 😆
viewers never knew 😛
update soon! good job on ur first story.. cheers!

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