CAN'T TEL U WAT U MEAN TO ME !! SORRY NOTE added on Pg145 dtd 06/03/16

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Hey guys... This is my first ever write up... I hv nt written anythng on anyone n im starting it wid my only favrt f magical couple ISHRA...
As its my first, it may nt b upto ur expectations... Al ur views r aprreciated... Jst gv true feedback whethr positive or negatv...

Im nt sure bout d title... BT still giving one...

CAN'T TEL U WAT U MEAN TO ME !!


Introduction:

All d characters r same... This is after d CS incident n bhallas n iyers had left for d ganesh pooja at pammi aunty's house..

Raman reached home..









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Index :
Prologue : Page 1
Part 1 : Page 1
Part 2 : Page 5
Part 3 : Page 8
Part 4 : Page 13
Part 5 : Page 17
Sorry Note : Page 22
Part 6 : Page 23
Part 7 : Page 27
Part 8 : Page 30
Part 9 : Page 34
Part 10 : Page 38
Part 11 : Page 42
Part 12 : Page 47
Part 13 : Page 51
Sorry Note : Page 56
Part 14 : Page 59
Part 15 : Page 64
Part 16 : Page 69
Part 17 : Page 72
Part 18 : Page 80
Part 19 : Page 87
Part 20 : Page 92
Part 21 : Page 97
Thank you Note : Page 103
Part 22 : Page 104
Part 23 : Page 110
Part 24 : Page 116
Part 25 : Page 121
Part 26 : Page 127
Part 27 : Page 132
Part 28 : Page 139
SORRY NOTE : Page 145
Edited by swatica - 9 years ago
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Prologue :

Pammi : Raman.. Raman...Whr is ishita ? Whn vl she cum ? She vl only do d pooja

R : She is cumin... (he thght if she is nt here dn whr is she?) Lets do d pooja...

Al did pooja n raman ws constanly praying to ganeshji to send her ishita safe n sound to him...

Pooja ended...

Toshiji : Raman.. Nw pooja ended n stil ishita is nt here... Wat hapnd ? Whr is she ?

R: She is cumin...

Raman s phn rang n he widout wasting tym pickd d cal n said "whr r u ishita? "

Abhishek : Its me abhishek nt ishita...

R : K... i thgt ishita... U say... u got to knw whr is she ?

Abhishk : Her car is found nearby her clinic.. around 3kms away frm dere... Im sending u d address... u reach dere...

Edited by swatica.arora - 9 years ago
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PART 1

This is after d CS incident n bhallas n iyers had left for d ganesh pooja at pammi aunty's hhouse..

Raman reached home..

R : he asked neelu whr is everyone ?

N : everyone at pammi aunty house for ganesh pooja n bhabhi at clinic..

R : Im going to rest... (he ws exhausted n tired aftr al wat hapnd in CS)

Raman had slept in his house n didn't knew whn tym passed n nw it ws 7.30pm whn he woke up.. DN he saw his phn n dere were 9missed cals of ishita.. He thght to himself da nw he is dead... lecture frm ishita...He dn called her bt her phn ws nt reachable n dn thght she may b at paami aunty house aftr her clnic...He heard noise of kids n went downstairs...

R : adi ruhi y fighting wat hapnd. ??

Adi : nthin papa she is jst arguing on hw much sugar to add to d modak ?

Ruhi : papa i knw im right n adi bhaiya nt agreeing to me..

R : Listen il help u both...

Dn he helpd n modak were ready n kids went wid appa n shravu to pammi aunty house. Dn d door bell rang n he went to door n saw a piece of green cloth wich he recollected dat he had gifted to ishita.. He remembered its her favrt color n d sari he bought for her in Mumbai..

R: Neelu ! did ishita wore ds sari today ?

N : No she didn't wore bt she askd me to send ds sari to her clinic as she wantd to wear it today for d ganesh pooja...

Raman ws shocked on knowing dat...

R: Im going to her clinic n dnt tel anything to anyone n tel me if anything u get to knw...

N: k bhaiya

He went to her clinic... (W: watchman)

R: Watchman... whr is ishita ?

W: She left d clinic...

R: Whn ?

W: 1hour ago

R: What ws she wearing ?

W: Green color sari

R: ws d sari lyk ds? (he showed d sari to him)

W: Yes

Hearing ds he ran n ws thinking... Meri ishita ko kuch nhi ho sakta...

He ws on streets finding ishita al over d city n ws side by side calling her bt her phn ws nt reachable...

He dn cald romi n toshiji bt dey didn't pickd d cal... He dn cald Abhishek n told him bout ishita n askd him to find her... He thght of going to pammi aunty's house n check her dere... He reachd dere...

Pammi : Raman.. Raman...Whr is ishita ? Whn vl she cum ? She vl only do d pooja

R : She is cumin... (he thght if she is nt here dn whr is she?) Lets do d pooja...

Al did pooja n raman ws constanly praying to ganeshji to send her ishita safe n sound to him...

Pooja ended...

Toshiji : Raman.. Nw pooja ended n stil ishita is nt here... Wat hapnd ? Whr is she ?

R: She is cumin...

Raman s phn rang n he widout wasting tym pickd d cal n said "whr r u ishita? "

Abhishek : Its me abhishek nt ishita...

R : K... i thgt ishita... U say... u got to knw whr is she ?

Abhishk : Her car is found nearby her clinic.. around 3kms away frm dere... Im sending u d address... u reach dere...

R : wat hapnd abhishk ? Is she fyn ? Y r u in panic n tensd ?

Abhishek : U cum here raman...

He rushed to d place widout telling anyone... He reachd d place whr her car ws found...

R : Whr is ishita abhishk ? her car is here bt she is no whr ?

Abhishek : whn I reachd here d car ws empty n no one in car... car seems to b met wid an accident... I hv askd my staff to chk d hospitals nearby...

R: wat r u saying abhishk? She is fyn n il go n chk d hospitals myself...

On d other hand, abhishk knew he is nt in condition to inform anyone, so he informed bout ishtia missing to romi mihika n dey informed evyone else...

Raman went to al d nearby hospitals... Bt cudnt find her.. He ws bout to go d last hospital left bt he got a cal frm abhishk stating dat her phn is found n sum othr belongings... Cum n chk.. He forgot to chk in d last hospital n went to police station..

Abhishk : Raman... dese r d belonging... her phn... her handbag...

R: al dese of ishita only... whr did u got dese frm n u found her??

Abhishk: V found dese 1km ahead frm d car... Bt...

R: wat bt ?

Abhishek: Raman... Raman...

R: Wat tel me ?

To be contd...

This is it for PART 1... nxt part will b updated soon...

Thank u... Do gv ur feedback... appreciations n criticisms r welcomed...

Edited by swatica.arora - 9 years ago
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Me 1st...
Congratulations for your very 1st story...😊
Nice prologue dear...
Looks very interesting...
Ishita ko kuch hone mat dena..
Update soon...thanks for the pm...😊
Edited by traveller_girl - 9 years ago
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Originally posted by: traveller_girl

Me 1st...

Congratulations for your very 1st story...😊
Nice prologue dear...
Looks very interesting...
Ishita ko kuch hone mat dena..
Update soon...thanks for the pm...😊

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Il surly update it soon... 😊
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Posted: 9 years ago
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Swati congratulations on your first write up
It's interesting, please continue
What happened to Ishu ?
Update soonish yaar
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Originally posted by: Mdwst

Swati congratulations on your first write up
It's interesting, please continue
What happened to Ishu ?
Update soonish yaar


Thank u di... N il update part 1 by tomorw...
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Hey congratulations for your first story. Interesting prologue continue soon n pm me whenever you update😊
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Congratulation For first Story
Pls PM me

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