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Posted: 9 years ago

Originally posted by: maduragymhasium

sorry for very late reply dear

lovely lovely update dear

this update was just outstanding dear

hats off to you dear👏

no words to explain dear

arrangement was lovely dear and family on his side and update him what is happening was lovely and cute dear

raman letter for ishita and every word was just outstanding dear

the way you used color for define his love and define her personality was excellent lovely dear👏

ishra was lovely and cute pair dear 👏

way of writing was lovely dear👏

way of expressing their love was lovely dear👏

after reading your update and i just want to stop my writing now on wards dear and want to learn how to write stories dear

amazing writer please write more if you didn't write more i will torture our forum friends by my stupid writing dear

please keep it mind dear and write more dear

continue soon dear



You are just too kind☺️...thank you so much for liking the update...very glad...

Thank you so much for your lovely comment...made my day😳

And please you are also an awesome writer...do continue your ss please...

I am nothing as compared to you or the other writers on the forum...

Thank you once again🤗 and will try to update soon 😊
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Posted: 9 years ago
So I am back with another update.I thought you all might not like the previous update but I was wrong.😊You guys continue to amaze me with the love your all are showering on this ss...☺️🤗 Thank you all for your likes and comments...😊

Recap:Ishita is very happy because of the notes Raman had sent and went to the house only to find that they all had to go somewhere.She dresses up in a sari and goes with simmi only to be left alone at the entrance and then the door opens.

Part 5

The door opened and the hall lit up.What ishita saw left her awestruck.Romi had decorated the hall along with mihika and vandu with loads of pictures of ishita's childhood,her college days,her pre marriage days,the wedding pics,many photos of her and ruhi,with raman,with both the families.Her eyes moistened seeing all this photos.But 2 photos caught her the eye.One was a photo of Ruhi sleeping cutely and peacefully on her shoulder and another one was a candid photo of Raman tightly hugging Ruhi and Adi completely unaware of the photo being clicked.She caressed the photo as a smile creeped up on her face.
A stage was built in a corner of the hall and a projector was placed on it which was showing a slideshow of the photos.
But none of the family members or Raman were to be seen.
When suddenly she heard a voice and immediately recognized it to be of Raman's.

R-Dr.Ishita Iyer,Madrasan,my jhansi ki rani ya phir Dr./Mrs.Ishita Raman Kumar Bhalla...kaunse naam se tumhein boolaun...I think last wala sabse best hai.Ishita,aaj mein tumhe kuch kehna chahta hoon lekin usse se pehle...
( Dr.Ishita Iyer,Madrasan,my jhansi ki rani or Dr./Mrs.Ishita Raman Kumar Bhalla...what name should I call you by...I think the last one is best. Ishita,I want to tell you something but before that...)

And the words trailed off as she scanned her eyes to see where he was.
As she was looking around,she felt tug on her sari and turned around to see adi and ruhi holding a huge card with WE LOVE YOU ISHIMA written on it with many photos of them together on it.She took the card and read it with utmost love. As she read the card tears of happiness fell.

Ru-Ishima aap humein kabhi chodke nahi jaoge na?
( Ishima you will never leave us and go na?

A-Haan ishima nahi toh hum kabhi jee nahi payenge
(Yes ishima otherwise we will never be able to live)

I-Shh...aisa kabhi mat bolna(hugging them tightly)...warna ishima aapse bahot naraaz hogi...ishima aap dono ko kabhi chod kar nahi...promise
(Shh.. never say like thi...otherwise ishima will be very upset with you...ishima will never leave you both...promise)

A & Ru -You are the best mumma...ishima

Ishita couldn't control the tears which continued to flow...

The family including Raman witnessed this and felt emotional seeing the bond ishita shared with the kids.

As soon as she let her hold loose on them,the quickly ran away according to Raman's plans as he didn't want them to witness anything untoward or which could upset them.
She was surprised as they suddenly ran off,as she turned around she saw all the family members smiling at her.
Before she could say anything they said...

T-Ishita,tu meri bahu nahi meri beti jaisi hai,tumhari vajah se iss ghar mein voh khushi aur jaan vapis aa gayi jo pehle kahin khoon gayi thi. Main maanti hoon pehle meine tumhare saath thik se bartav nahi kiya lekin mein galat thi.Please raman ko maaf kar do.
(Ishita,you are not my daughter in law but my daughter,because of you the happiness and the life of this house came back which was once lost.I agree that I didn't behave with you well before and I was wrong.Please forgive Raman.

Before she could say anything Mr.Bhalla spoke
Mr.B-Tum hamesha meri beti hi thi jabse mein tumhe jaata hoon aur meine hamesha socha hai ki tumhari shaadi raman ke saath karke kitna sahi kiya kyunki ek tumhi ho jo usse sambhal sakti thi.
(I have always considered you my daughter ever since I know you and I always think that by marrying raman with you how right I was as you are the only one that could manage him)

Simmi spoke next.
Si-Ishita meine tumhe hamesha galat mana aur tumhare saath bahot buri tarah se bartav bhi kiya tha param ki wajah se...lekin uske baad bhi tumne mujhe support kiya aur mera saath diya aur hausla bhi badaya ..thank you very much...
(Ishita,I have always considered you wrong and behaved very badly with you because of param but after that also you supported me and encouraged me as well,thank you very much)

Ishita was feeling very happy and emotional at the same time.Her love for her family increased at that moment.

M & Mi -Haan bhabhi,akka...aapne humesha hume support kiya and koi bhi galat uthana se roka hai
(Yes bhabhi,sis...you always supported us and helped us never to take a wrong step in our life.)

Mihir added.
M-aur mujhe bhai ki daant se bhi bachaya hai
(And saved me from raman bhai's scoldings)

Ishita smiled after he said this.

Ap- ishu,ab raman beta tumse kuch kehna chahta hai lekin usse pehle tumhe voh stage par jana hoga aur vahan jaake apni aankh bad kar dena
(Ishu,now raman wants to talk to you butbefore that you have to go to the stage and close your eyes)

Ishita was wondering what was happening but followed her father's lines and went onto to the stage and closed her eyes.

She opened her eyes when she felt something falling on her and realised they were rose petals.She couldn't believe what was happening but was too happy to comprehend it.
Then she saw Raman for the 1st time in the day after she had gone to the clinic and received the noted. He was looking dapper in his suit and ishita was gaping at him.

Raman came close to her and whispered in her ears.

R-Ghoorna baad mein,pehle ye batao,kyun itni khoobsoorat lagti ho tum ki har baar meri jaan lene pe tuli rehti ho..
(Stare at me later,1st tell me why do you look so beautiful that you are hell bent on killing me)

Ishita felt very shy but on hearing the last line she felt emotional.

I-Aisa kabhi mat kehna.
(Don't ever sat anything like this)

R-Nahi Ishita,aaj mein bolounga aur tum meri baat sunogi.
(No Ishita,today I will speak and you will listen to me)

He forwarded his hand with a hope that she might accept it . Ishita though hesitant to hold his hand in front of all accepted it soon.

Raman took a deep breath and started speaking.

R-Humare rishte ki shruwat achi nahi thi,Hum ek dusre ki shakal se naphrat karte the.Phir tumne Ruhi ki jaan bachai aur usse ek nayi si zindagi di.Hum phir tumhare hi clinic mein mile...tumne uska dard itni aasani se mita diya...phir woh tumse jyaada milne lagi lekin ussme kuch alag tha...woh hasne lagi thi,muskurane lagi,khilne lagi thi..kuch hi dino mein ek nayi si Ruhi dekhne ko mili jo meine kabhi nahi dekhi thi.Tum dono itne kareeb aaye jitna mein uske kabhi na tha.Humare interactions badhne lage uske kaaran.Voh tumhe mujhse jyada prefer aur pyaar karne lagi thi.Tabhi humare pitaon ne decision liye ki humari shaadi ho jaye.Mere mann mein bhi aane laga ki shayad uske liye tumhare jaisi achi maa kabhi bhi nahi mil sakti lekin meine aapne aap ko samjha diya tha ki mujhe iss rishte se kuch nahi chahiye aur ye sirf "Ruhi ke liye" hoga.Humari engagement mein, toh meine tum ko Ruhi ki banayi hui ring pehnayi jo tumne hasi khushi se pehen li,jab ki mujhe laga ki tumhe gussa aayega...
Mujhe unn sab rituals se koi fark nahi padhta tha kyunki tab tum mere liye kuch nahi thi...
Lekin phir humari shaadi hui,tumne mera ghar sambhala, mujhe sambhal, meri family ko mere kareeb laya,Ruhi ko mere kareeb laya,Adi ko waapis laya,rinky ki shaadi tak karva di,mere liye kitna kuch kiya aur abhi bhi kar rahi ho...lekin meine hamesha tumhein dard diya,amma ki accident ke waqt,custody case mein,shagun ke taane,kabhi kabhi mere parivaar ka bura bartav,apne taane se kitni baar insult ki,param ke waqt kuch nahi bola aur kitna kuch lekin tumne sab kuch saha.Tumne Simmi ki zindagi barbad hone se bachai,mere liye tumne Suraj ki pol khulvayi aur meri post waapis dilvayi.Phir dheere - dheere hum dost bane,ek dusre ki respect ki,ek dusre ke liye concerned the...humari nazdeekiyan badne lagi...mujhe tumhare bina khali khali mehsoos hone laga...phir tum curfew mein bhi bahar chali gayi bina kuch soche samjhe...meri toh jaan hi nikal gayi thi...lekin tumne phir apni achai dikhati aur pooja ki madad ki.
(Our relation didn't start on a good note.We used to hate seeing each others face and then you saved ruhi's life and gave her a new one.We then met in your clinic and you erased off her pain so easily...Then you started meeting her frequently but there was something different in her...she had started smiling,laughing and living her life...in a few days I saw a different Ruhi who I had never seen.You 2 became so close,I was not even that much close to her.Our interactions started increasing because of her.She started liking you and preferring you over me,that time our father's decided to marry us.In my mind I also started thinking that Ruhi would never get a good mother like you but I had convinced myself that this relation will not have anything and will always be "Ruhi ke liye".During the engagement you wore the ring that Ruhi made very happily which I thought would upset you.
I wasn't bothered about any of the rituals as that time time you actually didn't matter to me as much as you do know.
Then we married and you took care of my house,took care of me,brought my family closer to me,ruhi closer to me,brought back adi,even helped rinky get married,did so much for me and even do now but I always gave you pain during amma's accident,in the custody case,shagun's taunts,sometimes my family's bad behavior,my insults,didn't say anything during param's time and what not but you always beared it and even saved Simmi before her life would be ruined,you opened up Suraj's secret and got back my post.Then slowly we became friends,started respecting each other and concerned for each other.We started getting close and I started feeling empty without you and then you went out during curfew,you nearly took my life but then you showed your goodness by helping pooja.

He paused and then continued...

R-Na jaane kab aur kaise mujhe tumse pyaar ho gaya...tumhari har ek cheez se,har ek aadat se...lekin phir jatane se katrata,na jaane tum kaise react karoge.
Phir humne voh keh diya jo humein bahot pehle kehna chahiye tha...Lekin pichle kuch mahine mein humare saath bahot kuch hua hai...Rinky ki maut,woh accident aur surrogacy.Mein maanta hoon surrogacy tumhe manzoor nahi thi aur mujhe tumhare bharosa aur dukh pahunchane ka koi maksad nahi tha.Mujhe tumhe sirf khush dekhna tha aur kuch nahi...lekin bachhe ki chaah mein meine shagun ko surrogate mother banane ki bohat badi galti ki hai aur mein jitna sorry bolu utna kam hai...
Tumhe pata hai jab tum curfew mein bahar gayi thi,earthquake mein building ke neeche aa gayi thi,voh bus accident aur abhi Ganpati mein bina kuch bole ghum gayi thi aur jab mujhe voh khoon se sana hua sari ka tukda mila,tumne mujhe jeete jee mar hi dala tha...kitni baar tumhari jaan ko khatre tha aur utni hi baar meine apne aapko kho diya tha...Tumhari vajah se mein voh purana humesha khush rehne vala raman ban gaya...
Iss galti ke liye tumhe jitna mujhe daantana hai,maarna hai maarna lo but please mujhe ye silent treatment mat do...
Pleas mujhe maaf kardo...please...I Love You and cannot live without you.
(I don't know when and how I fell in love with you,your every little thing and your every habit but was scared to show it,not knowing how you will react.Then we said what we should have told each other long ago.But last few months a lot has happened with us...Rinky's death,the accident,the surrogacy.I agree that you were not okay with surrogacy and I had no intention to break your trust or hurt you in any way.I just wanted to see you happy and nothing else but the wish of having a child,I made a huge mistake of making shagun the surrogate mother and how many times ever I tell you sorry,it won't be enough...
Do you know when you went out during the curfew,got stuck under the building during the earthquake ,the bus accident and when you went missing during Ganpati and finding a piece of your sari with blood,I was literally living as a dead person,how many times you were in danger I had lost myself.Because of you I became the old always remaining happy Raman.For my mistake,how much ever you want to scold me scold,how much you want to beat,beat but please don't give me the silent treatment.Please forgive me..please.
I Love You and cannot live without you.)

He pleaded . Ishita was overwhelmed with his speech and didn't know what to do and how to react.She immediately...

Cliffhanger 😉
And here I end this part..like last part i end it at an important point... what and how will Ishita react to his speech will be revealed in the next update...Till then keep guessing...😆

Sorry if you do not like update...

Do leave back a comment on how it was...and if any suggestions do write them as well...

Any criticism is welcome and for pms to all future updates do pm me...
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Edited by traveller_girl - 9 years ago
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Posted: 9 years ago
Amazing update yaar...
Whole family talk was nice..
Raman's talk was pretty emotional..
Waiting for her reply eagerly..
Cont soon girl...
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Posted: 9 years ago
meano!!! stopped at the wrong time only!!!
amazing update!!!
loved it so so much!!!
update soon
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Posted: 9 years ago
Hetvi yar
again wrong timing
I wanted to read more
our teaser queen


But but this update was

out of the world

Each and every line beautifully written
wanted to see this in show

but i think its not in our faith

u rocked 👏
Edited by ruhi_ishra - 9 years ago
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Posted: 9 years ago

Originally posted by: kaa1202

Amazing update yaar...

Whole family talk was nice..
Raman's talk was pretty emotional..
Waiting for her reply eagerly..
Cont soon girl...

Thank you so much...glad you liked it
Will try to update soon 😊
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Posted: 9 years ago

Originally posted by: sush_rddt

meano!!! stopped at the wrong time only!!!

amazing update!!!
loved it so so much!!!
update soon

Hehe...
Thank you so much...glad you liked it ...
Will try to update soon 😊
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Posted: 9 years ago

Originally posted by: ruhi_ishra

Hetvi yar
again wrong timing
I wanted to read more
our teaser queen


But but this update was

out of the world

Each and every line beautifully written
wanted to see this in show

but i think its not in our faith

u rocked 👏

Hehe😆

You are too kind😳...thank youuu so much🤗...so glad you liked it..😊

Surely would love to see in the show but as you said not in our luck ...

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Posted: 9 years ago
amazing update n too emotional yaar
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Posted: 9 years ago
Awesome one
Loved the family talk
Raman is too good
Continue soon

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