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Posted: 9 years ago

Originally posted by: ...Forever...

Part 3

Loved the update
So plan started
Loved the papa bachha moments

Thank you...glad you liked it 😊
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Posted: 9 years ago

Originally posted by: nahtani88

Superb Update

Continue Soon
Thanks 4 The PM

Thank you...will try to update soon...
Your welcome for the pm 😊
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Posted: 9 years ago
Part 4
U r really smart
Wrong timing yaar..
Love messages was so nice
Loved it
Can't wait for next
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Posted: 9 years ago

Originally posted by: ...Forever...

Part 4

U r really smart
Wrong timing yaar..
Love messages was so nice
Loved it
Can't wait for next

HeheπŸ˜›...
Thank you very much😳
Glad you liked it...
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Posted: 9 years ago
Thank youu 😊
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Posted: 9 years ago
Awww such a cute cute update

Full plan to pataofy Biwi. haiyeee she was blushing and puttar in black

Update soon 😳 πŸ˜ƒThank you
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Posted: 9 years ago

Originally posted by: traveller_girl

How can I ever thank you guys😳.. I am overwhelmed by the response considering this is my very 1st story...πŸ€—
I would like to give credits to some of the other awesome writers on the forum who have inspired to write this story...πŸ˜ƒ

Hope you all liked the part I had updated before and now here is the next part.

Recap:Ishra were interrupted by Dr. Manoj who told them that shagun had a miscarriage and he had now sent ishita's reports to his friend in London.Ishita wished him and shagun a happy life.
The family decided to help raman win back ishita's trust.

Part 3

Ishita was in her room.She was folding clothes and muttering to herself.
I-Kya samajte hain apne aap ko...har baar mujhe hurt karte hain aur aise hi mujhse sorry bolkar,hamesha pehle jaise ho jaata hai...lekin iss baar mein itni assani se aapko maaf nahi karungi...main bhi ek insaan hoon,meri bhi koi feelings hain...har baar aise thokar maarna kar chale jaate hain aur baad mein manane vapis aate hain...huh
(What does he think of himself.Everytime he hurts me and then tells sorry and things are back to normal.But this time I will not forgive me so easily.I am also a human...I also have some feelings...everytime just hurts and goes and then tries to pacify me...huh)

Outside just as all of them were about to leave for their room...

A & Ru-Ishimaaa...Papaaa

Sh-Ammaaa...

Sarika had returned with the kids after they had been there at a summer camp.

R-Tum log aa gaye...
(You all came)

Ishita came down the stairs and the kids hugged her tightly...

A-Ishima...bahot mazaa aaya camp mein...humne bahot saari nayi cheezein bhi seekhi...
(Ishima..we had lots of fun at the camp and we learnt lots of new things also)

R-Haan ishimaa...aur dher saari photos bhi khinchi...chalo mein dikhati hoon...
(Yes ishima...and we clicked lots of photos...lets go...I will show you)

Ruhi was about to go when ishita stopped her.

I-Ru...Adi...photos hum kal subah dekhenge...abhi tum dono jaldi se apne kapde change karke ,brush karke,sone jao...bahot der ho gayi hai...sone se pehle mein aapko ek achi story bhi sunaungi...thik hai...
Ru..adi...we will see the photos tomorow...now you both change your clothes fast ,brush your teeth and sleep...it's very late and I will tell you a story before sleeping...)

Ru-Ishima,kal nashte mein idly banana...kitne dino se nahi khaya hai..
(Ishima,tomorrow in breakfast make idly na...its been so many days since I have had it)

I-Ok bachha...kal idly banaungi
(Ok dear,I will make idly tomorrow)

Raman smiled to himself and thought
R-Ye madrasan mere bachhon ko apni tarah banake chodegi...lekin sachhi ye bachhon ko bahot sahi baatein sikhati hai...maine issese shaadi karke bahot sahi kiya...kyunki isske siva aur koi bhi inn ka itni achi tarah se dhyaan nahi rahi raha aur itna pyaar bhi nahi karta...
(This madrasan will make my kids like her and leave...but really she teaches all the right things to them...I made the right choice to marry her because other than her no one would have been able to take care of them so much and love them so much)

Ishita told the kids a story and tucked them into sleep,kissed good night to them and left their room.

Raman was on the phone when she entered their room.

As soon as she entered,she went to the cupboard and took the spare quilt and pillow and kept it on the couch.Raman's call had just finished,he turned around and said...
R-Ishita please bed par so jao...
(Ishita,please sleep on the bed)

She ignored him.He got angry and snatched the quilt from her.

R-Bohot ho gaya tumhara natak...chup chap yahan so jao...
(Enough of your drama,sleep here now)

I - Natak...aur mein...natak toh aapne bana diya hai meri zindagi ka...na aapko meri koi padi hai.. mein yahan sirf mere parivaar aur bachhon ke liye...
Na iss waqt mujhe koi shauq hai aapse jhagda karna...toh aap bhi so jao aur mujhe bhi sone do...
(Drama...and me...you are doing drama of my life,you don't care for me...I am here only for my family and kids...I don't have any interest in fight with you...so you sleep and I will as well)

Saying so she pulled the quilt and slept.Raman was feeling irritated with himself.He thought to himself..

R-Kya zaroorat thi usko aisa bole ki...ab voh aur ruth gai...kuch jaldi sochna padega nahi toh...
(What was the need to scold her...now she is more upset with you...now you have to think fast)

He lay on the bed thinking what to do and decided to message her as he knew she would not listen to him verbally. He picked his phone and typed...

Jkr,
I am sorry yaar...I was not thinking while saying what I said...please say something :(
I know you have not slept and will not be able to also...come back on the bed na...
Awaiting your reply...

Yours & only yours
Raavan kumar

And pressed the Send button...her phone beeped...she turned around and picked the phone and opened the message..read it...calmly kept the phone back without replying to the msg and turned to the other side not seeing him and closed her eyes thinking...
I-Jab jante hain to karte kyun hain aur phir bina soche kuch bhi bolte hain...
(He knows everything then why does he do it and then speaks anything...)

She while thinking slept off while raman was sad that she ignored him again and while thinking how to pacify her dozed off to sleep)

Next morning,all the members of both the families were in the hall while ishita was in the bathroom freshening up..taking advantage of the situation raman rushed downstairs and called for everyone's attention...

R-Suno...sab log...Adi aur Ruhi...mein aap dono baad mein sab samjha dungi lekin abhi aapko mujhe help karna hai...thik hai...
(Listen everyone...adi and ruhi...I will explain everything to you later but right now you have to help me...ok?)

The kids nodded.

Mi-Jiju,jaldi batao aap akka ko kaise manoge
(Jiju,tell fast how are you going to pacify my sister)

T-Aur haan...iss baar koi gharbad nahi honi chahiye...nahi toh teri khair nahi
And yes...there should not be any mistakes this time...otherwise don't think even think about your condition)

R-Aap log mujhe bole doge tab bataunga na...[all silenced down]...thank you...toh suno
(Will you all let me speak...then only i can tell...thank you...now listen)

Raman explained his plan and everyone listened to it very carefully...

R-Toh aap sab ka issme bahot bada haath hoga...toh please apna part achhe se ki kijyega...
(So you all have a big part in this so do it well...)

Mr.B-Tu chinta mat kar puttar...sab thik ho jayega...hala ki hame tumhe help nahi karni chahiye par phir bhi karenge...kyunki hum sab ishita ki khushi chahte hain)
(Don't worry son, everything will be alright...although we shouldn't help you bit we will because we want to see ishita happy)

Raman was slightly sad hearing this but thought about how this one woman had messed up his life in such a good way that even his parents after knowing what he did was not correct,sided with him only for her happiness.

R-Toh mein aapko details aur progress deta rahunga aur koi bhi problem ho toh bata dena lekin plan fail nahi honi chahiye...
(I will keep telling you the details and progress and if you all face any problem do tell but this plan should not fail)

After saying all this the group dispersed,he told Mihir that he will come to the office a little late after arranging all this and told Bala and Romi that he will call them after some time after talking to the kids...The 3 of them assured him not to worry and told him to go to the kids now...

R-Adi,Ruhi...yahan aao
(Adi,ruhi come here)

A & R-Haan papa...batao kya bolna hai apko
(Yes dad,what were you going to tell us)

R-Dekho...meri baat ko dhyaan so suno...mera aur ishima ka ek chota as jhagda hua hai...toh abhi na ishima mujhe se naraaz hai aur baat nahi kar rahi hai...toh mujhe unhe manana hai...toh aap mujhe help karoge na...
(See...listen to me carefully...Me and ishima had a small fight a d now she is upset with me and not talking to me...so i have to pacify her...you will help me na)

Ru- cutely with her hand on hands on her hips and getting angry with him asked him...
This is not good papa,aap hamesha use jhagadte ho...
(You always fight with her)

Raman smiled and thought(Mini madrasan...poori apni ishima pe gayi hai)
[Mini madrasan...just like her ishima)

A-Ishima kitni sweet hai aur aap phir bhi jhagadte ho...very bad
(Ishima is so sweet still you fight with her,very bad)

R-Haan..haan thik hai papa is very bad bas,tum dono ko bas tumhari ishima ko mein jo jagah bolu vahan lana hai aur phir jab bolu tab aakar ek card dena hai...bas..
Karoge na?
(Yes...yes...dad is very bad...but you both have to do just bring your ishima to the place I tell and when I tell that time give her a card...that's it...you will do right )

A & Ru:Of course papa,we will do it for ishima...but we are still angry with you... aapko humein kuch dena hoga...like ice cream or something. ..
(Of course dad,we will do it for ishima,but we are still angry with you and you have to give us something like ice cream)

While this was happening,ishita had just come down the stairs and went to the kitchen trying to ignore raman...

R-Oh tum logon ko kuch chahiye...huh...
(Oh so you want something...huh)

Saying so he suddenly pulled both of then towards him and started tickling them...They both started laughing loudly and asked him to stop...

Ishita couldn't help but give a faint smile seeing the trio giggling and the smile didn't go unnoticed by him and he said to himself

R-Ab dekhta hoon ishita kaise maan nahi jaati...ab tumhe Raman Kumar Bhalla ke plan se koi nahi bacha sakta...

Saying so he went up to his room and started getting ready to put his plan in action...

That's it for now guys...kind of a short and also a filler update but important for the progress of the story...don't know if you all will like it😭...thank you once again for liking my ss...
Sorry for any errors...and if you feel the update is not upto the mark.πŸ˜”

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Do press the like button and keep commenting your thoughts on the story and suggestions if any...
Any criticism is welcome...I will try to update the next part soon to compensate for this...



sorry for very late reply dear

amazing update dear loved it dear

ishu anger was nice

raman messaged her and ask her sorry was really cute dear

adi and roo was cute dear

family helping him was nice dear

eagerly waiting for raman how his plan work dear
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Posted: 9 years ago

Originally posted by: Aru.Divan

Awww such a cute cute update

Full plan to pataofy Biwi. haiyeee she was blushing and puttar in black

Update soon 😳 πŸ˜ƒThank you

Thank youu...glad you liked it
Will try to update soon...😊
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Posted: 9 years ago
sorry for very late reply dear

lovely lovely update dear

this update was just outstanding dear

hats off to you dearπŸ‘πŸ‘πŸ‘πŸ‘πŸ‘πŸ‘πŸ‘πŸ‘πŸ‘πŸ‘πŸ‘πŸ‘πŸ‘πŸ‘

no words to explain dear

arrangement was lovely dear and family on his side and update him what is happening was lovely and cute dear

raman letter for ishita and every word was just outstanding dear

the way you used color for define his love and define her personality was excellent lovely dearπŸ‘πŸ‘πŸ‘πŸ‘πŸ‘πŸ‘πŸ‘πŸ‘πŸ‘πŸ‘πŸ‘

ishra was lovely and cute pair dear πŸ‘πŸ‘πŸ‘πŸ‘πŸ‘πŸ‘πŸ‘

way of writing was lovely dearπŸ‘πŸ‘πŸ‘πŸ‘πŸ‘πŸ‘πŸ‘πŸ‘πŸ‘

way of expressing their love was lovely dearπŸ‘πŸ‘πŸ‘πŸ‘πŸ‘πŸ‘πŸ‘πŸ‘πŸ‘πŸ‘

after reading your update and i just want to stop my writing now on wards dear and want to learn how to write stories dear

amazing writer please write more if you didn't write more i will torture our forum friends by my stupid writing dear

please keep it mind dear and write more dear

continue soon dear


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Posted: 9 years ago

Originally posted by: maduragymhasium



sorry for very late reply dear

amazing update dear loved it dear

ishu anger was nice

raman messaged her and ask her sorry was really cute dear

adi and roo was cute dear

family helping him was nice dear

eagerly waiting for raman how his plan work dear


Thank you...glad you liked it...😊

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