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Posted: 10 years ago
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Originally posted by: .Jayashree.

sure jaan i promise i will read but i cant be on time will try my best to be on time😃


thank you honey..
Tomorrow you have any exam honey?
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Posted: 10 years ago
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Originally posted by: janani_divan


thank you honey..
Tomorrow you have any exam honey?

nope now reading your frozen love 2 part is yet to read will read and comment😉
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Originally posted by: .Jayashree.

nope now reading your frozen love 2 part is yet to read will read and comment😉


oh read read,
if u have time,read tere ishq mai mar jaawan..i think you like this update..
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Hey my lovely buddies...

Not proofread, please over look spellings/grammatical mistakes..

Enjoy reading.

Don't forget to press like button and drop your valuable comment.

Part-1

Raman dialled online store no. to order party stuff to his dude. He knew his dude not familiar to parties, he is new to attend pub.

Raman stared out of the window in his bedroom, his hand poised over a small stack of paperwork he meant to be working on a project for his company. He is not in a mood to go office. His pen hung loosely from his slackened grip. Thoughts of his lost love filled his mind, and he wondered if she was thinking of him too. He missed her.

She joined in london university, to get away from him. He hadn't seen her in two years, but he couldn't get over her. He knew he could be seeing her at that very moment, but he couldn't bring himself to.

Raman sighed on office file and put the file away. He loosened the tie around his neck and tossed it toward his closet, where a pile of ties was waiting to be put away anyway. He untucked his blue shirt, than fell backward onto his bed. His glasses were taken off and laid on his nightstand.

RAMAN POV:

Ishitha, she is perfect to me in all senses, she was a very caring and loving person, she was very down to earth, she love to read, she is excellent at anything she did, she was really not pretty but beautiful. The way she smiled, her smile reached to her eyes and how her cheeks turned pink when she started blushing. She didn't seem like other girls, she owned her place in my heart.

He is alone since the day, She went away from his life..

He knew he had no chance with ishitha anymore, and he knew he would never have chance to win her again. However, he couldn't help but he trying his best to win her back. After all, he hadn't found a girl like her after two years, and it was doubtable that he ever would. Whenever he found someone even remotely similar, it just didn't feel right like it had with ishitha.

After she had gone, he felt miserable and didn't know why. He cried and coughed and sneezed and could barely drag himself out of bed..

Eventually, the worst of it went away. Every once in a while, he had smaller breakdowns happened in these two years, eventually she not take his calls. Pangs of loneliness hit him, especially in his or her birthdays, festivals.

It hurt when he realized that the last thing he and ishita had done together was argue. He could remember every bit of it, what it was about, so it was probably a stupid argument, but still. She had left before he could ever apologised her.

He know, He guess, he really know. The way this was going, he figured out, he was probably going to be alone for a long time. He found it hard to date, especially with his tendency to compare people to ishitha. Many of the girls that worked with him adored him, but he didn't care for any of them. He tried a few times. It ended miserably ninety nine percent of the time.

A tear ran down on his cheek. He honestly didn't know what to do. To think the appearance of her could turn his world upside and down, her memories leave him so torn up. He had cried for a two years, he didn't try to stop himself. He always cried in secret, of course .He is a human.

No one had seen any tears on his face in many years, except simmi and his mother. His mother had come to him to cheer up him, help him to come out from sad point of his lovesickness, when he was completely incapable of stopping the crying.

He was a silent crier. No sobs shattered the silence of the room, nor any pained sounds.

He cried for his longing. He cried for his weakness by letting himself cry. He cried for his mistakes. He cried for his love, he cried for how alone he felt.

He pulled his wallet off of the nightstand and opened it. He kept a picture of her there. She was laughing while she brushed her long, black hair. He was pretty sure she didn't even know he had taken it; she had been talking with simmi and vandhu about their friends and wasn't paying attention to me. He almost removed the photo from his wallet and set it beside him.

Why do we never know what we got until it's gone, How would I carry on this pain without you, he thought

The phone rang. He almost didn't pick it up, but he knew it could be something important. He grabbed his phone and answered without checking the caller ID. He steadied his voice and said, "Hello?"

Caller:"Hey"

Raman:"dude? Why are you up so late?" he asked.

caller: I'm outside of your house ,come fast. I'm waiting for you.

Raman:"why you are outside of my house? Come in he asked.

caller: Raman you forgot about our plan?

Raman: shut! I'm so sorry, I...he search for the words to explain him.

Caller: Raman, listen to me. I directly came from office, I'm not changed my dress. I'm in office stuff.

Raman: Don't worry, I order stuff for you this night.

caller: wah! Raman you always surprised me. Okay, come fast before anyone caught me.

Raman: okay I'm coming by saying this he hung up the call.

He went to his bathroom, he looked in the mirror. He didn't bother about his appearance, instead he just wiped the tears from his face in hopes he could hide his crying. He closed his eyes and took three breaths to reassuring himself. He split some water on his face and thanked face wash which helped to cover his pale face.

After he dressed up, he take his car keys , he made his way slowly down the stairs without disturbing anyone, before he left the house, he take his mobile and send the message to his sister simmi.

Raman: Hey di I'm going outside. In case if I'm get late, please help me to open our front door.

Simmi: I'm not your servant

Raman: Di please

Simmi: okay then promise me, you will enjoy your night and come up with your old smile, she asked her brother hopingly.

As a sister she can't see her brother sadness, she want to see her energetic brother back, she missed his smiling face, she thought.

Raman: di, don't try to blackmail me.

Simmi: okay enjoy your night, don't make sad face. I will help you (she understand her plan never work on him)

Raman: Thanks di, enjoy your phone call... bye

Simmi: sham less man...she smiled on her brother comment.

Outside of the house his dude waiting for him...

Dude:"Hi" he said, getting into the car.

"dude" he replied him, turning the engine on.

It was about ten-o-clock on a Friday night and here I was, stuck with her memories, raman thought to himself.

Raman:"I was thinking on going out and getting a couple drinks tonight" He said, glancing over at him as he backed out of his driveway. Let's "Go to HEAVEN" he said, without hesitation

He smirked at him and nodded.

RAMAN POV:

I figured he was just happy that he'd get some alcohol into me but little did he know that I had connections at HEAVEN. Romi, he would look out for me. I knew it. I always had to act as if I actually liked to spend there but most people had no clue about my secret. We pulled up the pub and i parked at the curb, getting out before opening up the door, I give one packet to him to change his dress.

I stepped onto the pavement and looked around before taking step forward into the pub, I waited for him. I saw ROMI there, my idiotic friend I smiled slightly at him. I had known romi for years now. We had gone to high school together and we are good friends, my parents not discouraged me from being acquainted with him because he ran the pub.

To be honest, I never choose friends, choosing is not friendship for me. He was the one who not disappointed me till now. Romi eyes met mine and returned my smile before his eyes trained themselves on the man I was with and romi smile soon disappeared.

"Let's grab ourselves a couple of drinks, shall we?" I said, taking my dude in to a special room.

He followed me, standing next to me as we got to the front door, he is new to this place, I understand.

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appa! Don't worry, be free .It is our own place

appa: But raman, your amma? If she comes to know, I'm in pub? She will blame me, that I'm spoiling you.

Raman: appa relax! I messaged her, that we are cracking deal with new clients. Even I'm informed simmi di, so don't worry. Enjoy the night

Appa: really, then I'm relaxed now to chill the party with you

Raman: what you like to have appa?

Appa: I'm not expert to choose raman, as your wish.

Raman: Romi, come to special room. I need help.

(raman dialled romi number and asked him to show up in special room)

"Coming right up" romi replied, hung the call.

Romi joined with them.

Romi greeted appa and said, uncle I'm shocked to see you here, I not expect you.

Appa: Even I never thought romi. I just want to spend some quality time with raman.

Listening appa words romi smiled on him, and mixed up some drinks for them.

"Here are your shots" Romi said, them.

Appa looked to see three small shot glasses and took hold of one of them between his fingers. He didn't like alcohol, the taste of it just wasn't for him but he couldn't decline it.

Raman looked at appa as he took the other glass and downed it straight away before speaking.

"We'll be needing much more than this" appa said to romi.

Romi furrowed his eyebrows slightly but said nothing as he took his glass.

Appa: Raman, Romi..Come on cheers.

TRIO enjoying their shots

Raman looked at appa, he was with before reluctantly downing the shot, feeling the alcohol burn its way down his throat...but he couldn't decline b'coz of his appa. His appa never experienced with this place, but he accompanied me to come out from his own daughter memories.

***

Raman:"I think that's enough for tonight, hmm" let's go appa

Appa looked over at duo feeling light on his feet. It was like he was floating. He nodded lightly, holding onto duo arm tightly; if he didn't, then he wouldn't be able to stand on his own.

Appa: No, I will not come with you guys

What? raman, romi said unison with shocked expressions on his faces..

YES...I want to do dance, appa said smirking

Raman: No appa

Appa:Raman, don't call me appa. I'm your dude..I'm not that much old.

Raman: haa...appa you are younger than me. Now you get the answer, let's go to home dude.

Appa: NO,NO you are younger than me, if you are not younger than me, how can I thought to give my daughter hand to you.

Listening appa words raman again remember her, this time he can't take it anymore, he not control his pain, he not hide his weakness anymore .He hugged his appa and cried whole heartedly...

Appa get shocked by raman bust out, he hugged him tightly and sooth his back to calm down him..

Raman the first one to broke the hug, and wiped his tears, he looked at appa and quickly he wipe appa tears...to lighten up his mood.

Raman: No dude...you should not cry, look at your face. It's already getting wrinkles. It's not good for you.

appa: Oh shut raman .what I should do now? madhu will tease me again.

Raman: I have one solution..

appa: what?

Raman: let's dance.

Oh come on lets go...they stepped out from special room.

Trio, joined with others and danced with them until they lost their energy.

In between dance raman asked appa, appa what about our plan.

appa: Ashok and simmi marriage...

Raman: what? appa I'm not getting your voice

appa shouted on top of the voice... ASHOK AND SIMMI MARRIAGE, all members stopped their dance and throw disgusting looks on appa.

To match with appa voice raman also shouted happily, wow Appa great plan. MY APPA IS GREAT...again raman shouted on top of his voice.

This time girls smiled on him.

Appa: Raman call me DUDE, DUDE, DUDE..

Raman bit his tongue, and romi immersed in his own world with girls...

Raman: sorry DUDE

A girl come near to raman and introduce herself to him, she give her card to raman to contact her.

appa snatch the card from him. Girl throw wired look on appa.

Appa: Hey don't get me wrong, He is already married.

raman widened his eyes with shock to listen his life sweetest lie..

Girl: But I thought he is single.

Appa: oh! my poor girl ,he is not single and not ready to mingle..

Girl: But I don't have any problem.

Appa: He have two children..

Raman looking at appa, and pressing appa's hand to stop him, appa remove his hand and stop him by showing his hand .Mean time romi joined with duo...what's up guys by saying this romi shifted his gaze on a girl ..romi understand what is cooking up between trio, he kept silent and listened appa and girl conversation .

Girl: No, problem at all

Appa: He don't have any properties, whole properties belongs to his wife, he is just a guardian to her properties..

Girl: oh, my poor soul .I really pity on you. Better luck next time.

Appa: you too next time choose right person, better don't waste your time

She shifted her gaze on romi. Appa understand what is cooking up in her mind.

Appa: Hey let me introduce my friend. He is romi, owner of this pub.

What romi is appa friend, appa you are doing too much, raman thought to himself.

Girl: Hey hi I'm...before she introduced herself, her words cut by romi.

Romi: sorry beautiful I'M already engaged, and he showed one girl to her who stand near to the drinks counter, she is my girl .He lied to her.

She left them disappointedly. 😆

TO BE CONTINUED...😉
FOR PM'S BUDDY ME😛
Edited by janani_divan - 10 years ago
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Posted: 10 years ago
#75
Hey guys updated part 1
have a look
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Posted: 10 years ago
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Amazing update yaar... Raman and appa urff dude convo with the girl is damm funny is appa telling d truth or itz a lie?? Y did Ishita left Raman??? Suspense reveal karo plzzz... I really felt pity for raman I really can't see him crying bechara he is unable to moveon jaldi Ishita ka PoV bhi do na continue soon
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Posted: 10 years ago
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Amazing update div...
This is my first ever raman ishita story that I m reading ..n I loved it...several flavours of emotions passing through my head..I feel happy ..excited. ..hysterical. .yet endulging scenarios...thnx for pm...keep writing n always pm me...
Coz TUM MUJHE PM DO..MAIN TUMHE LIKES N PYASR DUNGI😆
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Posted: 10 years ago
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Originally posted by: nelokulood

Amazing update div...

This is my first ever raman ishita story that I m reading ..n I loved it...several flavours of emotions passing through my head..I feel happy ..excited. ..hysterical. .yet endulging scenarios...thnx for pm...keep writing n always pm me...
Coz TUM MUJHE PM DO..MAIN TUMHE LIKES N PYASR DUNGI😆


omg zur..my new friend,im overenjoyed by reading your comment.
so sweet gesture of you

thanks for encouragement.

keep reading and show your love like this..
Glad you like it.
thanks for liking every flavour of this story.
sure i will pm you..
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Posted: 10 years ago
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thank you rido
thanks for comment..
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Originally posted by: Sri1091

Amazing update yaar... Raman and appa urff dude convo with the girl is damm funny is appa telling d truth or itz a lie?? Y did Ishita left Raman??? Suspense reveal karo plzzz... I really felt pity for raman I really can't see him crying bechara he is unable to moveon jaldi Ishita ka PoV bhi do na continue soon



wow sri you read it.
glad you like it.

Thanks for liking raman pov..
ishu pov will update but not now sri.
Glad you like dude conversation.
yes raman not moved on.
Hey appa lied to that girl to protect raman..raman said his life sweetest lie..

When im writing this,i'm also felt bad for raman..
Hope you read further story too.

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