adi-ishita FF-aap akeli nahi hai ishima..part 7 on page 11updated - Page 5

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Posted: 9 years ago
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Nice going...
Expecting Plot twist..
Way to go...
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nice updates
shagun is definitely negative here
which me more curious to read it furthur
continue soon !!!
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Posted: 9 years ago
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sorry guys had been really busy today..will update the next part tomorrow..goodnight guys :)
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Posted: 9 years ago
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Waitinggg!
Yaar Maine kaha wait nahi karwati ho tum to karwane lagi 😕
Anyways nice part.kuch reveal Kiya to nahi.drunk Raman is awesome.
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sorry guys..wait karwane ke liye..actually after all the bhoot spoilers thoda mood kharab hogaya tha..upar se bigg boss mein mere favourites h toh wahan busy hogayi thi...biggg sorryyy 😳


PART-5

Shagun is pacing in the room..frantically calling raman but raman's phone is not reachable..she is tensed and then her phone rings..she takes the call and talks to someone...and then gives a wicked grin and goes to sleep...what's on shagun's mind?

Raman is sitting in a bar..he has had lot to drink...he is crying thinking of what he had planned and what actually happened
he says out loud "main ishita ko saari khusiyaan dena chahta tha..ussey ek maa banane ka sukh dena chahta tha..badle mein maine uska dil thod diya..par ussey bhi mujh par vishwas karna chahiye tha..main uss
ke liye hi toh sab kuch kar raha hoon na..Adi bhi mujhe chor kal chala gaya..maa papa bhi mujhe trust nahi karte...raman kumar bhalla tu ek looser h jo apni family ko ek jooth hokar bhi nahi rakh paaya.."
he starts weeping and then when he tries to get up & go,he stumbles and falls down.
the bar tender tries to wake him up, raman is not in his senses, he takes raman's phone and calls the speed dial no. mihir picks the call, the bar tender tells him about raman..
mihir comes there and takes raman home..raman is blabbering
"ishitaa..adi..sab khatam hogaya"
bhallas come out and see raman in this condition..they and mihir take raman to his room and make him sleep.


while in mumbai
ishita and adi go to the address given to them by the professor.he had come to the airport to pick them up and had given them the keys to his bunglow and told them to settle there..he has no kids and he considers ishita as his daughter so he tells her to stay in his bunglow. he lives in a different flat..he tells her one mrs.bringaza is there..she is the caretaker..she will take care of all the issues or things ishita and adi need..he arranged a cab for them to go to the house.adi fell asleep on ishita lap..ishita lovingly was caressing his head and thought what i have put adi through because of me he has left everything and came with me..i will love him and protect him as i have never loved anyone..she wiped her tears and called adi as they had reached the bunglow..
mrs. bringaza opened the door and welcomes ishita and adi..she told them that this is their new home and she will always be there to take care of their comforts .she shows them around the house..its a beautiful bunglow facing the sea..adi is excited..mrs. bringaza prepares tasty dinner for them and then after dinner shows them their room .ishita thanks her & tells her to take rest..
she tells adi
"adi beta..change karlo..aur so jaate hain..bahut tired ho gaye honge na aap"
adi goes to change...ishita and adi lie down..
adi tells her to hug him and pat him so that he can sleep..
ishita does that..adi falls asleep..ishita cannot sleep..she gets up..hears the sound of waves..goes into balcony and thinks about all that had happened and how her beautiful life has shattered in just some time..she remembers all the moments with raman and starts crying...then remembers the promise she made to adi for not crying..she wipes the tears and try to bring a smile on her face and says..
"ab mein kabhi nahi roungi..ab mein sirf apne bachon ki khushi ke liye jeeungi..meri life ab SIRF ADI AUR RUHI ke liye h"..
she goes back to bed , hugs adi and sleeps

morning in delhi

raman is sleeping..he is dreaming abt ishita and adi and suddenly water splashes on him..he wakes up and finds ruhi..ruhi has splashed a glass of water on him..he smiles and says " ruhi beta aap kab aaye..papa ko huggie aur kissie nahi karoge..papa missed u..
ruhi says " nahi papa main aapko huggie nahi karungi..aap gande h..aapki wajah se meri ishimaa aur mere adi bhaiya ghar chor kar gaye hain..aapki wajah se mere ishimaa sad huyi hai..main ab kabhi aapse baat nahi karungi papa..jab tak aap sab theek nahi kar dete aur ishimaa aur bhaiya ko ghar waapis nahi laate..main aapse katti hoon "
raman tries to says something but ruhi stamps her foot and goes out of the room.
Raman is having a bad headache.shagun comes into the room and asks him what hpnd last night and she was worried for him..she gives him tablet for hangover and tells him that she is leaving bhalla house as nobody is liking her presence there..raman stops her and tells her not to go nd stay alone in this condition..he says i will get ready and then we can go on a morning walk as its good for the child.he goes to change and shagun again gives a wicked smile.

Morning in mumbai
ishita wakes up adi with a big smile on her face..she tells him to get ready fast coz they are going fr a walk on the beach..when adi changes and come she gives him milkshake and they go to walk onthe beach..adi and ishita enjoy on the beach and when adi sees smile on ishita's face..he is happy..when they come back..ishita goes to take bath..adi calls toshiji and tells her about their life in mumbai..he then asks about the happenings there..she tells him about raman being drunk and blabbering about you and ishita..he was saying repeatedly that he was doing all this for ishita's happiness..adi says dadi agar papa aisa bol rahe hain this means thata papa ko shagun mumma ne kis baat mein trap kiya..he asks toshiji to implement the second part of their plan..he cuts the call
when isihita comes out he says " ishimaa maine suna h yahan pass mein ek acha south indian restaurant h kyun na whan jaa kar breakfast kare..uske baad aapko clinic join bhi toh karana hai..mrs bringaza bol rahi thi ki main unke grandson ke saath football khel sakta hoon yehin par so aap aaram se clinci jaa sakte hain..."
ishita hugs adi and says" mera itna samajhdaar beta h..aur ek maa ko kya chahiye..I love u adi "
"I love u too ishimaa" adi says and then the both go to have breakfast.

MIssion shagun tang karo


shagun and raman come out and are going for morning walk..shagun sees ruhi goes and hugs her and says" ruhi beta aap kab aaye"
ruhi says" shagun mumma main kal raat aayi..aap aur papa kahan jaa rahe hain.."
shagun is surprised that ruhi is talking sweetly to her..
she says " morning walk par jaa rahi thi"
ruhi says "par mujhe school jaana hai aur dadi mujhe tyaar nahi kar rahi woh kehti hai aap mujhe tyaar karengi"
shagun says "par beta..main toh"
raman says "ruhi papa tyaar kar denge aapko"
ruhi says " nahi mujhe sirf shagun mumma tyaar karengi..mere baal banayengi , mujhe nashta karvayengi, mera bag pack karvangi, jaise ishimaa karti thi"

raman takes shagun aside and says
" ruhi ka dhyan rakhlo waise bhi woh tumse itna umeed kar rahi he toh pls"
raman gets a call and says to shagun
" mujhe office jaana h..apna aur ruhi ka dhyan rakna"
he leaves
shagun has to run around ruhi as she is giving her lot of troubles..she is making shagun do so many things, ruhi is throwing tantrums, shagun is irritated but she cannot say anything coz toshiji is watchinng her

toshiji smiles at shagun's plight and thinks
" badi aayi raman ke zindagi mein waapis aane wali..ab dekh meri choti sherni tujhe itna tang karegi aur mein tujhe itna pareshan karungi ki tere saare gande iraadon ka parda faash hoga..tujhe iss ghar se dhake maar ke toh raman hi nikalage..jo tune mei ishita ko dard diya h uska saun guna mein tujhe doongi..tu bus dekhti jaa chudail"

after ruhi goes to school shagun is tired and goes to her room to take rest..she again gets a call and she says that ok i will come and meet you in half an hour..

who is the Mysterious caller ?

next update soon
spoiler shagun and mystery caller..toshiji and ruhi irritate shagun..toshiji-ruhi and adi have a partner who will find out about shagun ishita and adi explore mumbai and adi gives a surprise for ishita..

Edited by aathiradevanand - 9 years ago
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Posted: 9 years ago
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Amazing 👍🏼 n update ASAP...
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I read all 5 chapters today.
Beautiful
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Posted: 9 years ago
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Ruhi is always handy in such matters.I liked the way she irritated her.
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Posted: 9 years ago
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This is so good. Continue soon!
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guys..I love u all ❤️..jab bhi update karti hu..u all give me so much love..thank u 🤗

Part 6

toshiji is standing outside shagun's room..hears her convo and thinks who is shagun going to meet..goes to her room and calls someone on her phone and says " shagun kisi se milne jaa rahi he..abhi nikalne wali h..uska peecha karo and dekho ki woh kisse milne jaa rahi he..."

shagun gets out of the house, gets into the car and speeds off..a black car follows her car..she reaches a restaurant , sees a man wearing hoodies..goes and hugs him..the man removes the hoodies..it is DR.manoj...they sit down and shagun says "jaise humne plan kiya tha waise hi ho raha he..ishita ne ghar chor diya h lekin adi bhi uske saath chala gaya lekin koi baat nahi he..good news is ishita is out of raman's life ..ab main apna game shuru karungi aur raman ko sab se alag kar dungi..taaki raman ke saare properties mere naam par kar paon...raman already emotionally weak hogaya h..aur aajkal bahut drink bhi karne lag gaya..main uske iss aadat ka fayda utaongi aur ussey papers par sign karvaongi..aur jab sab humare kaam ho jayga..i will leave him hahahaha bechara raman
manoj gives a wicked smile and says " lekin baby...tumhe yeh sab jaldi karna hoga..thode dino baad hum yeh pregnancy kaise fake karenge...raman ko shak ho jayga ki tum pregnant nahi ho..aur phir woh tumhara care isiliye karta h kyunki ussey yeh lagta h ki tum ishita aur uske bache ki surrogate mother ho..agar ussey pata chal gaya ki tum pregnant hi nahi ho toh?"
shagun says " baby uski chinta tum mat karo..main sab mange kar loongi..hum bahut paisa kamayenge aur kahin bahar settle ho jaayenge ..aur tumhe yeh surrogacy scam sab nahi karna padega..I love u..bus ab kuch din aur phir hum saath honge "
she hugs him and kisses him on the chhek and leaves from there... as she goes she bumps into person wearing handkerchief as a mask..says sorry and leaves..the man takes out the handkerchief..It is mihir...he is the fourth partner of the mission shagun ko bahar nikalo group
he thinks "chee shagun tum kitni giri huyi ho..par main bhai ko barabad nahi hone doonga..kabhi nahi "

he goes to toshiji and tells her everything
toshiji says " mujhe pata that ki woh chudail kuch gadbad kar rahi he..kaise sati savitri banane ka natak kar rahi thi..mujhe toh pehle hi shak hogaya tha usspe..kalmuhi..raman ko yeh bola ki woh uski aur ishita ke bache ki maa banne wali h..mere beta ka sukh chain aur mehnat ki kamai hadapna chahti hai..tujhe pata nahi shagun ki ab main tera kya haal karungi..mihir ek kaam kar puttar..sun.." she whispers something into mihir ears ..mihir is shocked..then he smiles and tells toshiji.."bhai aur bhabi ke liye main kuch bhi kar sakta hu..mummyji"
he goes from there.

while in mumbai

ishita comes home in the evening.. adi sees her ..goes and hugs her and asks how her day was..she says "
acha tha beta..acha clinic h..bahut acha staff bhi he"
then she asks adi " aapne kya kiya adi poore din aur aapne lunch kiya "
"haan ishimaa maine lunch kiya..mrs bringza ne chicken banaya tha..phir victor (bringaza grandson) ke saath football khela..aur ishimaa aapko yaad h mrs . surekha jo humari vice principal h delhi school ki maine un se baat kiya aur unhe bataya ki kaise hum mumabi shift hogayae h..unhone suggest kiya ki main apna jo bacha hua term h woh ussi school mein complete kar sakta hoon..woh mujhe online classes ke liye enroll kar dengi..notes mail kar dengi..main ghar par pad sakta hoon..aap padayengi na mujhe ishimaa..phir next year hum yahan kisi school mein admission le sakte h..hai na ishimaa? adi replied
ishita is so happy to see such a matured adi and says
" mera good boy..kitna kuch mange kar liya..ab ishimaa ki baari he aapko kuch dene ki..maine suna hai ki juhu chaupati mein bahut acha street food milta hai..hum log wahan jaayein adi "
"yess...ishimaa m ready lekin ussey pehle i have one more surprise for you "adi tells her
he opens the laptop connects skype..ruhi comes online..
ruhi says " ishimaa..aap kaise ho ..main aapko bahut miss kar rahi hu"
ishita gets emotional and says " main theek hu ruhi..aap kaise ho bache..aap dadi ko zayada tang to nahi kara rahe hai.mera bacha ishimaa jald hi aap ko yahan laaygi betu..phir hum teeno ek saath honge"
ruhi gives her a flying kiss and says" i will wait ishimaa..love u and adi bhaiya"
she goes off line
ishita and adi go to juhu chaupati ..have street food..play in the beach..see the sunset and go back home
mrs. bringaza prepares dinner..they eat and then go to sleep tired and with a smile on their faces.

in delhi

toshiji prepares dinner for everyone except raman and shagun..when raman asks she replies that " main paraye logon ke liye khana nahi banati..jisse khana h khud bana kar gaye..aur haan aaj se neelu bhi chutti par 15 din ke liye..main saara kaam nahi kar sakti..jisse jo chahiye woh khud hi kare"
raman says ' maa shagun iss halat mein kaam kaise karegi..main kisi aur ko kaam par rakhta hu.."
toshiji says " iss ghar mein neelu ke alava koi kaamwaali nahi aayegi..hum bhi toh pregnacy mein kaam karte the..waise bhi ussey patthar thodi todna h.."
shagun comes and says " raman mummyji theek hi toh keh rahi he..thoda kaam toh main kar sakti hoon "
she thinks this will impress toshiji and raman

raman goes from there
toshiji says to shagun "mujhe mummyji mat bulaya kar..auntyji ya toshiji bola kar samjhi"
she goes from there
shagun mutters
' dekh loongi tujhe budhiya ek baar saari jayadat mere pass toh aa jaye.."

she starts making dinner and then ruhi comes and asks her to tell her a story..she goes to ruhi 's room ..ruhi again does lot of nakhre and masti..shagun is tired..comes back to her room and says yeh dadi aur poti ne mera dimag kharab kar diya..then her phone rings..she picks up..it is mihir..
Mihir says " shagun didi"
shagun says "itne sallon baad tumne mujhe didi bulaya h..kaise ho tum "
mihir says " didi kya aap mujhse milne aa saktae h abhi..mujhe aapse bahut imp baat karni he ..pls di.."
shagun is surprised and says " haan kyun nahi mihir main abhi aati hu "
mihir cuts the call and says shagun you are totally gone..ab tumhe koi nahi bacha sakta

next update soon
spoiler mihir joins hands with shagun..but he is helping toshiji..raman gets drunk again..shagun manoj expose raman angry ruhi raman go to mumbai


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