adi-ishita FF-aap akeli nahi hai ishima..part 7 on page 11updated

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Posted: 9 years ago
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hi guys..this is my first shot at writing an FF..so maaf karna koi galti ho toh.😉..this is based on the current track when ishita wants to leave the bhalla house and raman's life.this is from Adi's POV



Adi comes back from school .he is very happy. he has got A+ for the project he did in school.he wants to show it to his ishima first .he goes to her room and his smile fades away as he sees a teary eyed ishita who is packing her bags.he comes to her and says
"ishimaa aap ro kyun rahi he aur yeh bag kyun pack kar rahi he"
ishita turns away from adi and wipes her tears so that adi does not see her sorrows.
she says " kuch nahi adi..ishimaa ko chennai jaana h medical conference ke liye..aur woh aapko aur ruhi ko miss karengi na isiliye bus aankhon mein aansu aagaye"
hearing this adi smiles and says
"bus itni si baat ishimaa" "main ek idea deta hu mere school mein chutti start ho rahe h navratri holidays so main bhi aapke saath chalta hu..ruhi ka camp nahi hota toh ussey bhi le jaate..main aajtak chennai nahi gaya..hum khoob masti karenge..masala vada bhi khayenge..hai na acha idea ishimaa"
ishita is touched but at the same time she does not want adi to know about the truth so she says
"nahi adi tumhare football sessions hai na..woh nahi miss kar sakte na"..adi says " par ishimaa..."
ishita does not want to reveal more to adi so she says "mujhe kuch kaam yaad aagaya main abhi aayi" she leaves the room.
adi realises that there is some problem and ishita is not upset coz of her going to chennai.he thinks that he should talk to simmi bua as ishita and simmi bua are close to each other.
he goes to talk to simmi and is about to enter her room that he sees simmi talking to toshiji
that how raman has cheated ishita and now ishita is all heartbroken because of raman and now she is leaving the house.Adi is furious .

next part coming soon...guys pls do comment..waiting for it to start writing the next part😃

part2 updated on page 3
part3 updated on page 4
part4 updated on page 5
part5 updated on page 7
part6 updated on page 9
part 7 updated on page 11
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Posted: 9 years ago
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Hi dear!

Ok ... I absolutely adored Adi! He's such a sweetheart! Ishu ... she always thinks about others ... she wanted Adi's respect for Raman to stay no wonder she didn't spill the beans!

It was short but it was absolutely lovely! I'll be waiting for part 2!

Update soon please! & you wrote brilliantly for a first time writer! Keep it up ... I'm excited!
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Posted: 9 years ago
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Nyc write up... A good start for u n d story... Waiting for next part... Do PM whn update... 👍🏼
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Posted: 9 years ago
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Originally posted by: Badtameez_Dil_1

Hi dear!

Ok ... I absolutely adored Adi! He's such a sweetheart! Ishu ... she always thinks about others ... she wanted Adi's respect for Raman to stay no wonder she didn't spill the beans!

It was short but it was absolutely lovely! I'll be waiting for part 2!

Update soon please! & you wrote brilliantly for a first time writer! Keep it up ... I'm excited!


thank you dear for ur words..will update 2 nd part soon ❤️🤗
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Posted: 9 years ago
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Originally posted by: swatica.arora

Nyc write up... A good start for u n d story... Waiting for next part... Do PM whn update... 👍🏼


thank u dear..will PM for sure😊
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Posted: 9 years ago
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thank you 😊
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Lovely
Continue Soon
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Posted: 9 years ago
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Waiting for the next part... Update soonish..!!
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Posted: 9 years ago
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Its nice to see a story from Adi's POV...
Cont soon..
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Posted: 9 years ago
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Originally posted by: Akshata2010

Waiting for the next part... Update soonish..!!


pretty soon..working on it 😃 thank you

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