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Sushma

@SushSathisha

Rocker

+ 10

Posted: 10 years ago

#21

Originally posted by: super_cutie
Amazing shot yaar👏👏
Beautifully written
Thanks for the pm

thank u so much!

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Sunita

@avni_19

Rocker

+ 3

Posted: 10 years ago

#22

Heavenlyyy updateee!!! I loved it soo muchhh!! How I wished CVs took this piece in the serial. All that we wanted to see u included... The surrogacy scam, shagun's trick, the temporary separation, the leap of 5 years with their bundle of joy! Simplyy beautifulll!!!

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Sushma

@SushSathisha

Rocker

+ 10

Posted: 10 years ago

#23

Originally posted by: avni_19
Heavenlyyy updateee!!! I loved it soo muchhh!! How I wished CVs took this piece in the serial. All that we wanted to see u included... The surrogacy scam, shagun's trick, the temporary separation, the leap of 5 years with their bundle of joy! Simplyy beautifulll!!!

thank u so much

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Malvika

@mayraa

Dazzler

Posted: 10 years ago

#24

Wonderful OS Sush...👏

Really liked...

Shagun is always a bitch...

How can Raman peck her that too on her lip🤢

Loved the last scene very much😊

Anyways all is well when the ends well...

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Sushma

@SushSathisha

Rocker

+ 10

Posted: 10 years ago

#25

Originally posted by: mayraa
Wonderful OS Sush...👏
Really liked...
Shagun is always a bitch...
How can Raman peck her that too on her lip🤢
Loved the last scene very much😊
Anyways all is well when the ends well...

thank u so much!!!!

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nafnaf

@nafnaf

Rocker

+ 3

Posted: 10 years ago

#26

That was absolutely lovely and I agree that if only the same would happen on the show - I have not been watching it for a while now as it has been spoilt for me and am very disappointed with Raman but if the show becomes like this OS then even I will forgive Raman!!!!!!!!!!!

But your story was beautifully handled - brilliant!!!!!!!!!!!!

The writers of YHM need to learn from all you guys who write such amazing stories which make much more sense than the show does especially on this track!!!!!!!!!🤗

Please pm me when you write any more stories🤗

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Sushma

@SushSathisha

Rocker

+ 10

Posted: 10 years ago

#27

Originally posted by: nafnaf
That was absolutely lovely and I agree that if only the same would happen on the show - I have not been watching it for a while now as it has been spoilt for me and am very disappointed with Raman but if the show becomes like this OS then even I will forgive Raman!!!!!!!!!!!

But your story was beautifully handled - brilliant!!!!!!!!!!!!

The writers of YHM need to learn from all you guys who write such amazing stories which make much more sense than the show does especially on this track!!!!!!!!!🤗

Please pm me when you write any more stories🤗

thank u so much!!!

i really wish CV's had brains how to show what they want to say!

will pm you for sure!