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Posted: 10 years ago
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Hey am first... At first I thought a different ending but the ending which you gave was more emotional... Very nice story do write more of such shots...

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Posted: 10 years ago
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amazing!!!!!
i cried i swear!
so emotional and yet so beautiful!
i am just too overwhelmed!
thank u for the pm
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Posted: 10 years ago
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first scene was nice
next all was very emotional
keep writing like this
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Posted: 10 years ago
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No words
its awesum
sad and very emotional
last few lines stole the show
They will together in heaven
👏
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Posted: 10 years ago
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amazing amazing no words dear

just outstanding dear

you make me cry dear

every words i feel every emotion dear and hats off to you dear👏

their kiss on car while travelling was amazing dear

when ishita wake up search for his love raman was outstanding dear

when he near the last breathe he ask his forgiveness and thanks for coming in his life last minute also his joke,his smile and love you to her and want her to be always with smile was emotionally lovable words dear💔

unable to think anything think only raman her raman and her cry was just outstanding dear👏

finally you make his wish true dear

finally you send his jkr to him also dear

twins was awesome and final words by ishita was just outstanding dear💔

feel bad for toshiji and romi dear

symbol of our ishra love 😭😭😭

i always want ishra to be together but you make them together in heaven💔

anyways my ishra was together ever ❤️

while i typing crying like anything feel the pain of love by every words you used dear

its for you dear👏❤️🤗


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Posted: 10 years ago
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Out standing dear.👏
I cannot explain my emotions now I swear I cried a lot😭 while reading this piece of art.
Plz do write these kind of stories.
I was totally into the story plz do pm your works next time
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Posted: 10 years ago
#7
OMG so sad so emotional and so much love as well altogether in one OS - wow so beautifully expressed tears all the way😭😭😭
Poor babies left alone but if they are like their parents then they will be fine and will survive beautifully

Raman's dream of having a boy and a girl came true!!!!!!!

An extremely well written OS - well done!!!!!!!!!!!!🤗
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Posted: 10 years ago
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awesome so emotional i was in tears
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Posted: 10 years ago
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U made me cry yaar but tooo emotional something we learn from ur os just loved it
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Posted: 10 years ago
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This shot I don't know how to explain yaar
It made me cry like a hell😭😭
Very very emotional one
Brilliantly written
Thanks for the pm

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